Posts by scarkit

Any Idea when it will start?

Oke-Dokes :)

Yay! ^_^

Wow! Thats really good! And great joke! XD

For which clan?

Hm....Is the riverclan witness spot taken?

Can I be the riverclan witness?

And, if I can take two spots, I'll be the kit who dies.

The Bio for Webfoot, the witness:

Name: Webfoot

Gender: tom

Alliance: Riverclan

Rank: warrior

Appearance: Webfoot is a lithe white cat. He has a bright orange nose the color of the sunrise. His eyes are a similar golden color, complimenting his features. He has a very long tail and he's very tall for a warrior.

Personality:
Webfoot has a very strong and clean-cut personality. He shows it truly to very few other cats. He finds the good in others before he finds the bad which can be considered a weakness. Webfoot likes to be social with cats but when it comes to his deepest secrets, he's a little more frugal with giving them out. He doesn't trust cats easily unless they have given him a reason. When he does good for others he doesn't expect anything in return though of course he thinks they should have. He's not crazy about kits because he thinks them boistrous and easily riled up. He gives them the benefit of the doubt, however and would love them if they were his.

History: Webkit was born to two loyal Riverclan cats who were held in high esteem to the leader, Featherstar. They were childhood sweethearts and remained that way throughout their lives. Webkits mother, Leafdapple, had two different litters in her lifetime. The first produced only one kit, Fearkit, who, like his name was too afraid to go out a lot of the time and actually wasn't very excited about becoming an apprentice. He seemed the kind of kit who would adjust easily to the life of a kittypet. In her second litter she had Webkit and his sister, Smilekit. The two kits were adored by everyone who met them. They were "the most adorable little things" they ever laid eyes on. They would walk together everywhere they went and were rarely found separated. When they were apprenticed they fought over the fact that they had to have two different mentors but this problem was very soon sorted out by a stern leader. They both trained well but Webpaw's mentor, Spiritsong, noticed that he would want to finish his training early so he could go see Smilepaw afterwards. They were made warriors and did well for the clan. But Smileheart found a mate which displeased Webfoot very much as he rarely saw his sister anymore. She sat down and talked it over with him and he came to understand better why she needed to be with her mate though it nearly broke Webfoot's heart.

XD

Flamepaw lumbered clumsily over a mouse. It was his first time trying to catch prey, so he wanted to do it right. He was positioned in an akward hunters crouch, waiting to pounce. He put one foot in front of the other slowly, trying not to alert the mouse. One more step, and i'll pounce! he thought. He took his last step, and SNAP He had stepped on a twig. The mouse raised his head, and ran, metting out a high pitched alert sound. "Mouse dung!" Flamepaw chased after it, but tripped on a root, letting it get away.

Where Your Destiny lies
A Short Story By MadSpaceCow

Theme: Warrior Cats
Time Setting: 20 moons after the Death Of Firestar
Characters- Listed in the clan List.

Thunderclan
Leader: Lionstar
Deputy: Rushingwind
Medicine Cat: Mudfang
Medicine Cat Apprentice: Flamepaw(Flamekit)
Warriors: Sootfur, Browntail, Longclaw, Darktail, Hawkeye, Deerheart
Queens: Honeybranch
Apprentices: Volepaw, Stripepaw
Kits: Flamekit(Flamepaw)
Elders: Halfeye, Onewhisker

Style: Fan Fiction
Place: Thunderclan

Story:

