Posts by youtubeluvr

[[ now we play the waiting game ]]

Well, hello I put the main idea into the title but yes, I made a new clan and recently I was told from my old clan that it was boring (although, it was new so that is my excuse).

So instead of just going blind into this time, I would like to think of a good way to start it!

My only idea is for there to be some sort of disaster? Like some apprentices being attacked and/or killed by some unknown sources? I am not sure but if someone could help me think of some good ideas that would be nice.

Ah! Sorry I've always been terrible with genders i'm so sorry!

Ah phew, I might make the roleplay thread here soon? But I would like to get more people into the thread! So far there aren't to many people!

I really should have atleast joined the roleplay right now i'm horrible with upsetting situations.

//Hides in shame because I do really want to roleplay with you guys but I just don't know really how to enter\\

It's been awhile since i've been on this site, and actually today was the first time I saw anyone use muses!

Rivallie That would be really nice, thank you! I'm sorry if it is a bit annoying having to make a way for someone to enter in, but I really appreciate this! With bigger roleplays, I get alot more awkward about it, not sure why.

Ah, phew.

(quickly goes to the first post to quickly check my characters name, just so i don't completely embarrass myself. I think it's Hollowpaw?)

Thank you! He is accepted!

Also I was reading this and I couldn't help but question if we have our own Tigerclaw?

Ah, alright that is fine! ^^

Also if anyone want to help, I would like to think of a small plot for the beginning? I know this might be a bit of over-preperation but I don't want what happened last time to happen again ^^;

[[Oh jeez, back sorry! I was eating and forgot to put my reply ]]

Hollowpaw was lying close to the camps entrance, staying a distance away from most of the other cats, mostly since he did not want to be seen greiving. Even though something absolutley terrible had happened, he can not muster up enough emotion to be upset, he did not have that much of a relationship with the kit, or their mother. He did feel bad, who wouldn't though?

The apprentice decides that it was best to not think about it, the clan would probably get over it in a few days. He had always been quick to get past things, and it would sometimes confuse him when other cats seemed to have so much difficulty about it, although he had never really had something hurt him personally, so he could relate to anything from his own perspective. Although he is only an apprentice.
He is surprised when he sees the trio enter the camp, and probably even more when he is actually approached and talked to.

"oh-- well... There was a hawk.. and it came down to the camp and it took a kit! Fluffykit!"

Hmm... I think something that could be better is that we go with the plot in the first post? about the badger and such.

And to make it more dramatic have a few characters that were either close to them or related, like maybe one of their siblings or their ex-mentor

Pfff-- Alright! One second

(( Hollowpaw not Hollypaw ))

Sootstar is sleeping.

Hollowpaw sneaked out of the apprenteces den, being careful whilst stepping around, so he would not wake anyone up. Although there were few apprentices, he still did not want to risk it. He quietly peaks around camp, making sure there were few cats out in the open, before he quietly stalks out of his den and to the camp entrance.

http://feralfront.com/index.php?topic=2131694.new#new

Here you go! ^^

Hello there

Hollowpaw hissed lightly to himself, it was pretty early so he had suspected no one be awake. He pulled himself low to the ground, to where his pelt brushed against the grass below, he keeps his tail from moving at all, similar to a hunting crouch just a bit different. He decides to be quiet, just incase someone thinks he's a badger and decides to gut him like a fish. The apprentice very slowly edges his way to the camp enterance, before very ungracefully and loudly crashing into the groud and falling onto his face.

It looks nice!

Hollowpaw quickly attempted to regain his composure, and place himself back on his paws. But before he even finishes fixing himself, he is being picked up and put on his feet by the other apprentice. He cannot help but feel embarrassment pool up in him when Cougarclaw comes over and seems to start scolding him, and also Hawkfall he doesn't have to time to tell anyone hes fine before he start just rambling out apologies. "I-- I uh.. I was going t-to go out on a.. oh um i'm really sorry! Please don't h-hurt me I just-- I was going t-to go out and um.. I was looking for th-- the badger that... uh I um i'm sorry this w-was.. was really mouse-brained of me.." He continues on, just rambling and it has really just become jumbled to where you can't really understand anything of what hes saying, but it is very obvious he looks embarrassed and terrified.