Posts by 5thpuppy

Occ. do you want to start where the unwanteds are on the bus and they think they are going to be dead soon? that takes place before they knew about it

Tanner was sitting on the bus. He couldn't believe that he was an Unwanted even though he knew since he was little. He looked around trying to see who else was an Unwanted and who was attached to the chain that cuffed his hands. In front of him he saw his good friends Maggie and Laura or how they looked to be called Magpie and Lark. Across from him he saw his neighbour Lucy. He didn't know she had any infractions. And behind him he saw a girl with brown hair. He couldn't place who she was without seeing her face but she seemed firmiliar. (Enna)

Magpie and Lark sat on the bus holding hands even with the cuffs on. Magpie and Lark had only one infraction singing and dancing but the twins didn't think anybody saw them. Magpie was the younger twin by only a minute and she was the one that came up with the dance. She loved it when she danced even though she knew she shouldn't. Lark the other hand was the one that sung more. She had a lovely mesmerizing voice and she could come up with lyrics in a blink if an eye. Both twins sing and dance and they are both amazing at it but each twin has a different feeling when they do their thing. Lark was scared for not only herself but her sister, their neighbours, and their friends. She didn't know what to do and even though your not supposed to talk when your on the bus she decided against it besides singing isn't talking right? She quietly sang a song to herself and her sister so quiet that the guards couldn't hear. It was soft and it helped calm the twins and remind them that they have each other.

Name: Lark
Age: 13
Gender:Female
Detailed description or picture: black hair that goes down to her lower back and has big blue eyes.
Personality: Lark s a brave witty girl who will do anything to make sure her friends and family are safe. Lark is also fun, smart and isn't afraid to stand p for wha she believes in. She loves to make people laugh.
Power: she can share shift into any bird. (Preferably a Lark)
Strengths (only three) can talk to birds when in human form, shifts into birds
Weaknesses: (at least one) she can't control her shifting so during a class she may just randomly shift. Normally shifts if surprised or scared
Theme song: (optional) Stronger (what doesn't kill you)
Classes: strength, speed, swordplay, music
Other:

Name: Tanner
Age: 14
Gender: male
Detailed description or picture: blonde hair that curls up. Green eyes
Personality: Tanner is a kind smart funny boy. He is very brave and will give himself up so others am live (if in a dire decision. He is fun and very caring.
Power: can draw something and it turns real ex. He draws a flower and he can grab it off the page and it becomes a 3-d real flower
Strengths (only three)Can draw doors to different rooms and walk through them to get to different places.
Weaknesses: (at least one) he can concentrate so hard on something for days and he won't notice anything else
Theme song: (optional) a million lives
Classes:Speed, strength, art, swordplay
Other:

Recap

Occ. I will also rp Mr. Today and anyone else of importance like the guards.

The bus screeched to a halt. It was outside the town of Quill and no one ever came that far except the guards and the Unwanteds. It stopped out side a big gate. The guards called for everyone to get off.

Tanner was scared he didn't want to die in the boiling lake of oil but that's what happened to Unwanteds like him. Has he got off the bus he said goodbye to everyone in his life in his head. Has he said each goodbye to his parents, his brother, his friends he tucked each Into a box. Once he said all his goodbyes he closed the ox, sealed in that put it in a far corner of his mind. He felt braver has he walked towards the lake, the lake of boiling oil, the lake that in a few minutes will kill him.

"Coming!" Called Icepaw happy to do something. She had barely been out of camp since she got out and it killed her to sit and do nothing while the clan continued.

Occ. where should I jump in? Also what class is going on right now

Ok both of mind will be in Speed.

Has the last of the kids got off the bus a man walked up to them. "Don't worry I can take it from here." He told the guards. "Ok then sir." Answered the guards and they closed the gates and got back on the bus which drove away. The man waited till the bus was out of sight then he said "hello kids I am Mr. Today I will be your principle at our new school!" He said all of it with a smile on his face.

"What school "Mr. Today" asked Tanner in a accusing voice. All he saw was the lake of boiling oil, a fence that goes all away around and an old crumbling grey building.

"Oh yes so sorry my apologies I keep forgetting that you still think your going to die." Says Mr. Today still sounding completely happy.

"W-we aren't going to die?" Says Larkin a hopeful voice.

"Don't listen to him he probably just wants to get our hopes up before he kills us." Says Magpie in a whisper to her sister.

"I wish we could start doing something soon!" Muttered Tanner to himself. He was fast but he wanted I be faster.

Lark also wanted to have some action but she still listened to the teacher and took notes.

Occ. who plays the teachers?

"Of course your not going to die! Here let me show you where you will now live that is if you don't want to die in that horrible lake, which I don't think you want to do." Says Mr. Today.

"Fine then Mr. Today show us this "FABULOUS!" School then" says Tanner not trying to hide the sarcasm. He was mad he had thought the exact same thing Magpie had said and he believed it with all his heart. He thought Mr. Today was some sicko who liked to trick kids into thinking they'll live then watching their faces has they died.

