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She led her brand new apprentice into a clearing and sat down. "Do you know how to do a hunters crouch?" she asked.

She led him to a beautiful clearing, scattered with bushes and occational trees. A rabbit hopped into sight, and she dropped into a crouch. She sprung on top of the rabbit and snapped its neck.

She eyed the leader causiosly.

Ok

"Lets bring it back to the camp. I'm sure the warriors will appreciate it."

"OK. Crouch down, spreading the weight evenly on all four paws, and keep still. Once you see your prey, slowly creep forward, keeping the same height of your body. Once close enough, put all the weight on your haunches and spring foward, landing on the prey, then snap its neck." Spiritstorm mewed. "Here, I'll show you," she said, dropping into a hunters crouch. As a mouse came into sight, she crept forward and pounced. "Like that," she said through a mouthful of fur.

"Darn. It never works." giggled Flo. "Watcha doin?"

"Ya. Why cant we just be friends today? No fighting, No making fun. Lets ask Redscar what he wants to do." She turned to Redscar. "What do you want to do? Do you want to go hunt, or something else, or do you just want us to leave you alone for now?"

"Perfect," she purred. "Now why don't you see if you can catch something? I'll wait in this bush so I don't distract your prey."

OOC: um snowclan but if their not in the same clan it can be forbiden love and they are meeting on the borders and at fourtrees

OOC: PAGANNIGHT!!!!! can you PM her or something? or him

Character Name: Spiritstorm

Character Age: 14 moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: Snowclan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Spiritstorm is a beautiful silver ticked tabby with green eyes. Her narrow face is one thing that creates her evil-looking figure, and accociated with her longer nose, cats run in fear. She is muscular in her back legs, from hunting, but the rest of her is rather skinny; her ribs poke out of her thick silver pelt, even though she eats well. Her muzzle is slightly longer than most cats, so it helps her smell other clans and outsiders very well, making her a helpful warrior for her clan. Her tail is thin, and patches of fur are missing in some places from the sharp thorns she often hides in. A large, deep scar slices across her broad chest from a badger attack earlier in her life.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
Even though her nose and face look "evil", Spiritstorm is acctually a really great character who would die for her clan. However, Spiritstorm is very moody and likes to sneak up on people. She is somewhat of a "Know-it-all", and hates it when someone corrects her. She gets in arguments a lot and often ignores cats she doesn't like, which is most of them. However, she is very calm in serious situations and does not worry easily. In these types of situations, she is probrably the most helpful. She is also very modest, (maybe a little too modest), because when cats thank her and congratulate her, she glares at them and walks away.
---Likes (at least 3): Hunting, Laying in the sun, climbing trees, and long walks through the woods.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Most cats, patrol, and Shadowclan.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Hunting, Fighting, Hiding, and sneaking up on other cats.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Climbing, bright lights, and swimming.

History (8 or more sentences):
Spiritkit was born in the woods, with a slight limp to her front right leg. That cleared up after three weeks, but her leg is still weak to this day, making it somewhat difficult to fight. She was born with her sister, Pearlkit, white with green eyes. Her mother is unknown, because she left the area right after giving birth and leaving her kits in Snowclan. Spiritkit and Pearlkit were accepted by the clan and later named Pearlpaw and Spiritpaw. One day, the two went hunting alone to impress their mentors, and met a badger on their way. Hungry, the badger killed Pearlpaw instantly and went for Spiritpaw, but instead gave the scar she has on her chest today. Terrified, Spiritpaw raced back to camp, carrying her sisters body in her teeth. Later that day, she was made a warrior for her show of bravery, loyalty and cunning.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
Spiritstorm crouched in a large juniper bush, her eyes locked on a plump vole. She stealthily crept forward, careful to keep all her weight spread evenly on all four paws. Once she was close enough, she settled her weight on her haunches, preparing to spring. Suddenly, a rustle scared the animal, sending it scurrying down a hole. "Curses!" she muttered under her breath. Who scared her prey? Her eyes scanned the trees, searching for a guilty cat. A glimse of white and black answered her question. "Who's there?" she growled. The cat would pay - to her and whoever's lunch that vole would have been.
Comments (optional):

"We are about to go hunting! Right guys?" Spiritstorm mewed to the new cat, looking around.

um which clan r u in?

Ok it's done! (Fingers crossed) ;)

"Oh Starclan yes! I've been hunting ALL day!" She mewed, flopping down on the rock

Spiritstorms face fell. "I knew this would happen!" she sobbed.

Ok I'm done! The only thing I couldn't find was the missing apostrophe... Would you mind telling me where it is?

OOC: ya i no thats just how shadowclan rolls...
"Thank you!" Spiritstorm exclaimed.

"I know the perfect place! Follow me." Spiritstorm said as she led them all into a clearing. "There's a huge rabbit colony living here."