Posts by Dreamfur

"Exactly. Should we look around or stay put?"

Sacrifice slwed to a stop, listening intently

Dreamfur nodded. "Let's go then."

Sacrifice scurried onto a low hanging branch. Her pelt was ripped along her flanks. She had run into a group of rogues.

"Oh, just a friend." he barked as she followed her to the campsite

Ooc- I have no clue, lol. See, I havent read this so i don't know what's going on. I think what ill do it just say she was out hunting and there was fox or sometingm is that ok? And then a patrol can find her??

Sacrifice shrunk back. "Sorry, sorry. I just needed a place to rest for the night." Her swollen belly showed clear signs that she was expecting.

Cats Name:Scratch
Gender:Male
Alliance: (What Clan or Tribe is your cat in, or are they a loner or kittypet?): Rogue
Appearance(Must be realistic and include pelt/eye colour): Tabby tom with green eyes
Personality: Short tempered and very aggressive
History:Scratch and Sacrifice met when they were very young. She was beautiful, and he wanted her. Only prblem, she didn't want him. So he took her as a mate b force. Eventualy she ran away, and he hasn't been able to find her since.
Comments/Other: Is forceful mating allowed?? If not ill change that part

Yay!! And yeah, I wasn't gonna act it out. According to the plot its already done anf over with considering Sacrifice left :)

Sacriifice layed her ears back in fright. "a-Atttack?" She was in no condiston t fight. Her pelt was dull and dirty, and her bones were beginning to show.

Mystic's ears perked with the menton od medicine wolf. "Who will be the med wolf?"

Sacrifce began to tremble. By the looks of it, she couldnt out run the 'Clan cats' let alone beat them in a fight!

Sacrifice huddled closer to the other loner, greateful to him for protecting her.

Mystic's tail started to wag. "Could I give it a shot?"

Ooc--Kk!! Have fun!!! :P

She nodded. "Your probably right. I won't be much help if im all beat up." She barked. "Does anyone want to come with me to fine some herbs?"

Eclipsefur wrote:

Boo raced up towards Dreamfur, and leaped at the cat, aiming to pin her down as his jaws parted to aim a bite at her flank.

Dreamfur screeched and dodged quickly, racing away and quickly up a tree.

ooc- Yay :) So here's the re-write

Dreamfur lay in the mossy clearing, panting heavily. She was in so muc pain she could barely stay awake. She could feel the blood dripping from her sides. She could only prey to Starclan that a patrol found her soon

ooc- Beter??

Ooc- I love how you used taylor swift lyrics!!

Sacrifice, a ratty looking she cat, with orange and white fur and bright blue eyes, who's swollen belly showed clear signs that she was expecting, padded scaredly through the shadows. She had not a clue as to where she was.

Everkit bounded over. "Hey! Wait! I wanna come to!" The little black she cat was only three moons old, but she had the spirit of a warrior already.

Ooc-Thanks!!! :) And 'The underestimated just who they were dealung with, they should keep in mind there's nothing i do better than revenge' uts a bit different, but its called better than revenge by taylor swift :)

IC- Sacrifce scened other cats as well. She didn't dare to try and find them. She lay flat against the ground, squezzing her eyes shut and not moving.

OOC- I used to, but i just can follow it anymore lol

IC- Sacrifce opened her eyes and jumped up. She unsheathed her claws, but she knew she couldn't fight.

Everkit rolled her eyes. "Psh, what are you talkin about?" She sighed. "Yeah, I guess... Im only three moons, but I REALLY REALLY wanna go. Please?"