*slowly the dull grey place with the fence that surrounded it, the oil lake, the horrible stench, the grey crumbles building, all of it disappeared and slowly morphed into a place of beautifulness. Instead of the grey there was green plants with flowers, streams of crystal blue water, animals that were scary yet beautiful.*

"What did you do?"asks Magpie in bewilderment has she stared at the strange, beautiful, mystifying place that just seconds before used to be grey, dull, and boring.

"Magpie it's not real i bet it's just an illusion!" Accused Lark. She to couldn't believe her eyes and she didn't trust this guy and an illusion made a lot more sense then it all being real.

It's really good! I LOOOOVVVVE ITTT!!!!!! you should defiantly continue.

I also have the Same problems exempt mine is too many ideas and once I start writing I get bored. But at night I think of the main idea and I finish the main idea without lots f ideas and when i begin t wright I get bored

"P-p-perhaps he just wants to make sure we believe him so he gets to completely fool us before he kills us." Says Lark. She didn't believe what she was saying but she also agreed it was only commons sense that it was an illusion.

"Yeah that's probably it." Echoed Magpie.

"No this cant be real it defys all logic. It can't be... It can't be... It just can't!" Mutters Tanner fiercely to himself. He was so lost in thought that he didn't notice Enna beside him in her rant of anger. Tanner's whole world felt like it was turned upside down. He didn't like this Mr. Today, he didn't like this sicko, he didn't like the illusion. Heck! He didn't even like Quill but at least he knew what was real and what wasn't. He knew his brother Roger hated him. He knew his parents totally hated him for being a creative Unwanted. He knew lots of things that were real in Quill but here, he felt he was picked up shaken till his brain couldn't hold a thought for a second, then put into a magical land of fairies, and unicorns then asked if he wanted to live there for the rest f his life.

Have a great time, try all the rides, and make sure you spend your vacation time well.

"Sure!" Yowled Icepaw happily has she raced off towards the medicine cat. My sisters going to be a warrior soon! Chanted Icepaw in her head. Then she realized if she trained hard enough she also might be a warrior soon. "Hey Falconeyes am I well enough to go training?" Asks Icepaw with big pleading eyes.

"Why thank you that was almost getting out of hand and I didn't want to have to get Simber to get you guys to be quiet. So has I Was saying I'm not going to kill you, I'm not some sicko, I don't like injuries or death so now that you know that you can follow me towards the school, and I am not ne to judge so you can walk has far away from me has you like but please don't run away because then I'll have to go get Simber to go find you and he doesn't like be woken up from his sleep just to find some kid and. Don't think you want to be on his bad list." Says Mr. Today still cheery has he walked towards the school.

*has the group neared the school they saw an amazing statue of a beautiful women on one side of the archway and on the other side a cheeta which looked to have wings.*

"Who made those?" Asked Lark looking up at the beautiful sculptures.

"And who is this "Simber" you were talking about?" AsksMagpiehas she too also admired the statues.

Tanner realized now was his moment to run. The kids were occupied with the statue and Mr. Today was busy answering their questions. He slowly backed away from the group and when he reached ten paces he turned and bolted. Tears were streaming down his face. His emotions from the past years were finally being let out. He loved this place with its beauty and calmness but it made no sense how just minutes before there was a giant lake of boiling oil. Tanners whole world relied on logic and knowing he could do whatever he wanted even if there was consequences. Being in this world that had no logic, no cold hard facts, no way to defy Mr. Today without the fact that he still may die, we'll he didn't know how he would live. With all those thoughts running through his mind he stopped under a willow tree and wept.

"Okay!" MeOwed Icepaw the exciting thoughts still going through her mind.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Thank you so much!" Says Icepaw has she races towards her mentor while yelling "he said I can just no intense battle training!"

Tanner heard the voice calling after him but he didn't care. The willow tree was easy to climb if you climbed trees a lot. Thankfully he did. He quickly scrambled up the tree has far has he could go.(which was almost to the top.)

Lark and Magpie has seen their friend run away but they didn't want to bother him. They knew he needed to be alone so they just let him be.

"Everyone who hasn't ran away please stay at least until I show you your dorms." Says Mr. Today has he continues walking towards the school not even looking towards the place the kids disappeared. Has the group passed the statues Mr. Today looked towards the beautiful sculpted lady and said "Good morning Miss Fleur how are you today well I hope."

"Oh I'm just fine" replied the statue called Fleur. "Oh are these the new students? They seem confused with why I'm talking so they must be!" She says in a excited voice.

"Yes these are the new students and speaking about the new student Simber a boy ran off in that direction and a girl followed him if you could please bring them back that would be great." He says has he turns towards the cheetah with wings."

"Boy do kids like that tick me off." Grumbled the cheetah called Simber has he flew towards the place the kids ran off.