Flamekit was cold, and shivering. His mother had left to go fetch some prey, and he and his sister had been left alone. She liked to eat at night, for some odd reason. They were the only kits in all of Thunderclan. That made Flamekit feel special. He thought that if they were the only apprentices, they’d be trained better than normal. All was quiet. The night guard was about to go on duty, and most cats were asleep. Not Flamekit though. He always had trouble sleeping. And with his mother gone, he probably wouldn’t be able to slumber until she returned. So he just relaxed, his eyes still closed. Snap! A sharp sound brought Flamekit to his senses. What was that? There was the crunching of twigs under feet, and then, he heard a small mewl, clouded
with pain. Vinekit!
He got up quickly to see a great big fox, lumbering over his sister. The brown furred Fox had her pinned down with a forepaw. Oh no!Flamekit didn’t know what he could do. But before he could think his body chose an answer. He leapt at the back of the fox, patheticly trying to bite down into its neck. It quickly threw him off. The impact when he hit the ground made him dizzy. He shook his head. The fox was looking at him, with its cold beady eyes. It seemed as if they spoke to him. “Kill….Kill….Kill….” he lunged for it again, but it tackled him onto his back. It clawed furiously at his stomach, leaving long scratches. The blood loss caused him to faint. The last image he saw was the fox escaping with his sister. No…
“Flamekit?” A voice awoke him. It was his mother, Honeybranch. You were making sounds all night! Did you have that dream again?” Flamekit just nodded, looking at nothing. His mother sighed. “You need to get over that.” Her voice was firm, but full of concern and understanding. “I know you miss your sister, as do I. I never forget about her. But you can’t let that night keep haunting you like this. Now look dear. I’m going out on the Dawn patrol. I’ll be back later.” With that, his mother turned to leave. She stopped near the exit to the Nursery. “Don’t forget to eat. You need your nourishment, you’re young.” She then padded out of the nursery, leaving Flamekit alone. Flamekit waited a while before heading toward the Fresh Kill pile. The camp was stirring. He saw Volepaw was busy removing ticks from Halfeye, an elder. Rushingwind was busy organizing the rest of the patrols. When Flamekit finely padded up to the pile, he chose a small Magpie. I think I’ll eat this in the nursery…
He padded back towards the nursery. He liked eating alone, not like he had any friends anyway. The apprentices, Volepaw and Stripepaw, just talked to each other. And no warrior would want to hang out with a kit, so he was mostly alone in camp. His mother was always there, but he still wanted a friend to pall around with. When he had finished his Prey, he headed out into camp. Maybe he could be useful some how? There had been a territory battle with Shadowclan just the day before. It wasn’t big, but some cats still got injured. Ya! That’s what I’ll do! I’ll help out the whole clan by doing that! Maybe I’ll even start my training earlier as a reward!
Flamekit hurried towards the Medicine Cat den. He pushed through the soft moss overhang, and made his way up to Mudfang, The Medicine Cat. He was busy tending to the worse injured cats, while the less injured waited near the entrance to the den. Stripepaw among them. He had a small cut on his shoulder. When he came back the day of the fight, it was a rather large gash. Wow! Who knew a bunch of leaves could do that?! Flamekit was awestruck. He couldn’t help but blurt out, “Wow!” Mudfang heard him, and turned towards him. “Hmm? Flamekit? What a surprise! What are you doing out of the nursery?” Mudfang smiled at him. He had heard Mudfang was a mean cat, always picking on young cats. But he was never mean to him. Well, rumors are rumors I guess… Flamekit looked up at him. “I was wondering if I could help you with your duties. Can I?” Flamekit wasn’t sure what Mudfang would say. It was a little while before Mudfang answered. “Sure. Here, follow me.” Mudfang led Flamekit towards Browntail. He had a couple of scratched of his side, and a small gash on his hind leg. He was healing, but was still pretty damaged.
Mudfang looked at Flamekit. “I want you to treat Browntail’s scratches. It’s simple enough, just as long as you don’t press down too hard.” Mudfang cautioned. “You need to treat them with-“ “Chervil Juice.” Flamekit broke in. Suddenly Mudfangs face filled with shock. no! Did I do something wrong?!? Flamekit quickly tried to cover up for himself. “I’m sorry I just-“ Mudfang was looking at Flamekit seriously. “How did you know which herb to use?” Flamekit turned his head sideways, confused. “You told me when you used it treated those Fox wounds I got.” Mudfangs jaw dropped. “But that was nearly a moon ago! And you’re just a kit! How did you remember?” Flamekit still didn’t understand. “It was easy. I’m good at remembering stuff.” Mudfang didn’t say anything in response. “Can you fetch me some Chevril juice then?” Hm? Why should I fetch it? What if I grab the wrong herb? Oh well, no use arguing with him… Flamekit proceeded to the back of the den, where the herbs were strored.
“Is this right?” Flamekit was showing Mudfang a herb he had grabbed. It was a small root. Mudfang looked at Flamekit, smiling. “Yes. It is. Now, do you know what to do?” Flamekit nodded. He chewed the root in his mouth, and when he had enough of it’s juice, he spit I out. He then padded over to Browntail, using his tounge to spread the liquid on his scratches.

