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Character Name:
Koi
Character Age:
43 moons; 3 years, 7 months
Gender:
Tom
Alliance:
Loner
Rank:
N/A
Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Koi is a small-bodied tom, with a strange and long tail. His pelt consists of black, grey, white, and different shades of orange. His eyes are almond shaped, mainly orange with sometimes a greenish tint. His body is rather graceful and lean, muscular in some spots.
The left side of his body has many visible scars, along with parts of his neck. There is a long scar that travels from his hind leg up to his front leg. The back of his neck has several bitemarks and scratches.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
On the outside, Koi has a calm and down to erth personality. he is friendly with others and is willing to lend a hand to strangers if they're friendly. He is some-what talkitive, liking to talk about random things, such as the rain or prey. His normal speaking manner is polite and sometimes he uses big and strange words.
He takes a large liking to anything water related because he finds it calming. He likes to sit in his den and listen to the droplets of ran hit the roof over his head. He prefers these small things because it helps him think and remain calm.
On the inside he is a very fragile and dangerous. It's a rare occasion if snaps on someone. If that does happen, he'll attack anyone that appears hostile. When this happens, it's hard to calm him down and make him see sense. He considers himself slightly insane and paranoid about things.
He is very senstive about his past and refuses to talk about it.
---Likes (at least 3): Fish/water creatures, colorful things, water, rain.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Talking about death, heights, extremely hot weather, dogs, two-legs or anything that belongs to two-legs.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Swimming, fishing
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Fighting in high places, can't climb, can't cope with death, sometimes he snaps wildly.
History (8 or more sentences):
Year 1
"They shouldn't be here." These were the first words Koi heard from his mother when he was born. Of course a kit couldn't understand them, he barely an hour old. But he was intelligent enough to know that it involved him and his three siblings. Koi, Salmon, Trout, and Shrimp were all born in this order, on the outskirts of a city. All were proud, healthy kits that lived with their mother and uncle.
Koi was a cheerful kit, getting along well with his brothers. Being siblings of course they quarreled, but never fought without it being over tiny things. Their uncle Skye cared for them the most, after they were able to survive without their mother's milk. Ruby, their mother, hardly cared for the well-being of her children. She would leave everyday and return late at night waking her kits.
He often wondered what she did and one night followed her when his uncle and brothers were playing. He was led into a tunnel that was a camp for many strange cats. They fought viciously with each other and joked casually. His mother sat with a peculiar looking tom with many scars and a a cruel look in his eyes. The young tom kit was curious about these cats and tried to sneak in. Of course, he was caught by a cat that loudly shouted to everyone that a little kit had wandered in to visit them.
Koi tried to explain that Ruby was his mother and that he accidently followed her here. The she-cat quickly denied having any relationship to the kit and that he had probably heard her name when she had come along. She told them they may as well get rid of the nusience.
Fear struck the kit when she said this. He was barely five moons, unable to defend himself, especially against cats three times his size. He trembled, trying to escape for his life, only to be caught by a couple of cats.
They had no mercy in their eyes for some kit that decided to be their prey. One of them stared at him with a huge smile, giving him a scar that would haunt him the rest of his life. He earned several bitemarks and wounds from these cats until a cat stepped in.
The kit couldn't have been happier to see his brothers and uncle. His sibling hid behind Skye as he shouted at their mother. The she-cat visibly flinched against the tom she had been with. The other cats were clearly afraid of him, as they mvoed away quickly from Koi.
Skye looked gently at his nephew, telling Salmon, Trout, and Shrimp to stay close as he carefully picked up the injured kit. He left quickly with the kits as Koi fell unconcious from his wounds.
He woke in a new den, surround by his curious and very worried brothers. He was sore and was hurting emotionally and physically. The wound that cut him deepest was the betrayal of his mother. His uncle later explained that he is his brothers had been forbidden to have and that SKye left his leader position to protect his sister from punishment.
