[size=20pt]Concrete Angel[/size]
[size=13pt][shadow=red,left]One soul bruised and tained, One soul broken before she had time to grow[/shadow][/size]
One there was a happy, exited she-cat that was kind, caring and gentle. She had one sister who died but yet she stayed happy. She was one of the few kind of cats that loved everyone and took the time too see the beautiful things of life. Yet she was never meant to know the meaning of a loving mate, she only saw the cruelty and harsh relationship of an abusive mate.
Within the clans there was once a young soul. a beautiful she-cat that was the only one of her litter to survive past kit hood. She is a strong she-cat inside who was shy and had never known the true meanings of a happy family, of a mother and father who cared. She is one of souls lost to abuse.
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[size=15pt]History as Never Told[/size]
Maplepaw was your average apprentice- excited and ready to train, she was kind, gentle and loving. But her mentor was not like this, Orchirdstorm was a fierce and ambitous tom. Orchirdstorm did not tolerate Maplepaw's soft personality, he constentally jibed her for must having some kittypet blood. But he never showed this to the open public, it was always when the two were alone.
When Maplepaw earned her warrior named, Mapletree, she was too naive too see that Orchirdstorm was bad, she turned a deaf ear to the comments about kittypet blood, telling herself it would end and that he was just being sarcastic.... She definatley wasn't the brightest, but never the less she was deteremined to ignore Orchirdstorm's horrid personality. After awhile Orcirdstorm decided to take this to his advantage. First he got the two too the point where they were considered mates in the clan. That was when he decided too through a splash of black on her yellow personality.
Over the weeks he beat her, hit her and abused her. Her love dissolved fast- but she was ashamed and scared, the clan must not know, was her thoughts. And the clan did not- they seemed like the perfect couple!
Then one day Mapletree grew worrdied- she went too see the medicine cat... The next day she moves too the nursery.
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[size=15pt]Some just don't get to see the light[/size]
When Mapletree gave birth two four healthy kits she grew scared- she didn't want Orchirdstorm too harm them. She learned that if she showed no emotion for them, Orcirdstorm would go easy on them. He likes to hurt her, and if he would hurt them when it hurt her.
But he got mad several times. He lured the kits to isolated places and abused them as he wished. The first too die was Neverkit , a she-kit that died before her eyes opened. She never got to see the light. The second kit that was lost was Foreverkit, she died with the picture of blood forever in her mind. Lostkit, a she-kit, and Spiritkit, a tom made it past the 5th moon. Spiritkit almost became an apprentice- but he was killed, his spirit never to be forgotten by Lostkit.
Lostkit became an apprentice and her mentor was a tom who noticed a lot of things, but he didn't push it. He noticed how she wasn't like other apprenties- she was far-off, shy, and she didn't seem to understand what a family was. Her parents didn't seem to interact with her too much. He never asked about it, but he wondered.
Mapletree never showed she cared deeply for her last kit- she had to protect her. It was hard but it was necasary. She was also losing her gentle touch. She was becoming tired and depressed- Orchirdstorm was becoming worse every day.
Then one day, she was found dead- apparently murdered. Lostpaw had found by her body. Orchirdstorm had pulled Mapletree out of camp, Lostpaw had been on a hunter assesment. Orchirdstorm decided that he had had enough of Mapletree, lostpaw had come to find her father killing her mother. Orchirdstorm had given her a warning- watch out, before dissapearing, leaving Mapletree to die.
Mapletree told her last daughter everything- and how much she really did care for her. Lostpaw believed her, and Mapletree had Lostpaw promise her something right before she died- Don't let Orchirdstorm control you.
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[size=15pt]A good girl just isn't the way[/size]
Orchirdstorm soon found out that without Mapletree- he had no one to harass, so he pretended that in greif of losing his mate he decided to embrace the fact that he had a daughter. Lostpaw was pushed into his lethal paws just like her mother. But unlike her mother, she refused to be good. She fought, tried to get away. She tied to be with other cats as often as possible.
Then one day an apprentice that had been made an apprentice mear days after Lostpaw decided that he wished to befriend the lone she-cat. Hopepaw didn't have friends himself, and he was made fun of because he name was a she-cats. He wiggled his way into Lostpaw's life and was a great friend. Lostpaw stuck with him always- partly because it kept her away from her father.
But Hopepaw was supicious of Orchirdstorm's abuse, he knew something was up, and unlike the mentor, he finally asked her about it. Reluctant Lostpaw tried to side-step it. But Hopepaw finally decide to follow Lostpaw one day when she was taken away by her father. He witnessed everything. And suddenly Lostpaw had someone to lean onto for help. He understood and wanted to inform the leader, but he promised he wouldn't.
Then one day, after small border squabble with shadowclan, Orchirdstorm was real angry, he took lostpaw away. Hopepaw waited anxiously, but when it started to get dark, he lost his nerve and told the leader. Instantly the leader sent out a search party- and they found Lostpaw diying with orchirdstorm about to deal the last blow. Two warriors captured orchirdstorm while Hopepaw and his own mentor brought Lostpaw too the medicine den.
The medicine cat deemed her too badly wounded to be helped. The leader decided to give her the dying cat warrior ceremony. She was given the name Lostspirit in honor of her brother who she would soon be reunited with. The next day Hopepaw was given his name- Hopeforever is honor of Lostspirits sister, Foreverkit.
Hopeforever can now be seen, playing with the two daughters and two sons named Lostkit, Neverkit, Maplekit and Lovekit.
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Characters (C= Name changable, BC=First part of name changeable)
[size=15pt]Main Characters:[/size]
Orchirdstorm (C)- OPEN
Mapletree (C)- OPEN
Lostspirit- Taken by Miette (born IC)
Hopeforever (BC)- OPEN
[size=15pt]Kits: (All kits born IC)[/size]
Lostspirit's siblings:
Neverkit- OPEN
Foreverkit- OPEN
Spiritkit- TAKEN by Nurse Steggy
Hopeforever's kits-
Lostkit, Female, - OPEN
Lovekit, Female - OPEN
Neverkit, Male - OPEN
Maplekit, Male - OPEN
[size=15pt]Other[/size]
Border fight with Shadowclan-
Warrior 1- OPEN
Warrior 2- OPEN
Warrior (or apprentice) 3- OPEN
Search patrol-
Warrior 1- OPEN
Warrior 2- OPEN
Hopepaw's Mentor- OPEN
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