Clakus thanked Evanescence and limped off to the Sharp-slashers den.
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"How are you feeling?"Feren asked warmly.
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Clakus quickly fell asleep, still feeling a weak pain in his leg.
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"We need a Healer."He said.
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The Mysterious believe in Starclan and give thanks to them. They also believe that in order to give thanks to them, they must give them one day where all the prey is that is caught by the Sharp-fangs(the warriors) is to be given to Starclan. At the end of that day, the clan yowls a yowl of rejoice to Starclan for the moon.
The Mysterious are located in a forest, hidden away by a large mountain range.There camp is located in the deepest part of the forest to keep away intruders.The camp has stream running through it that will often flood when heavy rain hits the forest. In order to defend against that, the Sharp-fangs placed rocks around the edges of the stream that keep the water from flooding camp.The prey on the territory mainly consists of rodents and small birds.Occasionally, you can catch a large enough fish in the stream to feed a cat.
Sharp-fangs- Sharp-fangs are the warriors of the Mysterious. They are trained to defend the clan at all costs. They are also skilled in spying. Sharp-fangs are picked as kits by the qualities of their traits to be Sharp-fangs. Leader's take on an apprentice every four seasons to help train the young in the ways of the Mysterious.Hunters- The hunters hunt for the clan meals. They are trained with limited battle skills,but trained heavily in the art of hunting. That makes each hunter a master, because they train longer than the Sharp-fangs. Leader's take on an hunter apprentice every eight moons to help speed up the training process,
Healer- The Healer of the clan takes care of any injuries and is trained by a mentor before he or she passes on. The Healer has to be accepted by Starclan before they are to heal any wounds.Healers can only train one apprentice before they die, unless that apprentice dies before they can become Healer.
Healer's Apprentice- These apprentices are trained in the art of using herbs to heal wounds. They are trained by the healer to do so. Once the cat has been chosen to become a healers apprentice, they may not step down until they are demoted or they parish.
Apprentices- The apprentices are the cats of the clan that are being trained by a Sharp-fang or a hunter.
Deputy- The second in command who take the Leader's place when they die.
Leader- The head she-cat or tom-cat in the clan who leads and protects it with their nine lives.
Queens- Cats who have or expecting kits and take care of the young.
Elders- These are the old hunters or Sharp-fangs that retire or are put in here because of serious, non healing injuries.
The Mysterious
Leader- Feren- large grey tom-cat with faint tabby stripes and blue eyes.
Deputy- Copperfang-
Healer-Willowmoon- Cream she-cat with blue eyes
Healer's Apprentice-Open
Sharp-fangs-Hunters-
Apprentices-
Queens-
Daisypetal- she-cat(Kits; Whitekit- White tom with blue eyes)
Leopardheart- cream she-cat with black dapples and gold- amber eyes(Mother of Tigerkit and Shadowkit)Elders-
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Feren looked at Daisypetal and smiled for no reason.
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Clakus woke up later and went to get some fresh-kill.
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Feren looked at her belly and thought of his kits in there.
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I need help with grammatical errors in my Advanced Bio
Character Name:Silverwind
Character Age:3 seasons
Gender:Tom
Alliance:Windclan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Silverwind has lighter grey fur with faint tabby stripes. His eyes are a piercing blue with the sorrow of times past. His muzzle is a pearl white with a small scar running down the left side of it. His body is long, with sleek fur that is extremely soft and shiny. His fur is so short, that even in the slightest bit of hunger you can see his ribs. His tail is short from an accident in his past that left him with no tail for balance.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Silverwind has what you would say,"A heart of gold" that makes him seem very friendly. He has a personality that invites you, yet makes some cats question his real demeanor. He is very caring, and would do anything to help his clanmates with anything. But under his good demeanor, is a sorrowful cat with much to be sorrowful about. Though underneath he is sorrow, he loyalty to the clan seems to shine. He also is very shy, and it takes awhile to gain his trust.
