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thanks a ton

okay, you dont have to, but I can wait :)

elliefang wrote:

Loner not Everlong tribe in the bios! Thats confusing since technically there is no ever long tribe! ;)

Lets see if it can be formed in character! It'll be more fun that way anyway! :P

It is in character. the thread is in loner territorries.

4, i like the origonal best.

The Animal I have Become-Three Days Grace
www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRLAyG3gKYg

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Never too late-Three Days Grace(yes, they rock and I am obsessed)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iQH668_eGzU

Macaw crouched in the undergrowth. His idol was a few tail-leangths away. He had followed her scent and found her. Macaw was partially obsessed with becoming the new ambassador after Kiyana retired (there is a girl in my school with that name...lol). He watched her every move hoping one day he would follow her example (do you want to be Macaw's mentor mystery?)

Rain pricked her ears, a cat was coming. She walked slowly in its direction and saw a she-cat coming their way. She approached it.

"Hello stanger, I am Rain of Everong, who are you and why have you come?" she questioned.

WOW! that is alot. Thanks so much. 2 karma coming right up!

Name: ~Fox~

Gender: ~Blessed was this male~

Alliance: ~This young male is a loner, an Everlong Tribe loner to be exact~

Rank: ~This is a calm apprentice, about 7 moons old~

Appearance:

Fox's fur is beautiful and thick, always glossy and clean. It's a sharp ginger kind of color, sandy yet somewhat blended. His pelt is blotched with white spots, giving him a fiery appearance. His nose has a white blotch on the left side, and his right eye is completely white. His body is more muscular than sleek, using his strength more than his agility in battle.

Fox's paws are large, far too big for his age. Yet they help him somewhat; his paws are great for fighting, but not the best for hunting. His claws are long and sharp, a deep beige color. His two front paws are a very dark ginger, while his two back paws are a creamy white.

Fox has large, bright eyes. They are the color of an amber stone; crystally and mysterious. They somewhat resemble a calm dominance; not arrogant but confident. His tail is unusually short and bushy, about half the size of a regular tail. It is tipped with a pearly white dip, giving his tail the look of a fox's tail.

Personality:

Fox is a fighter, there's no doubt about it. Whether he's on the battlefield or play fighting with his best friend, his body was built for it. He's calm, and he has a burning passion for it. Put those two together and a formidable opponent you will get in battle. His strength outweighs his agility, therefore he uses it wisely. He's not exactly the most agile cat, but he can run pretty fast when the time needs.

Fox is a thinker. He thinks about everything before he does it, which is how it should be. His daring personality does sometimes kick in though. His daring side kicks in when danger comes, which makes him risk his life for the smallest kit and take the hard but fun way out of things. He likes to have fun, but he is more of a serious cat than anything else.

Fox is shy. He is constantly trying to come up with new ways to greet other cats. Once you get to know him, he opens up. He gets especially tongue-tied in front of she-cats, though there is nothing wrong with what he does say. His nature is naturally quiet, which there's nothing wrong with. His learning is usually sped up because of this; he's a great listener, therefore a great learner.

History:

Fox has been living in the Everlong Tribe ever since he could remember.

Kithood - Fox's kithood was pretty simple, yet full of adventures. He was born in leaf-bare during a snowstorm. Fox was the first kit to be born in a litter of two, but the other kit was small.. really small. It died soon; the snow, the weather, and the shortage of milk being too much for it. Then Fox was alone. His mother took great care of him, and soon he was old enough to walk. He was never the naughty kit, always the quiet and nice one. But there was one thing that he did like to do, and that was playfight. He would usually pin the rest of the kits down because of his advanced moves at such a young age. Even his best friend couldn't stand up to him. By the age of three moons, he was a smart and good little fighter. Sometimes he would even join the playfights in with the apprentices. He was good at it, and was almost at the age of becoming one. His hunting skills came a bit later for him, as his large paws slowed him down; they weren't made for hunting. Fox and his best friend, Macaw, always stayed out of trouble, and soon grew into the age where apprenticehood began.

