Posts by runawayu2

Were do most choppy sentences occer>?

Ok I'll add that to the list

Castleclan
Strongclan
Skyclan
Cobraclan
Cloudclan
Glowingclan
Breezeclan
Mountainclan
Soliderclan
Riotclan
Fearclan
Swordclan

Now whicth ones not to pick?

Seastarclan
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Yes? She asked Oceanstar. She stood up.

Grassclan
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Fernhowl growled. He threw his mouse into the pile. Then he walked over to a stream and drank some water.

I fixed them and I said everything incept Leadership. Thats doesn't count?

Occ- Ok Then I'll Wait

Occ- I'll Wait

Castleclan
Strongclan
Skyclan
Cobraclan
Cloudclan
Glowingclan
Breezeclan
Mountainclan
Soliderclan
Riotclan
Fearclan
Swordclan

The ones that are colored I don't like

Tell me whitch ones you don'ytl ike

Your right. I did have to replace some sentences with other stuff.

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Castleclan
Strongclan
Skyclan
Cobraclan
Cloudclan
Glowingclan
Breezeclan
Mountainclan
Soliderclan
Riotclan
Fearclan
Swordclan

So how about Fearclan or riot clan?

Occ- Ok done

Seastarclan
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Oceanbreeze walks over to the border. Thats Foreststar's territory? She asked herself. Then sat down.

Their I found the mistakes. And, I don't often use spell checker because it doesn't get everthing.

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Oceanbreeze looked over into Foreststar's teriotory.

She looks at you. Will you join or not? Asks Lifestar again. She narrows her eyes. If your planning something. Get out. Now. She tells you. You open your mouth. Ready to say I will join.

Occ- G2G

But I like RiotclN. We should make two and let them be rivals!

Neon flinshed

I don't want to sound like I'm advertising but, I have a clan. ( I am on the iPad now

None. Though I think shimmerclan crossed into our territory

Sorry. Meowed Oasis.

So your giving up dep

All accepted