---Likes (at least 3): Kits, Hunting, Rainy days, and running
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Snowy days, fighting, and being still
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Agility, Loyalty, and size of his body
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Doesn't like heights, Can't swim, and Can't keep stillHistory (8 or more sentences): Silverwind was born on a snowy leaf-bare day as a kittypet. Of course, being born a kittypet did have its few perks. You stayed in a nice, cozy home with plenty of food, but it wasn't the same for Silverwind and his family. His twolegs were cruel, and made his mother birth him and his siblings outside in the cold leaf-bare snow. His mother birthed for too long, she gave birth to him but then lost all his siblings. Then, if losing his siblings wasn't enough, his mother died not even a tail-length from the fence. She had taken him out in the forest before collapsing and dieing from internal bleeding during the birthing process. Silverwind made many cries until a Windclan battle patrol found him, just near Twolegplace. A former queen, saddened by her lost kits, took him in and nursed him into an lithe apprentice. Once an apprentice, he trained hard until his last day of apprenticeship before he was to become a loyal warrior. He thought his horrible luck was behind him until his new mother was killed on the Thunderpath not far from Shadowclan territory. From then on, he always tried to stay happy, but underneath was still scarred and sorrowed by his past.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Silverwind padded down the the moonlit, moor path that led to the gathering area called fourtrees. It was his first gathering since his mother died and he was ready to face his mother's death announcement at the gathering. Upon arrival, he met up with some of the former apprentice's from the other clans. They were always extremely nice to him, even though some day they would do battle against each other. They murmured excitedly until they were silenced by the Leader's announcements. When the time came for the announcement of his mother's death, Silverwind braced himself to feel the pain of those words once more. Once it was over with, his friends from the other clans came over and said some cheerful things to him, but he was not ready to be cheered up. As he padded home, he started a weak grieving for his fallen mother. By the time he reached the camp, he padded into the warriors den and shrugged off the grief for a bit. He then relaxed himself into a slumber, not deep, not light, but just in the middle.
Comments (optional): If he gets a mate and has kits, do i have to make bio's for them?
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Username: ❝яαιηвσω ѕнαяριє❞
Cat's Name: Copperfang
Age: 32 moons
Rank: Deputy
Appearance:
Personality: Find out? ^^
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OOC: Question, can Sharp-fangs hunt as well as hunters?
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Clakus limped out of camp, hoping the medic wouldn't notice he was going to hunt.
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"By Starclan, we'll manage."He said, smiling.
OOC:We've got a deputy now
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"I know so."Feren said nuzzling her.
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Feren nodded to his deputy.
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Clakus scented, he could smell a mouse nearby. He crouched instinctively into a hunting crouch and crept ever so lightly towards the scent.
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Feren padded over to Copperfang."Want an extra hunting hand?"He asked.
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When he finally saw it, he pounced and killed the mouse.
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I appearantly have many gramatical errors in this,
Character Name:Silverwind
Character Age:3 seasons
Gender:Tom
Alliance:Windclan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Silverwind has lighter grey fur with faint tabby stripes. His eyes are a piercing blue with the sorrow of times past. His muzzle is a pearl white with a small scar running down the left side of it. His body is long, with sleek fur that is extremely soft and shiny. His fur is so short, that even in the slightest bit of hunger you can see his ribs. His tail is short from an accident in his past that left him with no tail for balance.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Silverwind has what you would say,"A heart of gold" that makes him seem very friendly. He has a personality that invites you, yet makes some cats question his real demeanor. He is very caring, and would do anything to help his clanmates with anything. But under his good demeanor, is a sorrowful cat with much to be sorrowful about. Though underneath he is sorrow, he loyalty to the clan seems to shine. He also is very shy, and it takes awhile to gain his trust.
---Likes (at least 3): Kits, Hunting, Rainy days, and running
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Snowy days, fighting, and being still
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Agility, Loyalty, and size of his body
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Doesn't like heights, Can't swim, and Can't keep stillHistory (8 or more sentences): Silverwind was born on a snowy leaf-bare day as a kittypet. Of course, being born a kittypet did have its few perks. You stayed in a nice, cozy home with plenty of food, but it wasn't the same for Silverwind and his family. His twolegs were cruel, and made his mother birth him and his siblings outside in the cold leaf-bare snow. His mother birthed for too long, she gave birth to him but then lost all his siblings. Then, if losing his siblings wasn't enough, his mother died not even a tail-length from the fence. She had taken him out in the forest before collapsing and dieing from internal bleeding during the birthing process. Silverwind made many cries until a Windclan battle patrol found him, just near Twolegplace. A former queen, saddened by her lost kits, took him in and nursed him into an lithe apprentice. Once an apprentice, he trained hard until his last day of apprenticeship before he was to become a loyal warrior. He thought his horrible luck was behind him until his new mother was killed on the Thunderpath not far from Shadowclan territory. From then on, he always tried to stay happy, but underneath was still scarred and sorrowed by his past.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Silverwind padded down the the moonlit, moor path that led to the gathering area called fourtrees. It was his first gathering since his mother died and he was ready to face his mother's death announcement at the gathering. Upon arrival, he met up with some of the former apprentice's from the other clans. They were always extremely nice to him, even though some day they would do battle against each other. They murmured excitedly until they were silenced by the Leader's announcements. When the time came for the announcement of his mother's death, Silverwind braced himself to feel the pain of those words once more. Once it was over with, his friends from the other clans came over and said some cheerful things to him, but he was not ready to be cheered up. As he padded home, he started a weak grieving for his fallen mother. By the time he reached the camp, he padded into the warriors den and shrugged off the grief for a bit. He then relaxed himself into a slumber, not deep, not light, but just in the middle.
Comments (optional): If he gets a mate and has kits, do i have to make bio's for them?
would someone help me?