Posts by spottedleaflover2

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Acornstar licked her pelt and stepped forward. A tawny shape appeared, seemingly swimming in the starlit pool. "Tawnyfur." she mewed, looking intently at the shape.

HailClan
Leader-Coldstar: a light grey she-cat with blue eyes. Has six lives left. (spottedleaflover2)
Deputy:Crimsonrain
Medicine Cat:Sparrowwing
Warriors:
Dustclaw: Light brown tom with amber eyes. Has a lot of patience but has given up on criticising his apprentice,Scarletpaw. He is careful and swift and also very loyal. Scarletpaw is also his daughter and his mate is Coldstar.He can be quite snappy when you finally anger him and he is quite a big eater like Graystripe, his 3rd uncle twice removed. He is a fighter to be feared.
Goldenfur: A pretty light ginger she cat with green eyes and white paws. She knows how to handle kits and particularly rambunctious apprentices but not quite as rambunctious as Scarletpaw. She is Dustclaw's sister. She's a great tracker and a fantastic fighter.
Apprentices:
Scarletpaw
A smart aleck ginger she-cat who thinks she knows it all with wide,sparkling eyes. She is the biggest nuisance in HailClan and annoys everyone who comes within three tail-lengths of her. Boasting of power she doesn’t have, she is often found in the elders’ den, looking after them as a punishment.
The leader,Coldstar, has told her several times she can never be a warrior unless she behaves better,but she does not seem to care. Her ready scorn is delivered from a tongue like a paper knife. She is also told by her she acts like a newborn kit; she replies by saying she doesn’t. This often leads to her father coming in and reminding them it’s not a Twoleg pantomime; she asks how he knows because he’s never been to one.
She is older than some of the warriors but is still an apprentice because of her antics. Like Squirrelflight before her she likes sneaking out without telling any cat and hates being told what to do. She has a very short temper and there is no cat who hasn’t felt the rough side of her tongue.
She is light and speedy and excels at hunting and fighting, but even her mentor has given up on criticising her.
She is Clanborn and often teases the kittypet origins or rogue origins of some of the other cats. She hates rogues and kittypets and likes to chase them whenever possible.
Queens:
Frostflight: A snow white she-cat with blue eyes. Her mate is deceased and she has a single kit, Gingerkit. She is approaching the time she will go to the elders' den and is unlikely to return to her warrior duties after Gingerkit becomes an apprentice.Gingerkit will be her last kit.
Elders:
Blunttail: He got his name when the point of his tail was sliced off by a badger. He is a black and white tom with failing eyesight; he is as young as some warriors but had to retire due to scratched eyes.
Dapplefur: A tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes. Has the most stories to tell out of every cat in the Clans.

To join:
Name:
Age:
Looks:
Rank Wanted:

I will approve as soon as poss.

[br]I am a long pelted she-cat with vivid eyes and a long, graceful tail. I tend to blow little things up into big things and get overly dramatic, but I can tell an amazing story.
[br]My mother was murdered by a gang of five rogues.

I would love you to join.....

Coldstar looked at Dustclaw. "Where's Scarletpaw?" she asked. Dustclaw gave a resigned growl. "She snuck off by herself again...."
Coldstar sighed,licking her grey pelt. "Trust her."

Moonclaw looked around sharply. "Ragenight will never lead this Clan! StarClan are forever with us and they'll be with us now!"
Ripplefur turned to face him. "StarClan have abandoned you!" she snarled,leering. "NightClan will prevail!"
"And you're gonna tell me birds don't nest in trees." Moonclaw hissed, unsheathing his claws and kindling the fire in his dark black eyes.
"Yes,they do,bonehead." Ripplefur spat. "And irony really doesn't suit you."
"Nor does this!" Moonclaw showed his teeth,baring them in a snarl.
"You wanna play it that way?" smirked Ripplefur. "Fine." She leapt on to Moonclaw's back, pushing him into the ground.

Ripplefur glared and lunged at Timeskip

Name: Lynxfur/Scarletpaw/Herbpaw/Blackstorm
Gender: she-cat/she-cat/she-cat/tom
Required rank: Deputy/Apprentice/Med.cat App/Warrior
Pelt: Mottled gold fur with spots/dark ginger/light brown tabby/ black
History (not needed) :
Personal comment: Watch out for Scarletpaw; she's a BIG nuisance

Mintkit looked intently at a patch outside the nursery, where a starry silhouette was brightly shining. Dazzled by the light,Mintkit blinked, and still the cat was there. She shook her head and blamed it on too much fresh-kill the night before. She turned and looked at Opaquekit happily, but decided not to mention what she had just seen.
(be back in about 4 hrs.)

