OOC: Sorry about this, but a few things have changed. Making a new thread for this, I re-did a few things.
http://warriorcatsrpg.com/index.php?topic=761117.15 Remember this is a Semi-advanced clan, so at least a paragraph per post.
~Changes~
Twistedstar - now Shatteredstar
TwistedClan has two deputies (Which are voted for leader once the leader dies)
TwistedClan has about four medicine cats due to the large size of their den- the barn.
OOC: Thank you Daggerfoot for that, you make my job much easier. <3 And yes, Awesome, there are multiple meds, and you must write in paragraphs (Of course, small ones can happen here and there.)
[fancypost bgcolor=; border: 0px; width: 500px; font-family: georgia;][justify]Quiltedblanket padded into the Medicine Cat Den, Sageleaf can handle the twisted leg. She sighed as she stepped into where the herbs were stored. Always very particular with how they were organized, Quilt organized it into small piles, new herbs in back. Everything accounted for, she ran was eyes over the stocks, except for the borage. She stood up slowly and exited the den, she called back gently, "I'm going to go fetch some more Borage, Sageleaf. We are running low, it would be a tragedy if anyone runs low on milk or develops a fever." She chucked softly as she left.
Quiltedblanket broke into a light jog, though it was unlikely they would need Borage at the moment, it was always nice to have a steady supply, to always be prepared in case they absolutely needed it. She noticed the small blue flowers of the herb, "Found you." She smiled as she gently picked a good bundle. She trotted back to camp, not a care in the world.
OoC: If you still need me to mentor Vortexpaw (I think, sorry if I got it wrong, I don't really want to go all the way back to page one to look D:) I would be glad too! :) I really appreciate you asking instead of telling, though. It was nice since a lot of people just force things upon others xD[/justify][/fancypost]
OOC: If you'd like, it'd be wonderful for you to train Vortexpaw. ^.^ Thank you Quilt!
OOC: Sorry to say, but this is preferred paragraph/multi para only RP. That's the only real rule. Fill out: (Example)
Name:Kane/Abaddon
Age:24
Personality: While Kane - despite his name - is a friendly and lovable, loyal cat.. His other personality is not. Abaddon is an evil, and merciless cat. His nick-names rang form: Diablo, Nightmare, Lucifer, and Blade.
Appearance: Though the two have different personalities, they do share a body. Kane/Abaddon is a nightmare black tom, with (to Kane) unussualy sharp claws. While one eye, on the left, is light blue, the right is a dark green. They share scars on them. The scars are barely visible- healing over time. The most noticible is the one on the right eye. Both cats are small, about the size of an apprentice.
Rank: (If clan cat. Forbidden allowed) Loner
History: Born to a family of four, having one litter-mate - Chaos. Oddly enough, an albino cat born from two black parents. Over time, because of Chaos' inability to hunt, their parents started paying all attention to him. While Kane didn't care much, he lost it when they picked Chaos up and moved. Kane hated them. Over moons, this hatred kept building up. But, on this one day, poor Kane had fell from a tree. Not a big deal- but his head had hit a rock. From the impact, it pushed the hatred deep into Kane's sub-conscious, forcing him into split personalities.
Kane sat at the edge of a crystal clear, blue water. A light purr emitted from his throat as he looked into the stream; spotted a fish, he would unsheathe his claws. I still do not understand how they got so sharp.. Maybe I sharpen them in my sleep? He laughed lightly, wondering. Slashing his claw inside of the stream, he picked out a fish.
Pushing the fish to the ground beside him, he frowned as the fish died from being out in the open; whispering his thanks to StarClan for the meal, he would bit into the fish. Gulping it down in hungry bites, he dug a small hole and pushed it inside.
Still hungry, the male would open his mouth, and prick up his ears, to try and get a scent or sound. Hearing a light rustle in the bushes, he pounced. Snagging a fairly large mouse, he broke it's spine with ease. As he began to eat the mouse, he twitched as the warm, crimson blood stained his fur.
Running back to the stream, pushing his muzzle and paws in. Loosing balance and falling in, he would hiss and climb out. Shivering, he would roll back onto land and cough; jumping to his paws, the cat would slowly start to walk to his 'den.'
As he arrived, it was clear the 'den' was in fact a barn infested (if you'd like to believe finding one with very little effort infested) with mice. Jumping in through a broke window, he would fall as he reached a small pile of hay in the middle of the floor; purring, the cat started to curl into a tight, black ball and close his eyes.
OOC: Note: You obviously don't need to do so many paragraphs, but at least one would be appretiated.Thank you. 
The tom twitched; he could feel.. Eyes watching him. Shooting up, he glanced around quickly. "W-what?" He meowed ever so lightly. Looking back down, he would softly paw the hay from under him, and lay his head back down, "Only.. A suspicion.." He thought to himself. Closing his eyes once more, he wiggled around. Unable to sleep, he would jump up, and hiss, "Alright, who's there?!" Breathing heavily, he fell onto his stomach.
