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    Flashfang thought his father had enough beating as he tore his father's ear. "Tell me!" he yelled to the top of his lungs.
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    20/30


    Brokendawn tried to rake Flamingchills's belly but she was becoming much more weary.

    Skull and the others were heading to ScreamClan camp talkling about their reward of prey. Bloodsoul watched them leave with an evil grin on his expression. He turned and padded back to camp. He entered and hopped up onto a rock and laid down.

    Character Name: Flashfang


    Character Age: Twenty-three moons


    Gender: Tom


    Alliance: DarkClan


    Rank: Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): Flashfang has a pure white pelt, yellow eyes, and a black lightning symbol down his left eye. He received the black lightning bolt as power. Flashfang has half a claw missing on the back of his hind-paw. He has a long tail and has always had small pupils. He has very sharp k-9 fangs. His fur is very soft. Under his front-left paw on his pad are three claw mark scars.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Flashfang has very special feelings about what happened to him the night his parents abandoned him on DarkClan territory. He wonders why his clanmates call him a mysterious stranger. He never knew Brokendawn, his mate, had felt so deeply and carefully about him. He wishes he could somehow show his clanmates that he his one of them, too. He loves Brokendawn with all his heart because she gave him a new happier life. He is very brave and cautious sometimes. He has always wanted to get his revenge on his parents for what they had done to him that night when he was just a kit.
    ---Likes (at least 3): Rabbits, squirrels, and spending time with Brokendawn
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Frogs, his parents, and BloodClan cats because that is the clan of his parents.
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Swimming, running, fighting
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Fish smells, rats, and mouse-bile


    History (8 or more sentences): When Flashfang was just a newborn kit, his parents brought him to DarkClan territory and abandoned him. Flashfang doesn't know why they did this terrible act. Flashfang feels left out of his whole Clan. Even his leader doesn't acknowledge him. Whenever Flashfang saves a kit or apprentice from getting killed or anything dangerous, his clanmates never thank him or congratulate him. Flashfang feels like he is just casting a shadow across the DarkClan camp. But Brokendawn loved him, and she would always congratulate him and say thank you whenever he did something heroic. Flashfang didn't know she loved him and that she would protect and care for him from anything. During the great flood in the camp, Flashfang decided to kill himself by swimming down a waterfall, but Brokendawn caught him and pulled him out of the water. Then she told him how she felt about him, and Flashfang realized that she loved him. Over their past moons together, they decided to become loners. So they built a small camp of their own in DarkClan territory and lived together, hunting, and swimming. Brokendawn had changed his life forever with her love.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):


    (This is really all before Brokendawn, and the flood came.)


    Flashfang kept throwing the mouse up into the air. Brokendawn was too nervous to confront him. Flashfang let the mouse drop and skid away from him. His eyes turned to her slowly. Brokendawn put her head down. Oh great he's looking at me, she thought.
    Brokendawn heard the others coming. She quickly padded away. Flashfang was lying on his back. He took his eyes off her before she retreated.
    Brokendawn still felt like she wanted to talk to Flashfang. I like him...but I just don't have the nerve to talk to him because everyone says he's strange and mysterious...I don't think he is. I've got to talk to him.


    [b]Comments (optional): Okay, I did a lot of thinking and writing as I could, I hope you all liked Flashfang's bio! Hope it gets you thinking! (:

    ooc; hey is anyone here?


    Brokendawn set her paw on the water and slowly pulled it back out. "Seems fine..." she stepped into the pool and went in further. She sighed with relaxation and floated, her eyes closed.