Apprenticehood - So far, apprenticehood has been treating Fox well. He's a bit more mischeivious though, getting in trouble quite a bit now. He isn't too shy either, though in front of cats he doesn't know he' especially tongue-tied. The day he became an apprentice, he had to sit vigil for the night; that same morning a hawk had attacked the nursery. It was a small hawk, but he fought it off by himself nevertheless. He was praised for his courage, and is now highly thought of in the tribe. His goal now is to become the best he can be, and serve the clan well enough to become a warrior.

special thanks to zinnie for doing this while I was picking trash at my job in the fair. Thanks Zinnie! ;)

7, not bad!

Light up the sky by yellowcard
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I do and I couldnt give 2 karma, only one, why?

Pain swiped in mid air, purposely missing, then he slid in attempt to trip Testa.

Rain looked on with curiosity at this cat, she was different than most she knew...Rain liked that about her.
"No, not really. That is unless you pose a threat. You see, I lead a tribe called Everlong here. We consist of loners from all over.We are not very big, only about 6 cats strong right now but we are growing. Would you like to join us? If not then be on your way."

OCC-You type fast!

IC- "Im sorry, sometimes I forget that so few know of us. Everlong began with Pain and I. We wanted a place to settle down and also to live with others as he sometimes tells us in his stories of ShadowClan. We based it of of what he remembers of it but do not plan to become as large as they are. We need cats though because we do not want to apprear as weak to them once we meet. Our beleifs and social structure is very different as well. We only ask that you join and help us, through this beginning stage of Everlong's life. To do so I must test your fighting skills to determine yyour class, as of now that is how things work. Pain is testing two others nearby. If you do not wish to join then leave, or Ill make you leave. If you do betray us once, you will go. What is your answer?"

Confused a bit by her antics she spoke "I was not from a clan either. And from the He? I suppose you have a problem with toms? Yes, there are toms her but not as many. Plus, " She grinned slightly. "They have to do what I say." Rain looked into the cats eyes confused at what she saw, this loner seem reluctant to join because of the males, what had happened in her past.? "About the sparring, we can if you wish, but I do not want any unnecessary violence, if you wish I can show you the camp."

"Good! Ill take you there, it is only a short walk. By what they have to do what I say is merely beacuse I lead this tribe. It is my decision to fight another group of cats, or just one. It is my desision to attack another for territorry or not, it is my desision to...well you get it by now. I run the whole tribe. If I dont like something, it ends. I think you will like it here. My Son, Fox, should be back, I will introduce you to him first. Oh, and you must meet Kyana(Spelling may be wrong) when she comes back. from patrolling the forest!"

Soon the cave where the tribe slept was in sight, a reddish young tom nearby.
"Fox! Come here please!" Rain told him, he came over as told and sat down in front of her.
"Yes Rain?" He asked.
"This is...erm...what was your name again?"

"Hellow Eve, I am Fox, pleased to meet you, Rain, can I go with the next patrol?" he said.
"Ask Pain once he is done testing the others." she replied
"Okay, thanks mom!" He walked off and glanced at his father testing the two new cats. He soon layed down again and groomed his fur.
"Ill take you to the cave, it is where we sleep, separated by walls. We sleep by rank, Apprentices in one area, Queens and kits in another, Warriors in another one and so on. There is not to much else here besides that but we also relax and kep guard in the clearing around it. Do you have any questions?" She was sure this cat had something to say, thugh I bet none involved Fox. Sh felt some sort of resentment to him...but why?

OCC- sorry windsong, but this is no place for a riverclan cat, sorry. If you make a loner you can rp in this spot. and Zenoah, I dont mind, its Roxies decision.

EDITED
"Eve, this is Gorham. Are you alright? I see your point but you seem angrier than I would expect from that. You want to go to my den and rest for a moment? or stay outside.? I can explain in either place."

OCC- Well I guess you can, but I dont see why a riverclan cat would be so ar away, or how it even got there.