Character Name: Scarletpaw

Character Age: 14 moons

Gender: Female

Alliance: ThunderClan

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Scarletpaw is a sleek, deep ginger she-cat who really cares about her looks. She has a pelt like a well fed fish,freshly groomed every day. Her bright,wide sparkling eyes are like pools of humour and sarcasm. You can tell when she is really laughing as her left eye sparkles in a remarkable way. Her paws are white as snow when they're clean, and murky brown when they're dirty. Her right ear has a V-shaped nick in it from when the apprentices were scuffling near the training hollow. Her teeth and claws are really sharp; her parents say it's genes,but between me,you and the gatepost, she secretly sharpens them on rocks.
Personality:She is probably the biggest nuisance in ThunderClan and annoys everyone who comes within three tail-lengths of her. Boasting of power she doesn’t have,she is often found in the elders' den, looking after them as a punishment.
The leader has told her several times that she will never be a warrior unless she behaves better,but she does not seem to care. Her ready scorn is delivered from a tongue like a paper knife. She is also told by her mother she acts like a newborn kit; she replies by saying she doesn’t. This often leads to her father coming in and reminding them it’s not a Twoleg pantomime; often she asks how he knows, because he’s never been to one.
She is older than some of the warriors but is still an apprentice because of her antics. Like many before her, she likes sneaking out without telling any cat and hates being told what to do. She has a very short temper and there is no cat who has never felt the rough side of her tongue.
She is very light and speedy and excels at hunting and fighting, but even her mentor has given up on criticising her, so this may hold up her training.
She is Clanborn and often teases the kittypet origins or rogue origins of some of the other cats. She hates rogues and kittypets and likes to chase them whenever possible.
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---Likes (at least 3): Big,juicy fresh-kill: Scarletpaw likes to eat; she wonders why it doesn't make her fat
Cheekiness: She loves to annoy the warriors with her sharp tongue and jokes.
Battling: She loves sinking her claws into enemy fur
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Being told off: she often stalks off after this.
Being told what to do: She often retorts in a rather rude way if this happens.
Caring for the elders: Their stories are too long
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
Getting her own way: Scarletpaw always gets her own way, because she has a flair for words.
Battling: Scarletpaw is a worthy opponent with her skills and intelligence.
Speed: Other cats say she is the fastest cat they've ever seen.
Hunting: Although this led to her nearly tearing out a claw, her love for hunting has never died down.
Stealth: She is never heard whilst hunting,stalking or hiding, despite her usual chatty nature.
---Weaknesses (At least 3):
Listening: She never pays attention to orders, whether from the deputy, one of the warriors, or the leader himself.
Behaving: She often misbehaves just for the sake of it. She loves annoying people and seems to think this is the right way to go about it.
Not eating before the Clan has been fed: Scarletpaw is a very greedy young cat, and if she is even the slightest bit hungry, she will eat before the Clan has been fed.

[b]History (8 or more sentences):
Scarletkit and her sister Herbkit were born to Coldfur and Dustclaw. They were the most rambunctious kits ThunderClan has ever known. Scarletkit could always tell what Herbkit is feeling, and vice versa. The other queens never approved of their kits playing with Scarletkit and Herbkit because they were afraid that their kits would get hurt or upset. While Herbkit had already given up Coldfur's milk about three moons after birth, Scarletkit was still suckling. Eventually they had to force Scarletkit to start eating freshkill, because Coldfur was running out of milk. One misty evening, Scarletkit and Herbkit snuck out and went hunting. Oh,such a telling off they never had again! Three moons later the two became apprentices which most likely set Scarletpaw's paws on the path to becoming who she is now. She didn't like being told what to do by her mentor so became rather sour and rude whilst Herbpaw remained quiet and attentive,not infuenced by her sister's rude behaviour.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
"Why should I?" spat Scarletpaw, cuffing her mentor over the ear. "Do this!Do that! Get this!Get that! Well I'm fed up with it." She pushed her mentor over and left him sprawling in the sand. She marched back to camp.

Comments (optional): Is it alright?

Name: Ravensong
Rank: Med.Cat
Looks: Blue-gray she-cat with amber eyes
Personality: Cool,collected and wise
History (optional):
Other: is one of a litter

Did you get my PM? i am just checking
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and would u like to private rp with meh?

so is it approved or do i need to do anything

well I thought we could make threads.

Character Name: Peanuts

Gender: Male

Clan{if any}: None

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): Loner

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!):
Peanuts is a ruffled tabby tom with one ear shredded. His eyes are a deep dark blue and they sparkle in an odd way. His claws are extra extendable and his teeth are like little tiny daggers. He has two scars: one down his muzzle and another down his flank. He has one white paw.
Personality:
He is a very nervous loner having previously lived in a particularly cruel Twoleg home. He quivers at monsters and is REALLY scared of dogs. He's so scared of rustles and noises that his girlfriend Ginger hunts for him.
History(Not needed):
He was born in a Twoleg hut with a huge,slavering dog. He lived for the first few moons of his life hiding constantly behind his mother. The Twoleg there was really nice to him, but then he moved, and Peanuts was left on the streets, lost and alone, a tiny kit in a big world. Then an old Twoleg found him. This Twoleg was terrible to him.

bump

Dawnfire grabbed the kit by the scruff of its neck and carried it far from the chasm, into her own territory.. "What's your name? I'm Dawnfire and I'm a RiverClan cat." she meowed.

" That's a shame,Blue." Dawnfire mewed. "Come to RiverClan with me; I'll care for you. Do you know how old you are?"

I'll play Stormkit and Willowkit if you want