Posts by Hawkstorm222

Cloverfootstarted to growl at the apprentice on top of Shadow. "Get off him!" she ordered. The apprentice hopped off him and she beckone him with her tail hat they had to go to the leader now. They bounded over to the den and as soon as they got there they were called in. Blackstar's eyes were shining. "The kit is accepted into the clan," he announced, "are you ok with getting your name changed?" he asked Shadow.
"The name must remind you of your family," Cloverfoot muttered to Shadow, and he seemed to agree.

Lightningpaw followed. "This is exactly what happened to the warrior!" she cried, "they just fell to the ground when they were hit with sheathed claws!"

Look, I checked out the JUNE gathering and posted a reply but nothing really happened. And I want to delete it from my updated threads but I don't know how. Can you please tell me how to delete it?

Thank you. ;)

Cloverfoot cocked her head to the side. "Why do you want that name?" she asked him worriedly.

Stormtail bowed his head down and grabbed the scruff of the Tom between his paws and stood up. He couldn't help purring. They were his kits. And they were going to be the best in the clan! The group of cats padded silently through the forest. Stormtail jumped at every little sound around him, muttering that he would not let anything touch Frostfoot of their kits. They finally arrived at the camp and cats out in the clearing stared wide-eyed and a few of which were gasping.

Hawkpaw headed straight for the medicine den for the kits to get checked before entering the nursery, after all, they had been born in an unessecary place. She had grabbed the she-kit, and she liked the attitude of this one. Even though she had just been born, she seemed willing to face any fight and was clawing the air playfully and wouldn't stop wriggling around.

Ooc: Thundertail are you the she-kit or a tom

Cloverfoot whipped around to face the elder. "His family wasn't treating him properly!" she defended Heartlesskit, "he wants to take over the forest because he wants his family out of his sight!"
She flicked her tail, pleading Heartlesskit not to say anything. She had a feeling this kit was different. If I am his mentor,she thought, I will teach him to lead a better life.
And when she saw him, she felt a lot like this: :-[, only worse.

Ooc: sorry most of the time I see a post and I write before you post your post and then I see your post and then I can't be bothered to fix my post then repost my post. Sorry about the post thing... The other times, i kinda trying to team up with you. This is one of those times. Sorry I won't do that again.

"Heartlesskit!" she cried, "why?"
She turned to Blackstar. "Make him an apprentice right now," she begged, "and give him to me! He listens to me!"
She made sure that Heartlesskit could hear her, "He may have just done that to an elder, but it could have been an accident! You can't blame him for his ambitions! You have to give him a chance. Just trust him!" she paused for a moment, "I trust him."

"STOP!" Blackstar ordered angrily, "a warrior does not fight his Clanmates."
Cloverfoot pleaded Blackstar with her eyes. "Very well," the leader sighed, "I, Blackstar, leader of Shadowclan, call upon my ancestors to look over this kit. Heartlesskit, by the powers of Starclan I give you your apprentice name. From now on you shall be known as Heartlesspaw until you are worthy enough to receive your warrior name."
None of the cats cheered except Darkpaw and Cloverfoot. "Heartlesspaw! Heartlesspaw!" they cried. Blackstar went on, "Cloverfoot, you have not had an apprentice yet. I give you Heartlesspaw. Mooneye was your mentor, and I wish you to pass on the same skills to Heartlesspaw as Mooneye gave to you."
Cloverfoot saw Heartlesspaw running over to her. "We need to touch noses!" she whispered urgently. She leant down and her nose met his. "Thank you, Blackstar," she thanked the leader.

"He won't go in any den other than the apprentice den without his mentor there with him," Blackstar promised, "your kits will me safe."
Cloverfoot leant down and touched Heartlesspaw. "Let's have your first training session," she meowed softly to him. They skipped outside. She looked over her shoulder a few times to make sure Heartlesspaw wasn't off track. "But first I need to talk to you..."

Pantherclaw felt part frustrated but part horrified at what Fireheart had done. Suddenly she realized, "This is out chance to get him to the medicine cat!" she whispered to bloodvain, careful to be quiet incase Fireheart was still awake.

Pantherclaw stepped forward and grabbed Fireheart by the scruff. She dragged him from under the tree then nodded to Bloodvain. Together they dragged him into the camp and into the medicine den.

Cloverfoot chuckled. "No, Heartlesspaw (or is it still Shadow?),"it's about your actions."
She sat down and sighed. "If you want to become leader you need to make the right choices," she explained, "not scratch out an elders eyes." she added with a snort.
"Other cats will not like you if you do not to the right things. First you need to become deputy, then when the leader passes on and joins Starclan, you are a leader. And Shadowclan's leader before Tigerstar, who was the leader before Blackstar, was called Brokenstar. His clan drives him out because he made the wrong choices! And do you want the other rubbish clans to think we are bloodthirsty? We are the best clan you can be a part of! They can exile you if you don't do the right things. Now, I can help you become the leader you need to be. I will teach you to be a good cat, because, seeing what you have done already, you don't seen to be."
She blinked at him, waiting to see his reaction. She wasn't expecting anything nice.

Cloverfoot nodded. "We," she said, scanning all the cats in the clearing, "can help you to become the best leader Shadowclan has ever had."
She thought for a moment, the said, "so what was tigerstar?"
She was thinking that Heartlesspaw was related to him, he sure acted like it.

Ooc: uh, not to interrupt anything, but can we get back onto the roleplay? Plus I need to know who my mentor is. I haven't got one.

Ic: Lightningpaw skirted to the front of the crowd around Duskpaw. "Duskpaw!" she cried, "are you ok?"

Cloverfoot didn't seemed too suprized. "Don't worry," she promised, "your secret is safe with us."
She leaned down and touched their noses. "And remember Brambleclaw? He was Tigerstar's first son, and he is the deputy of thunderclan! And tawnypelt, Tigerstar's daughter, was the best caring queen I've seen yet! Not all of tigerstar's family is bloodthirsty, and you aren't either."

"Darkpaw is right," she agreed, "and hawkfrost may have been the son of Tigerstar, but he was also the son of a kittypet!"

"Heartlesspaw?" she meowed, "are you still paying attention to us?"
His eyes looked unfocused and his body was slumped on the ground. Cloverfoot just laughed. "Darkpaw?" she asked, "where is your mentor? Oh, that's right. They are still on border patrol. Well, you might as well train with me. You may be able to teach Heartlesspaw a thing or two. Does that sound good?"

"Heartleespaw! Darkpaw!" Cloverfoot growled, "stop this!"
She stepped forward and pulled them off the deputy. She dragged them further away and put them in a tree hollow. "Please," she pleaded, "stay here!"
She ran back to the clearing and fretted at the deputy's horrible scratches. "Please don't tell the clan!" she urged, "they're good cats! They just need to work on it."