*** A Half moon later***

Flamekit couldn’t contain his joy. “Today is the day I get apprenticed!” He announced to his mother. She smiled back at him. “Yes. This will be your last time in the nursery.” She gave him a good grooming, getting him ready for the ceremony. A while after she had finished, Lionstar leapt up to the Highledge. Flamekit listened for his call. “Let all cats old enough to catch their own gather here beneath the Highledge!” The clan cats obeyed, coming out into the clearing. Mudfang climbed the rocks up the Highledge after most cats had assembled. “I gather you all for my favorite duty. Flamekit has reached his sixth moon. Now, Flamekit, step forward.” Flamekit obeyed. He was shaking with anticipation. Lionstar continued, “From this day, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Flamepaw.” Lionstar announced.
“Flamepaw! Flamepaw!” The chant echoed around the clearing. Finally I’m an apprentice! But wait….now I won’t be able to help Mudfang anymore… He had grown very close to Mudfang in the Past half moon, and he loved hanging around the Medicine Cat Den, helping cats in need. “Mudfang! Come here!” Lionstar commanded. Mudfang obeyed, coming closer to Lionstar. “I know Lionpaw will be safe with you, Mudfang.” Flamepaws heart skipped a beat. Huh!?! What does he mean…? “Lionpaw, Mudfang will mentor you in the way of a Medicine Cat.” What!?! This is…this is great! Mudfang couldn’t help but smile. He held his tail high with pride. “I will teach him all that I know.” Mudfang bent his head, and touched noses with Flamepaw. “I won’t let you down Mudfang! I promise you!” Flamepaw’s amber eyes glowed with pride. Lionstar Faced the clan. “This clan meeting is now over. Please, return to your duties.”
The clan scattered, returning to whatever they had been doing. The apprentices, Volepaw and Stripepaw crowded around Flamepaw. Volepaw was Making fussing over how he should have been a warrior. “I think you would’ve been great! Not as good as I’m going to be, that is.” Stripepaw nodded, agreeing with Volepaw. “That’s enough.” It was Longclaw who spoke, padding up to the group. “He’s going to be a great Medicine Cat. Besides, if all the Medicine Cats were gone, the rest of us would be as good as crowfood.” Longclaw turned to face Flamepaw. “Congratulations Flameki-I mean, Flamepaw.” Flamepaw meowed his thanks, then, he headed towards The Medicine Cat Den.

~*****~

Flamepaw was headed towards the Moonpool, ahead of the group of Medicine cats. He couldn’t wait to have his first dream from Starclan. “Slow down!” Mudfang called. “Starclan isn’t going to leave if were not there exactly on time.” “I know.” Flamepaw called back. He slowed his pace, letting the other Medicine cats catch up. When they finally arrived, the Moonpool was glittering beautifully. He quickly walked up to the Water.He waited for all the other cats to crouch over it, before he dipped his head, and lapped up the icy water. It tasted like the stars and the moon, whirled together into an icy liquid. He fell asleep quickly, the members of Starclan welcoming him with dreams of Prophecies, and things to come….

She did! ;)

Nope! I karma'd you, so now you have 3! =D

Ya, but it was just an RP example.

I like how she just magically forgave the fat blob spirit thing when it lost alkl it's essence

Name: Ashkit

Gender: Male

Alliance: Eclipseclan

Rank: Kit

Appearence: Askit's fur is dark grey. He has a ring of black for around his paws. His eyes are a pearcing shade of blue. His tail is also crooked at the top. He is very small, being born pre-maturely.

Personality: He is very timid. He's very friendly, and likes to help people. He is said if he Displeases someone. He Is also very shy. He likes battling, and prey hunting. He'll do anything to serve his clan. He isn't vey fast, but he is very strong. Even for a kit.

History: He was born outside the nursery. His mother had been out looking for prey. She knew she wasn't supposed to be out, but she needed some time to herself. She hated being cooped up in the nursery, when her kitting shouldn't be until another couple of days. But then, it happened. Her kits were coming, right then. Another warrior walked by and saw what was happening. He rushed to camp, to bring back the Medicine cat. When the Medicine cat arrived, One of her kits where already out. When she had the other one out, the medicine cat gave it emergency care. But, soon after the second kit came out, the first one died. The medicine cat managed to save the other kit. That was Ashkit. Now he is always made fun of for his size.

RP Example: Scarbelly walked through the forest, looking into the undergrowth. He was trying to find some yarrow, for an aprentice. He had swallowed some two-leg stuff, and it was making him sick. This was happening to alot of cats lately. Probably infection in the river, scarbelly thought. "Now, to find that yarrow....."

I thought RP examples were to see how well you roleplayed...XD, my bad. Oh well.

And one more thing I just noticed about the plot...the queen whose kits were killed, is she riverclan? If so, then how did she sleep walk to sunning rocks? It's across the river. :-/

Unless the queen is a thunderclan cat though.

But....you have to leap from stone to stone, you don't walk...and how would she be so familier with the stones? Riverclan don't fish on them, and if she was familier with them, then she would have been on thunderclan territory lots.

Sorry, i posted on the wrong thread :P

=(