I JUST got denied on an Advanced RP XD It sucks ,but it ws meh first try. Plz help me. Thankies ![]()
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I JUST got denied on an Advanced RP XD It sucks ,but it ws meh first try. Plz help me. Thankies ![]()
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O_O "[i]Neokit? What in the name of Starclan are you doing?"
"No if she wants to do that she can it's fine with me. I guess it's alright with the others. I was just curious." -smiles-
"Sorry"
BUMP
-Pads away from the nursurey-
-nods- "Well btw its pretty long so I just wanted to give you a heads up on that. I did it for 2 hours"
Okay here...you...GO! ![]()
Character Name:Fatalitystar
Character Age:18 moons
Gender:Female/She-cat
Alliance:Tsunamiclan
Rank:Leader
Appearance (6 or more sentences): A medium sized she-cat, so I am not to large yet not to diminutive. So I can fit throught small and large spaces. I have sleek, silky, lilac patched calico pelt.With four white paws, a white underbelly and it streams up to my chest.
It's always well groomed so it is free of debree known as twigs, dirt, grass, and bugs.
The lenth of my wiskers are about 2-3 inches. Then lenth of my tail is about 8 inches. The lenth of my Body+Head and neck is about 14 inches ,and the lenth of my muzzle is about 1 inch.
I have plently exersize so I am not plump, I am Agile, quick, light footed, and muscular. And I have aqua blue eyes with a green, hazel rim to have a marble look to it, where they are always glistening in the luminous rays of light.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):I am a spunky she-cat always there for a friend in need. I am somewhat fickle so I let many others have a dabate before I choose to do anything. I am curious so I will stick my head into places it shouldn't be, but I have enough common sense not to do so. I am a tomboy kinda cat I will get down and dirty and rough and tough with toms and she-cats. I can get frustrated at times ,but as long as no one crosses the line I'm good. So I am Trustworthy, careing, sweet and loyal and is ready for anything I am assinged or anything that crosses my path.
---Likes (at least 3):Gazeing into the horizon while the sun sets, padding into unexplored areas, hanging with friends or my mate/family
--- Dislikes (at least 3):Talkback, people running away from the truth or thier fate, whispering/secrets about me, other cats at times.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):Family, Starclan, clan, hope, love
---Weaknesses (At least 3):love, catnip, death (of me or other beloved ones)
History (8 or more sentences): My mother was a fellow member of Riverclan, she was pregnant ,but was a med. cat so she couldn't have kits. They sent her out to give birth and find me a home. She searched and gave all of my brothers and sisters a home all diffrent clans. I was put in Jadeclan. They showed me how to hunt, heal, and fight. So when I was old enough to fend for myself I was sent off like my mother. Alone, terrified and confused. I searched for a moon or two for a clan ,but I could never find one that fit me. One day while padding into an unexplored area I smelled no scent of a clan. I was surprised on how such a big area wouldn't have a clan. I built some dens and made some places eaiser to walk through. Then put my scent wavering that I was makeing a clan. So ALL cats were welcome in. Except rouges or cats from other clans. I looked around and spotted a cat. She was named Waveflight.She is the deputy of my clan. Later on, we found a kit named Neokit and her brother the apprentice happen at a clan but all is well. Not to long ago we found Duskfur and now I have a well running life.(and clan )
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): A sleek lilac calico she-cat slumped lackidaisikly in the old, rugged, wavey tree. She waited longing for a sweet tom to come and sweep her of her paws ,but who knew when that day would come? So she padded over to the cool stream nearby and lapped up some water ,then stuck her diminutive paw into the cool refreshing body of flowing water. Later, she jolted up and plundged into the stream and swam around gracefully. her body temprature was now cool and she slowly made her way out of the stream. Her wet, silky fur glistened blidingly in the hot, beaming rays of the luminous sun beating down on the Earth. She shook all the water out of her fur and cleaned her pelt. After she was done she swiftly made her way back up the tree and waited.
Comments (optional):All comments let out what you wanna ask and help you out alot. They should not be used improperly for they will hurt feelings or many other things. Use them for help or to help others. so they will have FULL satisfaction.
I hoped you liked everything. Thanks. BUMP!
ooc: I noticed
"Neokit. Hate to break it to you but there is no sacred fish. O_O"
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OOC: Butters idk why but I'm never on when your on. (I don't like human names for any animals idk why? It's like you could name your kid "Kitty" If you can name your cat "Jake"
"[i]Well Neokit all I'm asking is what do you think of your brother..."
Yowls, "NEOKIT WAIT." -runs after and stops- Meows while panting heavily, "[i]Neokit whats wrong?"
O_O "[i]Neokit that did not answer my question. AND WHY ARE YOU IN THE MOONPOOL! This is a place where Med.cats go to dream or ask Starclan things."
ooc: Well uh... 1 hate My little pony. 2 I hate Twilight. 3 I hate crying. So um.. nu I don't think so.
-picks up Neokit by the scruff and carries to her brother not getting to close but keeping distance-
Okay I messed up alot more than I thought ,but the entire time I wasent able to see what I was typeing. So Yeah... But when I did that stuff I wanted it to be more like this with my eyes.
I have aqua blue eyes with a green/Hazel rim. They have a marble look to them ,and they are always glistening in the rays of the luminous light.
Instead of "Green or Hazel rim" to "A green/hazel rim" So its like a mixture or a chestnut hazel and lime green.
-she pads out into the forest away from all the other cats in an open field full of blossoms and lush, green,grass that spread across the land like a wavey green blanket. She padded around and near a stream and lapped up some refreshing water before she dove in and swam around. she got out and the water was makeing her pelt push against her body frame and it showed me more sleek and agile. She shook the water out of her pelt and cleaned it clear, she sat for a minute or so then got this feeling someone was watching me... I climbed into a tree and sat there for a minute or two more hopeing my clan wouldn't get suspicous of where I was-
"Neokit look at your brother. Tell me. would you go back into the woods with him?" ![]()
The beautiful lilac calico she-cat has never mated and is now a loner for I was born a loner and have never had a clan. I sat in an old rugged tree waiting for somthing to happen. Then, noticed the cat at the refreashing stream with anupset look on her face and the cat running in the plains and siting down and looking into the sky. Then the handsome tom looking at the she-cat near the stream.
-She wasen't crazy about searching for a mate so she went down the the she-cat near the shore-line of the stream- I ask, "Are you alright?" :(
Meows, "In which way does it depend?"
-tail flickers and pads up too- "NICE CATCH Duskfur!"
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-nods- "So are we clear on our options about Dashpaw?"
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-looks around then puts head low to Duskfur's so no one can hear- "Can't we wait till hes a warrior? I mean he's young. And not long till he's a warrior. You know... now?"