"Alright, I'm just.. Hearing- seeing things. Alright, maybe a little hunting and I'll go to bed." He nodded. "I'm sure that.. That I'm just hungry!" Smiling, the black cat would drop into a hunters crouch. Stalking forward on an unsuspecting mouse, he leaped. On-top of the poor, dead mouse now, he would have broken it's spine by now. Biting into the mouse, he quickly gulped it down with few hungry bites.
The moment the splash of orange entered his line of sight, his claws unsheathed. Realizing that the fox pounced at the two, he leaped at the fox with magnificent speed. Obviously, the fox would have pinned the small leader with ease, but Shatteredstar wasn't going to try and pin the fox. Instead, he slashed at the fox's eyes. At that time, though, the fox had rammed it's shoulder into his chest.
Falling to the ground, Shatteredstar would hit his head quite hard on a nearby rock. Blood now oozing from the nightmare black colored leaders head, he twitched lightly. Though barely hanging on to consciousness, he forced himself to both paws.
Letting out a small growl, he would hiss, "You're really annoying.. You and all of you other fox's..!" Stepping to the side - for the fact he was still dizzy from the hit, he would balance quickly, "C'mon, I'm not done with you yet, Fox!" He challenged.
OOC: Sorry about that, Quit. ^_^ Me and Waterweed must finish this! 
Dropping to a crouch once again with unsheathed, long black claws, he would glare at her. "O-oh.. Another cat." Forcing the claws in, he would seem slightly less cautious. "What brings you to the barn?" He purred with happiness. As he would lick his claws, his eyes spied a mouse.. Or a dozen, "You hungry?" He smiled at her. Well, he seemed.. nice enough. Alright, what was the catch?
Curling into a ball, he fell to the ground beside him, "Catch all the prey you want- as long as you don't move clan cats into my barn without permission, or lead other loners and rogues, you're alright with me." He nodded. Relizing what he said, he began to laugh, "Forgive me, I don't feel like myself today.. I just havn't been feeling very well."
Letting out a pout before he dozed off once more, he would meow, "Oh, and by the way, the name's Kane." Oddly used named; some would believe the name was too.. Evil? Yes, evil could be the word- for this cat. But, he might have been the nicest cat anyone's met.
Climbing on-top of the squealing, and twisted, fox, the leader would sink his evilly sharpened claws into the animals chest; ripping downwards, he would reveal a few bones. The fox- now coughing up blood- would lay limp in the two's eyes.
Huffing lightly from the fight and damage, he let out a small hiss (Though unintentional) to Waterweed, "Come, Waterweed!" He said in his - almost never used - annoyed and impatient voice. Calming down after a second, he smiled, "Help me bring this big ole' beast back to camp, wont ya'?" He purred.
Nudging her lightly, he laughed, "C'mon ya' lazy bum!" He picked with her. Gripping the fox's neck with his teeth, he would slowly start to pull it into the direction of the clan.
OOC: Alright, I just want everyone to know: Thank you for everything. No, I'm not leaving. But, I would like everyone to keep contributing to the clan. Who all would someday love to have this clan an official mini-clan (Like Cyclone Clan?) and be able to say, "We were the first!" Wouldn't that be great? So I- as leader of TwistedClan - do promise to contribute the most to this clan. I hope everyone does the same, and hopefully are able to tell a few friends. May StarClan light your paths! ;)
With a light purr as he licked his ear, it seemed to calm him just that much more, "Oh yes, great leader Waterstar." He joked. Pulling the fox back to camp, he licked her ear in return from earlier, "Just place it in the fresh kill pile tonight. Along with that, I would like you to arrange a few more patrols to hunt out in Storm Forest. Hopefully- if we can get some owls- we can have a nice little feast." He nodded.
Doing as she says - with no excuses - he padded to the cave that led to the main camp. Sliding down the 'hallway,' he would walk to the medicine cat's den, "Anyone help me fix this?" He smiled. Obviously the bump on his head had made him a little.. dopey at the moment. Closing his eyes, he would sit down.
Name: Frostkit
Age: 5 moons
Rank: Kit of TwistedClan
Sex: Male
Personality: A very sadistic and crazed kitten he is, being a lover of blood (though not a cannibal) he sometimes even freaks out the mightiest of warriors. He is mad, even for TwistedClan.
Looks: A small icy white tom cat. Taking after his adopted father in size (Though the two are not blood related.) While he is only a kit, Shatteredstar does have small, special lessons with him.
Family: Father - Deceased/ Mother - Deceased / Littermates - None/deceased / Adopted father - Shatteredstar / Adopted mother - None at the moment.
Mate/Crush: None
Extras: This kit has thought about becoming a cannibal. Though he's not, he'll gladly rip off the skin of an enemy.
OOC: Sorry, I thought I should have added age and family. ^_^
Frostkit- padding from the nursery- laughed widely. "I smell fox!" He yowled. His voice was slightly high-pitched. Loner named being Blizzard because of his white pelt, he wanted to be renamed Frost, for reasons only known by him. Scampering up the 'hallway' with ease to the outside camp, he would leap onto the fox.
