Posts by Owly

Ehh. I'm going to kill my friend. We're working on a lovely part (involving an assassin) and she has to leave.

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Yeah, I'd say so.

Actually, The assassin is our Main characters' sister. XD I love doing evil stuff like that.

Grrrrr, I hate it when I do that!

I hate it when I give stuff like that away.... Eh... Who cares.

Her name's Amaya, but my friend and I are too lazy to type that, so we nicknamed her Amy.
Do any of you ever argue with your characters? Because currently, Amy's pissed because we're attempting to make her kill her brother. We're so bad.

Name: Amy Pond(it's so fun to call her that, instead of Amy Williams)
Age:however the heck old Amy is.
Gender: female..
Species: human
Looks: long red hair and green eyes
Other: geez..... Um.....nothing

Doing evil stuff like that to characters is fun..... So long as they don't murder you for it later. XD

Riverpaw helped the kit up onto her back, before bounding slowly off into the forest. "awesome, huh?" she asked.

LOL! I tried to keep Mine as different from Eragon as possible, and obviously failed. *sigh*
Oh yeah. I argue with Mine all the time... My characters are annoying, because I'm sooooo evil to them.

Riverpaw smiled, shifting so she wouldn't fall off. "i can't wait either! It'll be great to have a denmate!"

*sniff* thank you! That's the best compliment I've gotten in ages! Thank you!

XD... Yeah, kind of awkward to argue with dragon gods.

Amy hates me. I made her attempt assassination on her brother.

My books are in good progress. Though I didn't write all day.... Because of destraction of our new CHICKS. Pippin, Merry, Eowyn, Precious, Frodo, and Bilbo.

Eh, sorry, bit off topic there. But anyway, Beyond the Woods of Lyond I almost finished and to the Editing Stage.
My book, The Ruby, is in pretty decent progress, considering I started it a few days ago.
And the only other book I'm working on, Everburning, is still in plotting/prologue stage. *sigh* I can't get all my ideas for it straight.

Maybe, but I probably wouldn't.....

Cats Name: Riversong
Your Name: Amy Pond
Clan: RiverClan

Ooh. I so want to do one on one battle.

I would make a REALLY bad Doctor. Sooooo...... Might not work.

Ok. And sorry I disappeared of the face of this forum for a few days. :)

Well..... It's a very interesting plot. My only advice would be to try and lengthen the chapters. They're VERY short. ;)

Ok! Awesome. We have someone. Ok, ANY of you who have watched the Doctor who up to the most Recent, have you heard the announcement? Rose and the One-hearted Doctor come back, and I THINK they're in until the Season Final.

Sentence: Morgana must have been able to read his face because her face softened.
Try: Morgana must have been able to read his face, because her features softened.
Reason: It sounded.... Awkward and confusing saying 'face' twice in that sentence.

That's really all I can find with reading this once. Great job though!

Its NOT bad.NEVER underestimate yourself. I, unfortunately, Haven't, and never had any help or support with my novels. I learned this the hard way. Just because it SOUNDS bad, doesn't mean that with a little improvement can't be made better.
I'm willing to help you, if you like.