Posts by Kursze

[br]I am a scraggly pelted tom with deep-looking eyes and sharply pointed ears and a long scar across my left eye.I may be looking ruff for the age i am,but i may be oversensitive and i am highly scared of spiders.[br]My parents were killed by a pack of dogs while they were protecting me. They finnaly ended up dying,and the dogs took me in their den. They scratched my left eye so i can no longer see of that eye. Then,some SnowClan cats came to save me,because they wanted to chase the dogs off. They carried me to Snowclan,where i am standing right now.

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Death is no need to be feared if there is afterlife.

Can any moderator or admin please accept me in the clan? I'm a 8 moons old apprentice,named SparrowPaw. My char looks like my avatar exept for an additional scar on the left eye and no amulet.

Sparrowpaw walked circles around the camp. He knew the giant dog would be back,and wanted to be the first one to spot it. His deep scar in his back leg was even more painful due to an in-skin infection. Even medecine couldn't pass it out. Finnaly he stopped,hearing a growling. He was thinking it was the dog so he wanted to go away so bad but finnaly spotted a female rogue behind a tree. That was the growling sound...

Sparrowpaw is standing in front of the Silverpelt,on the summit of one of the highest mountain in the Snowclan territory. He wanted to be alone. Alone. He didin't care if the frost on the peak was chilling him to the bones,or if the hail falling out of the sky was scratching his head like claws...He wanted to be near his loved one.He needed to stay near his beautiful Dawnsong. Forever,maybe he will stay there.He didin't care anymore...

Y'know,said Sparrowpaw. Even if I'm a young apprentice, i wanna be a warrior so bad...bu my selfish mistakes really plays in the role i play in the clan...I just want to impress the leader and show that I'm not just a troublemaker. I haven't catch any prey from the start of newleaf,let a poor Shadowclan kit die from the dog only because i was scared and i brang it on our territory...I'm just brigning bad news to the clan.I'm tired of this...

Ah..I was just walking around camp for a single walk and venomclaw jumped in.

Sparrowpaw looked at the morning sky and whispered:I have nothing else to do here...but I'll be always near you,Dawnsong...,as he padded through the deep snow of the summit to go down and return to the camp until someone sees that he is missing.

Sparrowkit: Quiet dark gray tabby tom kit with small white patters. A little secretive ,but can be overreactive,but is really playful and generous.
Age:3 moons.

IC: Sparrowkit was walking in rounds in nursery,because he was bored. He saw Lightkit and asked: Lightkit,can i play with you? I'm bored...

After going down of the mountain after his talk with Starclan,he heard battling noises of fury,and heard also ScarletFlower's cry. He runned to the sound for a minute then being pinned down by one of the most muscular DarkClanner. He tried many attempts to scratch his throat or eyes,but ended pitched on a tree,his front paw hardly knocking on it. He standed to fight.

I'm just bored,so... :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :) :) :) :) :) :) . . . . .
DATA OVERLOAD!
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And then i go boom.

Sparrowpaw finnaly reached the bottom of the mountain. He shaked his fur off all of the snow.He reached the tiny river that poured through the earth. I should really think of hunting a bit...,he thinked.But I'm so bad at hunting that I'm not gonna catch anything and rise any doubts.,he thinked again.

OOC to poke: I thought you said a sweat not sweet lol.
OOC to alex: Okay.

An intersting game...,he said as he smiled. But we need to get outta here.,he whispered. Maybe wait for mom to go to sleep.

Could i be the brother? My name's gonna be Sparrowkit (I just love that name :3)

Name: Sparrowfeather.
Appearance and personnality:Sparrowfeather is a small and weak dark gray tabby tom. He has white front paws and muzzle. he has a long scar asross his left eye. He is a friendly,non-judging friend and is pretty smart,enough to figure out how to follow someone in creative ways without being seen.Oversensitive and sometimes unforgetful,he can walk away any discussions if it talks about him.

Sparrowfeather walked across the flowery field as he smelled. Flowers,bees,fresh sprouts...then he scented a harsh smell of a lonely animal. He could smell that the animal was alone in the field. He walked up a hill and spotted a light ginger-colored shape through a forest of trees. He walked to it,not knowing he would leave Snowclan territory to end up in Thunderclan territory. he smelled the borderline,but the she-cat had a slightly differet smell. He walked across Thunderclan border.

Sparrowpaw was coming back from training. He hated training with Venomclaw. His training were always too harsh and tuff for his young,fragile body. But what he hated the most was returning from training or hunting. Because no one was ever giving him attention. Even not his denmates. The only cats who were caring of Sparrowpaw were the elders,and they cared cause they always asked themselves how a weak warrior like him would be able to protect the clan. As he padded to the apprentice's den,he spotted Dawncloud from the corner of the eye. He spotted that he was not the only one that was alone. He entered the apprentice's den. He pulled some leaves to uncover a shiny blue rock he found when he was in hunting...

Sparrowfeather lied on the tiny beach of the river. He waited a very long time...until he scented a cat from his clan. He standed there. He looked at the morning sky and saw the shape of his loved one before a cloud covers it. He haven't [move]moved[/move]since and his eyes were burning of staying up too late.

OOC:And yes,my creatives chats are a fail. I'm just testing them.

Before the huge tom could bite Scarletfolwer's neck,Sparrowpaw braced himself and runned so fast straight to the huge tom,that the others Darkclanners couldn't catch him. When the huge tom had his mouth open to Scarletflower's neck,he pounced and bit in the huge Darkclanner's neck and brang him off his Clanmate.Then,the huge Darkclanner,angry,pinned Sparrowpaw's weak body to a rock hard,breaking his shoulder and leave a swelling. The huge tom was going to slash his valid eye.

OOC:That's okay,I make mistakes too.

IC:Sparrowpaw was playing with his oval stone as Adderpaw,the strongest and nastiest of the apprentices came in and saw Sparrowpaw as he said: Still playing with this? You need to grow up, mouse-brained! When he said that,the other two apprentices,Icepaw and Fernpaw laughed. Sparrrowpaw felt shame as he took his rock and got outside. Strangely,he was dragged to the tree stump Dawnroar was and sat there without she even notice. He putted down his rock.

As Scarletflower bit in the tom's neck,he felt his body crash on the grass.He didn't moved. The other Darkclanners fled away in the woods,Scarletflower hissing at them.

OOC:Sorry for Scarletflower if i play a bit too much with it!