Rolling around on it, he would get blood all over his beautiful white coat. "Ah! Everything looks so much better in blood!" He grinned widely, twitching. "Everything, everything~" He paused for a moment, and started to laugh once more.
OOC: Also, this is a character my friend created, and he was wonderful at him. Asked him for permission and he said I could use him. :3 Plus I need someone else besides Shattered. XD
Lapping the blood while the kit litterly played hop-scotch in the fox's chest cavity, he stopped only to look at Waterweed, "Waterweed!" He meowed. "When can we eat? I'm so hungry! I just want to taste the warm, juicy crimson liquid slide down my throat and all over my body.." With another small puase, he laughed, now rolling inside of the chest.
Shatteredstar - who was just a moment ago waiting to be treated - was now simply asleep. His two eyes closed as he laid on the rocky area. Though, most of the TwistedClan cats, usually after four moons, gets use to the rough area. This was also why TwistedClan cats probably had the sharpest claws; many cats, including Shatterestar, would sharpen their claws on the walls, stones, boulders, or floor.
Fostkit made a slight pouting noise. Leaning towards the entrance of the second camp, he would scan the camp for anyone else. Leaping out from the body, he would grin. Running to a bit of fresh kill, he would gulp down a still warm mouse.
Shatteredstar would purr in his sleep. Slowly, the wound from earlier would slowly heal. Without medicine cat treatment, it would take at least a moon for the wound to heal. Hopefully Sageleaf or Quiltedblanket would be there soon.
OOC: Softleaf, as we've said before, you have to 'at least' do a paragraph. Also when DID I accept Softleaf?
OOC: Then you should understand that this is a semi-advanced clan, correct?
OOC: Alright, just remember a paragraph. So, at least four lines.
Shaking his head lightly, "I'll have to agree with you on that one.." Glancing to her, his own two different colored eyes seemed to darken. "I prefer to work alone to.." Laying his head down on his two front paws, he would look outside.
As soon as he began scanning the weather, it seemed that dark, black clouds began to roll in, "A storm eh..? Odd.. It was such a nice day." He purred. "Oh well.. A storm will do wonders for everything." He nodded lightly.
Taking the time to stand and stretch - oddly not tired anymore - he would pad over to the broken window. Leaping onto it, he was thankful no glass stabbed his paw and pads. Watching the weather outside as it slowly grew worse, and worse, and worse- with each passing second.
As lightning whipped across the sky, it's loud companion boomed afterwards; when he heard the thunder, the cat would fall backwards. Terrified to High Heaven of thunder - for reasons unknown - he would usually hide. In this case he had run to the she-cat, shivering behind her.
His fur, already bristled with fear and annoyance, slowly started to flatten, "Because I hate the sound." He admitted. "I just plain, right out hate it!" Digging his claws into the ground below him, he would pull back as her heard another boom of thunder. He hissed. "I swear, I can stand it when I can actually see the lightning!"
Getting far away from all widows, he would hide under a fairly large stack of hay. "I hate these thunder storm.." He shivered once more. Hissing loudly, he jumped out from the hay, "O-ow!" he growled. Glancing down at his right paw pad, it would appear he had stepped on something sharp in there..
Pushing his head in, he gasped at what he found. Shooing away all of the hay to the side, he would discover a small pile of claws and teeth. "W-what are these..!?"
"Kittypet?" He tilted his head. "What idiot would come out in this storm?" He spat. His generly nice personality seemed gone.. And, as Kane saw that she was about to poke the teeth and claws, he sighed, "You're going to.." He paused.
Seeing the blood blossom from her paw, he began to twitch. His claws unsheathing, his eyes darkened to the point of grey blue, and grey green. Abaddon growled lowly. Though taking a slight liking to the cat for her 'daringness,' even if it was just barely, he didn't try attacking her.
Stalking outside in the large thunderstorm, a large grin was then planted upon his nightmare black face. Swiftly running under the cover of a nearby tree, he would climb it with ease; waiting, he would glare at the kittypet. "Say your prayers.." He laughed as he leaped at the kittypet, claws outstretched.
"That'd be nice, Sageleaf." He nodded, a low purr emitting from his black furred throat. "I want to guess.. Poppyseeds for pain relief maybe?" He tilted his head. Though a warrior, he at least knew the.. Basics of medicine cat herbs and remedies. "Heh, next time I should take you out for a patrol, eh?" He nodded, pushing his claws into the floor. Sadly, his claws were.. Dull at the moment, and never really penetrated the stone.
And your half a soul you shall get, my friend!
OOC: Always accepted, Sage. ^^ Just jump on right in.
Lapping the poppy seeds from the ground, he let out a purr of satisfaction, "Wow, I feel pretty good!" Jumping up, his legs would shake lightly, "Infact I feel.. Whoa I feel.." Falling to the ground, he landed with an 'Oof.' Laughing, he slowly closed his eyes, "Thanks..!"
Frostkit would tilt his head, now beside his adopted father. "Can I play too?" He pouted. Climbing onto his adopted father's back, he would purr, "I promise we wont be painted with red!"
