Posts by Icy1700

[br]I am a soft-pelted she-cat with innocent-looking eyes and a long, skinny build. I am a bit dark and shallow, but no matter what, I am clever and have a few friends.
[br]I secretly did something very bad. Nobody knows I did it, but I don't really care. My mother is rouge and my father is a senior warrior who hates me and my mother. I wish only for revenge, and could care less for the clan. I have better things to take care of. I have a secret friend who I am loyal to forever.

Oceanbreeze stands outside of the BloodClan camp, "This is where I will get my revenge. That's all I need. Revenge and power." She mutters " If only he were here...."She shakes her head and walks into the entrance. "Hello? I'd like to speak to your leader, if I may."

Character Name: Oceanbreeze

Character Age: 18 moons

Gender: Female

Alliance: WindClan/ BloodClan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Oceanbreeze is a beautiful silver tabby with chinchilla like fur. She had deep, elegant blue eyes that appear innocent, but mysterious. She has a long, wiry build and can easily slip through small places. Her claws are unusually long and most of the time, have blood on them (mainly old blood.) She has long, sharp teeth that are useful for killing "prey". Oceanbreeze also has a very long tail that gives her great balance.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Oceanbreeze is a very mysterious cat. To most cats she seems like a loyal cat that is quiet. But if you get to know her, you realize she is very dark, shallow, and vicious. She has very few friends and only one she trusts. Oceanbreeze is mainly focused on gaining revenge on her father and anyone else who mistreated her.
---Likes (at least 3): Revenge, power, secret friend, blood, death, BloodClan and prey.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Sweetness, love, peace, her father, and WindClan.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Strong teeth and claws, is very fast and strong.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Negotiating without violence, swimming, and her temper.

History (8 or more sentences): As a kit, she was very sweet and happy. At least, until her father, Fangheart found out her mother, Fawnheart was working and hanging out with rouges. He almost killed her mother, until she ran off and never returned. Her father held a grudge against her mother and now, Oceanbreeze to the point of hate. He constantly picked on her and told lies to older warriors to get her into trouble. He even tried to trick the medicine cat to think she was faking a broken paw. Oceanbreeze at first, tried to ignore him, but realized she was living in denial and couldn't live in happiness with her father in the clan. She became more and more dark until ultimately, she secretly joined BloodClan. She now trains there when ever she's not busy and in return, gives them secret information about the Clan.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Oceanbreeze arches her back and hisses "Get your own food you piece of fox dung!" She tackles the opposing feline, and scratches his flank until he runs away. "That'll teach you!" She snarls and goes on looking for food.

Comments (optional): Please tell me if I did everything alright :P

"My name is Oceanbreeze. I wish to join BloodClan in secret," Oceanbreeze meowed darkly, "I am from WindClan, but could care less about those pieces of mouse dung. My goal is revenge, and only that. I believe here, I can work toward the goal."

Oceanbreeze sniffs the air, looks around, and sighs "No one was following me. I can make this short and quick before anyone notices I left territory." She starts to run.

"You see, I need revenge on my father in WindClan, but if I leave, it would be too obvious I was planning something. If I train here secretly and pretend I was still loyal, I'll become stronger and be able to kill my father without anyone being suspicious." Oceanbreeze explains. "Before you decide to go and kill me, in exchange for training, I will give you secrets about things going on in my clan and around. That way, we could defeat my clan and we'd both be succesful. I'd have my revenge, you'd have more territory." Oceanbreeze offers with an mischievous grin on her face.

Oceanbreeze growls "It's your loss. You seem to not know who you're messing with. But whatever. I could easily go somewhere else. Let me leave you something to remember me by." She leaps in the air, AIMING TO tackling Dustsky, and claws her face. Oceanbreeze suddenly let's go and backs up. "Just try and hit me!" she hisses.

Edited by staff. Please don't powerplay.

Silverpaw comes from behind a few bushes, " I am, I smelt fire. Is everything alright?" She asks shyly.

Oceanbreeze nearly jumps up as high as a tree when she hears the call. "umm... uhhh... nothing!! Nothing at all, he he." She stammers. Once she regains herself she speaks again. " Can you keep a secret?" Oceanbreeze asks.

Silverpaw leaps onto the tree next to Rockpaw "What happened? I can keep a secret." She smiles. Then stammers again "I-i mean if you don't want to tell it's alright..."My name is Silverpaw."

Silverpaw's eyes widen "What happened?! Did your clan burn too?" Silverpaw's face turns red "I'm sorry! That was so rude of me to ask..." She mutters under her breath "Why am I so stupid?....

Oceanbreeze shrugs her shoulders and heads for the entrance. "By the way, you'd probably know my mother. She became a rouge and I heard she was with BloodClan for a time 'till the betrayed her.

Oceanbreeze sighs "I'm looking for my mother. My father almost killed her and she left to become a rouge. I want to find her... My father hates me and wants me dead too. I just need a chance to find her and tell her I'm okay. I haven't seen her since I was a kit." Oceanbreeze is almost in tears.

"That's terrible! I'm so sorry." Silverpaw says caringly. "If you want you could stay with me. My family is all gone... maybe we could keep each other company if you'd like."

Oceanbreeze snarls "Don't talk about my mother that way! I just thought you might because you look like her. She had a relationship in BloodClan."

"She knows, I was alive and about 8 moons when the incident happened. Even if there's barely a chance she's alive, I'd rather die then not at least try to look for her. I'll probably really WILL be dead if I stay. My father threatens me all the time and always makes my life miserable." Oceanbreeze explains. Then she looks with a bit of hurt in her eyes. "I guess you wouldn't understand. I wake up almost every morning praying to StarClan my dad will leave me alone or I will see my mom." Oceanbreeze shakes her head. "Sorry for boring you with my story."

Silverpaw inspects Rockpaw "You have quite a few scratches on you. My sister is, I mean was good with medicine and she taught me a lot before she.. you know. Anyways, I'll get some herbs to treat your wounds with." She smiles then goes to get the supplies.

"No one knows my father mistreats me. He does it in private and when I was younger, made me look like a trouble maker, by saying I was bothering the elders and picking on them, wasn't doing my jobs as an apprentice, and now, attacks me when we're either alone or put together on missions by ourselves. I've tried many times to tell cats I trust. The leader, medicine cat, even the elders. But no one believes me no matter what... he made himself look like the most kind, compassionate, kind-hearted warrior there is." Oceanbreeze tells Hawkwhisker then unsheathes her claws "I hate him for it! I cant' stand how I'm always the wrong cat doing the wrong things to everyone even though I'm innocent!" She claws through the grass and then sighs. "You probably think I'm lying too, just like everyone else."

Silverpaw returns with a few herbs and mutters "Now if I'm right this goes here... and then this goes here... and then some of this to stop infection." She looks up in smiles "Almost done! Just have to put one more thing and it may sting a little..." She applies a herb on a few scars. "Is that okay?"

Oceanbreeze smiles a bit "That's me for you! Sorry for boring you. It just feels nice to have someone to talk to that actually believes me. What clan are you from? I hope we meet again!" Oceanbreeze blinks at her to thank her. Then her face turns a bit sad again. "I'd do what you'd suggest, but they'd just say the same thing. Tell me it's all in my head and my father just wants what best for me. Heck, with my luck I'd just end up being put with him more often."