Skye began to train the kits at seven moons, when he though there were ready to learn the skills to survive. Hunting was the easiest for them, each of them had an area they were best at. Koi was strongest with fishing, although all of them were excellent fishers. Salmon was great with climbing tree and chasing squirrels. Trout was the fast and easily caught rabbits and birds. Shrimp, who was growing into the largest cat from being the runt, was able to catch most land prey easily.
Learning how to fight and defend was surprisingly easy as well. Shrimp had great determination to be the best and rivaled with his brother to be the best. He was indeed the strongest fighter, while Koi was the weakest. He preferred peace and being left to himself, and hardly excelled at beating any of his brothers. He could preform the moves well enough, but he didn't want to hurt his siblings.
Year 2
The brother grew into strong cats with many different skills. Koi strongly preferred the water and was the most graceful. He hardly bothered with his brothers anymore, distancing himself from them. He was close to his uncle, who still watched over them.
One day Shrimp suggested something to all of them when they were grouped up. He liked the idea of starting something he called a "clan". He explained the rules and said they would fight to see who would be leader. The death of a brother wouldn't mean the end of the fight, it would most likely be an accident. Neither of three other liked this idea much. They didn't want to end up killing one another.
Eventually they were talked into it, even Koi and Skye. The beginning of the duel began. It was a manhunt that would last for nearly 12 moons.
The day the face began was forever unthinkable to Koi. Skye, Koi, Shrimp, and Trout met up at the center place, as promised a few days earlier. Shrimp spread the news that unfortunately Salmon would not join because he had been killed in an accident the day before. Koi knew this was a lie and understood his brother meant to kill them. He felt the betrayal in his heart once again. His heart felt as if it had been ripped in two.
The cats unsheathed their claws, all understanding this would be a fight to the death. Trout was Shrimp's first victim. He was killed immediately, his throat slit in front of Skye and Koi. Shrimp went for his next target, which was Koi.
The tom barely understood what had happened to him at that moment. Something inside him snapped and he attacked with maddening strength. Killing Shrimp had been easy for the tom. He had shred his younger brother into bit in pieces. At that moment he had no remorse or regrets. A monster inside him had been unleashed.
His killing had not stopped with Shrimp. In the chaos he killed Skye, the one cat he considered his father and closest family members. When he recovered from snapping later, he wasn't the same. In his mind, something had changed. He would never fully trust another cat or himself.
Year 3 & 4
Koi led a very quiet life, avoiding anything to do with his past. He collected strange things for himself though. Over the next year and a half he collected bones from anything he killed and stored them with bones that belonged to his brothers and uncle.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
The ground was soft beneath Koi's paws as he padded from his den early in the morning. It had stormed that night, leaving the grass wet and muddy. The sun rose and the leaves on nearby trees glistened in the light. Koi took a moment to appreciate these little things.
When he was finished with enjoy his surroundings, he padded towards the stream to catch his breakfast. Perhaps he'd go for a swim as well. His paw hit the gravelly ground by the water, causing a pebble to make a tiny splash and making any fish close enough to hear it swim away.
The tom waited as the water calmed and the fish to swim back gracefully. Luckily the sun wasn't high enough yet for him to cast a shadow and he didn't have to worry much about that factor.
Koi watched as fish drew closer, giving him a chance to take a swipe. He unsheathed his claws, raising his paw slowly. Timing himself, he went in for the kill, managing to clip a fish and pull it out of the water. He smiled at his catch, heading back to his den to begin eating.
As soon as was finished, he grabbed a leftover bone and unburied a hole that was in his den. He dropped onto a pile of bones, smiling happily. He always added one part of something he killed everytime. Whether it was prey or not.
Comments (optional):
JQHF:HIHI Is this kind of history okay? Life I'm not breaking any rules or anything? :L I don't think I was, so yeah C: I ran out of muse towards the end, I apologise.