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    http://www.authorstream.com/Pr…Semicolon-ppt-powerpoint/
    Thats a Powerpoint you might want to look at.


    http://chuma.cas.usf.edu/~olson/pms/semicolon.html
    The site.


    Ok now for your next lesson,


    I would like you to make a post with,
    Correct spelling, Proper puncuation, Use atleast 2 commas and 2 semicolons.
    For every extra semicolon you get a bonus point.

    "Bring him in~!" She said. A new member this would be great~! She looked up her eyes gleaming, the clan might actuly, grow; it might be like other clans! What if they become huge one day~! Thoughts rushed into her mind.

    Axie sat on her useal rock, where did Asuka and Z'ev go? Did they leave her? Why? She had been looking for them and finally returned back to Brody. With tears in her eyes, she remembered that couger. W-what if he had them? Was he even still around? Where could they be...

    Name: Sorrow
    Age: 2 years.
    Gender: Female.
    Breed - Husky


    Apperance - Sorrow is a black and white Husky. Her eyes are a light blue color that almost looks gray. She is of a medium size, witch is good for her age. Her paws are a big big for her age, but other then that everything is normal.


    Personality - Sorrow is a very sad dog, thus the name. she haves her anger and sadness out on cats. once she got rabies she became angrier and hateful, and is sent out now to kill cats. Now of days that is all she thinks about, killing cats; it is her hoppy. She wouldn't harm a kit, but would harm it's mother or father.

    "Yes, are you here to speak with our leader?" RapidPulse asked, his eyes glaring in the nights sky. "But, besides that Nice to meet you~!" He said. If this was a new member EclipseClan was growing very fast... this would be fun.

    She nuzzled him and then licked his cheek. "I missed you too..." She said, her eyes still filled with the sadness of not finding her kits. "Have you seen Asuka orZ'ev?" She asked him, hoping that he had, and that they where alright.

    "Ah, Welcome Rivertail. We are EclipseClan." The black she-cat mewed. -We fallow the warrior code strictly. Are you aware of the 5 Stars?" She mewed, most clan cats never heard of the 5 stars and what there powers bring to the clans, most refurr to them as one, starclan.

    "The five stars represent a Star that most clan cats belive is starclan. RiverStar is the star of life, and birth. Shadowstar is the star of punisment. Windstar is the star of weather and seasons. Thunderstar is the star of Battle and war and Moonstar is the star of the Night." Nerukastar explained.

    RapidPuse nodded. "I will take you to NerukaStar." He said, starting his way back to camp. The sky had falling into night, and all where probably in there dens.

    "It is at first, but it becomes eaiser to understand." Nerukastar mewed. "The Legand is that StarClan was all at peace, then onces the orgional leaders of the four clans died, the had controled Starclan, they renamed it MoonClan, after MoonStar, a nobel leader of a clan not far away from the four. MoonStar have eatch leader a job, RiverStar made sure that kits will be healthy and that life will continue in the clans. ThunderStar is sought after in times of war or battle, he is there for guildance of fighting, or for warnings of what might happen. WindStar's job was to warn us if a weather disaster might occur, or to help us through times of hardship. ShadowStar enforces the WarriorCode and make sure no one betrays the clan, without punishment. Lastly MoonStar is there for all other things, for guildance, and for, well anything, She was also ShadowStars mate." NerukaStar mewed.

    "Thats what I thought too.." She said and looked at him. "But then the day passed, so I wen't to look for them, I found nothing, no trace at all. Surely if they went to find there own place, they would of told us? Wouldn't they?" She said, she hoped that they where ok, and that they whern't harmed or indanger.

    NerukaStar laid in her den, restless, trying to fall asleep. It was late, others where alseep, but something troubled Nerukastar, She didn't know what, but it did. She turned over, and stared out of the entrance of her den, into the nights sky. She stared at the glimmering stars, witch looked like they where staring back at her, all was at peace, the night is always peace.


    At she stared into the night, she slowly and camly fell into a deep slumber, awaiting the day; more was going to happen, more that she didn't know.


    In her dream she was looking over her clan, a much larger clan. They have survived the hard LeafBare, and it jsut became NewLeaf. Food was peltyful, apprentices where at work doing tasks, elders teaching kits about MoonClan, and StarClan.


    Soon a Black mist surrounded her, and all went black. "Wh-what is happening? Where am I?" The mist fadded, and Three figures appered. MoonStar, ShadowStar, and one She doesn't remember, but it looked alot like an older verision of herself.


    "ShadowStar? MoonStar? Why have you brought me here? IS there something wrong?" NerukaStar mewed in panic, had she done something wrong leader her clan, what was going to happen?"


    MoonStar walked up slowly to NerukaStar and touched nose's with her. "Nothing, you have done nothing." MoonStar mewed, the Black She-cat flicked her tail, calling ShadowStar to come forward, the other cat, sat there. Moonstar turned her head towards NerukaStar onces more. "You are my Kin, Nerukastar. ShadowStar is my mate, when I kitted ThunderStar, RiverStar, and WindStar; there was one other, that other was Eclipse. Our only girl. She had ran away, and had her own kits with a tom named, Narrick. Eclipse Kitted three kits, and on, and on, until Eclipse's Great-great-great-great GrandChildren where kitted, they where of ShadowClan, they where DreamingCatch, LeafFire, and StoppedPulse. DreamingCatch was your mother, she kitted three kits, Foxkit, Wolfkit, and you Nerukakit. In the times that me and ShadowStar wherein the forest, We used Neruka as another name for ...Shadows. You are ShadowStar, we are awaring you of your ansectors. You have brought us back to the forest, you brought the fivestars back.


    NerukaStar was shocked by all this, No one was going to belive her, she knew that for certain. MoonStar with another flick of her tail called the other cat forward. "This is Eclipse. She didn't rule over a clan of herown, but... She is still a star, the missing Sixth star...The star of Leadership. She didn't make a clan, but she lead the clans to the right decision, to make the clans, and to grow. WIthout her the forest would be smear with blood. And all will fall.


    ShadowStar looked at Nerukastar, but Nerukastar was in a daze, all of this was happening... what should she do, was is a seacret? Or should she tell her littermates.


    ShadowStar could read NerukaStars mind from the look on her face. "Tell one cat you trust with your life, and when you have kitted your first litter, tell them." Shadwostar mewed.


    Eclipse paddedu p towards NerukaStar and licked her shoulder. "You make a fine leader, and you will grow, your clan will grow. All will be at peace.. for now."


    MoonStar nodded, and the mist surrounded NerukaStar once again, "Wait! Wait! Come back! I need to ask you.." It was too late, she was back, the mist faded and her eyes shot open. "Not yet?...But...does that mean....soon?...or....what?" NerukaStar said to herself. And walked out to the ege of the cliff, and stared at the moon, and the stars.