Posts by Panic!

@ evangeline--
You take the form, and fill it out with your order. (Ex- What danirequen replied with. xD)

@ danirequen--
Accepted! Adding!

Accepted! Being added!

1. What do you need help with? (Literacy, plot, and/or description)
A: I believe I need help with everything.

2. How advanced do you want to be? Semi-advanced? Standard? Uber?
A: As good as I can get.

3: Where do you think you are now, on a scale of 1-10?
A: I think I'm at like a... three or four?

Helllooo!

❝Strays❞ wrote:

[align=center]A small blue tabby walked out of the shed she was being housed in, along with her siblings. Occasionally she would hang out with her mom but usually she was found wandering around the camp. Only when huge crowds weren't up and about though, considering she hated crowds. Except believed there was nothing worse. However, that day hadn't been so bad. The sun warmed her silver fur, making her want to just lay down and soak it in, and rolled onto her back. Just as she had rolled to the ground, her eyes drifted to another kit, one who seemed to be... examining a rock!?

Except stood up and shook out her now dirty pelt and set out to see who this kit was. She usually remembered cats of her age, but this one didn't seem to ring a bell. As she got a little closer she decided it would be better to play a trick on him, the she-kit hadn't played one in awhile. She crouched down until her belly fur was scraping the ground and stalked toward the feline. A few mouse lengths away she sat down on her striped haunches and smiled.

"What cha got there?" Except asked, hoping the cat heard her.

I believe this is the highest one I've had recently, with very high muse.

Yeah, that one of the things I've realized I do a lot; repeat. I always find it hard to think of other thing to call something or other good words to replace certain ones. Thanks by the way. I know I'm a pretty good role player compared to others, but when I see some REALLY advanced posts, I feel like I write nothing. Like, with you and the eight thousand words... woah! I can only write about 100-150 words, and then gradually fall down to five sentences in four posts.

Trackie!

I never realized that you could take sentence and create a whole paragraph, or more, out of it. That means, if I took every sentence in that small post of mine and turn them into three or four, I would have two or three paragraphs in no time! It seemed like you and Pheonyx post over 1,000 words really fast, and then keep up a good conversation and the plot up.

I took the rp sample and added everything I could think of to try and make it better.

I think so. But just to be sure...

Like this?^^

Accepted, adding!

Sorry about the wait so far. I won't be able to get to my laptop until later today (about 5 p.m eastern time) and that's what I use to color and outline these drawings.

Could my fluffy kitteh join this awesome club?!

His names Space (or Spaceexploration) and is quite the dancer himself, even though he usually only dances when he's alone.

Ugg, sorry. I've been kinda flooded lately. I was thinking maybe you could help me get to 500/1,000 word posts? If not, that's fine. You've already helped me a lot :).

The petite black and white fold walked up to where Vertigo sat, looking up at the tom. Space was sure this was going to be exciting, and smiled a bit. He was sure it wasn't going to be him or anyone he knew that was going to be promoted, but the tom still had to attend this meeting to figure out who the new cats taking up these ranks were going out be.

Space knew he was late when he heard other cats cheering for their friends. The tom didn't want to look rude or mean so he cheered with the rest of the crowd, barely knowing who or bday he was congratulating for.

Okay! I didn't realize we were crossing into where you are already xD.
Yeah, that's fine. Do you mean like a role play thread where we go back and forth, but only for practice?

That's true. Hopefully it will help me get some muse, as well. And OK, awesome!

*Facepalm* SOOOO sorry! I guess when I had been gone for a couple days, I ended up putting this thread in the 'mark all as read' or whatever it's called, instead of seeing it in the mix of random threads. I found it out of luck while going through my bookmarks. I'm willing to continue with this thread, if you want to.)))

The small striped head of the she-kitten bobbed up and down as she agreed with the tom. "I would to. It would be more fun to have a shot at being leader then being the next medic." she sighed as she thought of being leader. It made her wonder if she would ever be the underboss, or even another higher rank. The young queen guessed she would just have to wait and see where her future took her.

(Okay! Yeah, sure.. I thought I had heard something about his parents, but I hadn't been sure what it had been. xD)

Sure, just give me a second! :).

Thats... um.. not the best xD.

[I wasn't sure how to start this so..]

A shiny rock rolled on the damp ground as a kitten's paw pushed it along. The sun blazed down on it, sending a bit of a glare, making the silver tabby pretend to be blinded. She fell to the ground, as if fainting, and rolled to her back. Doing this made Except think about her friend.

This was how the she-cat had met the other cat. He had been playing with this very rock.. then she thought about her other friend. A small ant named Gravity. The creature had acted just like the tom, so she thought the name fit him well. It hadn't seemed like it bothered the real Gravity at all, so the name was never changed.

"Hmm... whatever happened to my two Gravitys?" Except wondered a loud, but the words were barely audible. She looked around, hoping she would see the tom and that if she did, he would remember his long lost friend. The rock lay at her feet, completely forgotten for the time being.

(-Points- He spok... nope.. false alarm. xD.)

Suddenly, the cat's blue eyes landed on a cat that looked just like Gravity, or at least what she remembered him to look like. She was about to smile, but decided it would be better to go and make sure this was the tom she was searching for. Except got to her paws and began to pad over towards the one she hoped went by the name "Gravity." It hadn't been very long since she had last saw this cat, but she would be pretty embarrassed if she walked up to a complete stranger and asked him to play. I mean, better safe than sorry, right?

Only a couple kitten steps away, the tabby sat down on her butt. "Sorry, but are you.. Gravity?" Except asked, not knowing about his mute problem. She couldn't contain herself, either, at thinking that she had once again found her friend.

{It's fine. I just have muse busts at night usually (even though I start forgetting grammer and spelling)}

Except smiled big. She jumped up into the air and landed on all four of her paws. The she-cat couldn't believe that her friend had been found. She did, however, find it weird he hadn't talked ot her or at least said hi. Whatever, at least he.. had remembered her? Wait.. did he?

"Hey.. do you remember me?" she asked, not sure what to expect.