Posts by ++Owlkit++

A female kit is kicking in her mothers stomach!

I'm just wondering how to change my profile picture to something I want and how to type in that "Welcome" Thing.

[br]I am a short furred she-cat with determination in my eyes and a limp of the right front leg. I am a bit naive, but no matter what, my heart is in the right place.
[br]I came here from a fallen Clan.

Ashkit was mewling helplessly with four other kits.

They yowled louder.

A kit crawls out of the bushes looking skinny and frail.

OOC: ((I Guess im all 4 kits? xD))

((Mk xD))
She crawled to the adult cats weakly and pawed at them.

The kit layed on the ground gasping for air in her tiny mouth, showing that she is near death.

She mewled loudly and squirmed helplessly.

I'm here. ^^

Ashkit crawled around boredly with her littermates

Ashpaw bounced around excitedly. I cant belive im an apprentice now! She thought to herself, but realized that the rest of her friends had already awoken.

Ashpelt woke up, hissing to herself like every morning. Another day, another days drama.. She huffed to herself, and pawed lazily outside.

Character Name:Ashpelt

Gender:She-Cat

Clan{if any}: ShadowClan

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): Warrior

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!): Ashpelt isnt a very pretty sight, only because she has little time to care for herself. Her fur is most of the time unkept and tangled, but when it is groomed other cats are so shocked, they barely recognize her because of her smooth fur, with no tangles. Her eyes are peircing orange, and glow radiantly at night. Her claws are small, but are very sharp, and some say that they remind them of an eagles talons! She has a scar on her right eye, that is healing slowly.

Personality: Ashpelt is very soft hearted, but also very short tempered. She slightly dislikes Apprentices, even if she was one herself. She thinks that whenever they refuse to do what their mentors say, that it is awful. Ashpelt sometimes sneaks out of her den, to go out into the forest to hunt, or to think peacefully before sunrise.

History(Not needed): As a kit, Ashpelt wasn't know as Ashpelt, she was known as Tori. She was a kittypet, and quite popular too. But she didn't enjoy all that fame, so she ran away from Twolegplace. But sense she was only a kit, she didn't know well and wandered around the forest, strolling into ShadowClan territory. After three days, not knowing how to hunt, she was found by a patrol, half dead. They brought her into ShadowClan after a few moons of waiting on a cat to find her, and was named Ashpelt. Many cats dislike her for her Kittypet blood, but is an honorable cat to ShadowClan, and will risk her life for any cat in her clan.

Character Name:Ashpelt

Character Age: 15 Moons.

Gender: She-Cat.

Alliance: Shadowclan.

Rank: Warrior.

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Ashpelt isn't a very pretty sight, only because she has little time to care for herself. Her fur is most of the time unkept and tangled, but when it is groomed other cats are so shocked, they barely recognize her because of her smooth fur, with no tangle's. Her eyes are peircing orange, and glow radiantly at night. Her claws are small, but are very sharp, and some say that they remind them of an eagles talon's! She has a scar on her right eye, that is healing slowly.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Ashpelt is very soft hearted, but also very short tempered. She slightly dislikes Apprentices, even if she was one herself. She thinks that whenever they refuse to do what their mentors say, that it is awful. Ashpelt sometimes sneaks out of her den, to go out into the forest to hunt, or to think peacefully before sunrise.
---Likes (at least 3): Being Alone, Climbing trees, and Hunting.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Apprentices, Rain, and Cliffs.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Fighting, Climbing, Hunting, Running, and Prowling.
---Weaknesses (At least 3):Rain,Sights of blood, and being crowded.

History (8 or more sentences): As a kit, Ashpelt wasn't know as Ashpelt, she was known as Tori. She was a kittypet, and quite popular too. But she didn't enjoy all that fame, so she ran away from Twolegplace. But sense she was only a kit, she didn't know well and wandered around the forest, strolling into ShadowClan territory. After three days, not knowing how to hunt, she was found by a patrol, half dead. They brought her into ShadowClan after a few moons of waiting on a cat to find her, and was named Ashpelt. Many cats dislike her for her Kittypet blood, but is an honorable cat to ShadowClan, and will risk her life for any cat in her clan.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Ashpelt was walking through a mysterious forest, hissing to herself, Where am I?! She stopped and heard a rustle from the bush. Instead of looking, she padded quickly away. The sound got louder and strange things happened. She started running, but the forest only grew larger! She felt claws rake at her back, and she screeched loudly. She awoke in a tree, panting, and ran back to her camp. She whispered to herself It was only a dream, Ashpelt!

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Alright, I can try fix that!

Do you mind telling me what im missing in Appearance, Personality, and History please?

Ashpelt hissed and stretches.

"Hey!" She meowed.