Posts by «Growlithe»

"Uh.. sure.. He meowed uncertain.

Ooc: Hey you should make the clan.. so he can join. Just a suggestion c:

Aurorakit frowned. He always saw Hazelkit sad. Why was she sad? He asked himself, but he knew he couldn't find the answer within himself. He shifted his paws lightly as his mother snored. He rolled his eyes. She could sleep for moons, obviously! Aurorakit looked back at Hazelkit choosing between to ask what's wrong or stare at her like a stalker. Pfft.. this den is soo boring! All the kits were mean to him also. He was very small.

Cheetahpaw yawned, he was very tired.

Aurorakit decided to walk over to her. He padded to her. His redish pelt was dusty and his blue and orange eyes were on the ground. Nearly forgeting what to say. He'd knew he had a crush on her since he could remember. He parted his jaws to say something, but closed them again nervously. What am I suppose to say? He twitched his tail-tip. "Uuh.. Yo?" Yo? Who says 'yo?! He thought mentally hating himself for saying a stupid greeting.

"What's up? He asked, now with less nervously and more focus in his words. He felt small. Why was he so small? Why can't I be big as my father? He sniffed, his father was dead. He died from a monster, not anything evil or a creature under your nest, but a metal rectangle that can go faster than a Starclan cat. I've seen all of it, actually it was my first time in the forest. He thought.

Yeah.. I can see you doing nothing. He twitched his ear and licked his paw. What do I say now? He asked himself. He propped a leaf with his paw. Maybe a little game.. He flug it over to the shecat.

Aurorakit couldn't help but to laugh. "Your suppose to throw it back! " He meowed, with only amusement in his eyes.

Ooc: Sorry it's short!

Cheetahclaw watched the battle. Stupid Scourge, he killed everybody! His claws slipped out and let out a hiss. It wasn't your fault. He heard his sister's voice. She died in this battle. That was all he had left. Can he find love again?

He flicked her ear with his tail playfully. "Then, I shall teach you the ways of the leaf-catching-game." He meowed in a totally differwnt voice. He liked playing along. It was very funny.

I dunno.. at this time of day nobody's really on.

Cheetahclaw took one last glance at his dead sister. Rest in peace.. He padded back to Thunderclan, whatever what's left of it.

Hello thurr! I really need be really advance at roleplaying! And I need YOU to teach meh!
First off I need an advance roleplaying sample just to see you can actually advance roleplaying. Not that I don't trust you. Well.. I don't have to trust everybody..

I will pay FK if wanted. *

Sorry my mistake.

Gяσωℓιтнє ♥ wrote:

[align=center][font=times new roman]Cheetahclaw took one last glance at his dead sister. Rest in peace.. He padded back to Rainclan, whatever what's left of it.

Gяσωℓιтнє ♥ wrote:

That's great. I'll like you to teach me. c:

Mostly, yes, just in general and here's a sample.

Gяσωℓιтнє ♥ wrote:

[align=center]Aurorakit decided to walk over to her. He padded to her. His redish pelt was dusty and his blue and orange eyes were on the ground. Nearly forgeting what to say. He'd knew he had a crush on her since he could remember. He parted his jaws to say something, but closed them again nervously. What am I suppose to say? He twitched his tail-tip. "Uuh.. Yo?" Yo? Who says 'yo?! He thought mentally hating himself for saying a stupid greeting.

Cheetahclaw twitched his ears. "I'll be fine ,I guess I can cope." He shrugged.

Ok I'll try!

Blackpaw's shiny sleek black pelt rustled in the midday breeze.

And what do you mean by start a new line everytime your character speaks?

"Go ahead." He meowed dryly in his casual tone. He tail stirred the leaves.

Sure! And accepted.

Ok I get it now.