Posts by nightfur7

Cat's Name: Nightpaw
Cat's Age: 8 Moons
Gender: She-Cat
Alliance: ThunderClan
Position: Apprentice
Appearance: <blockquote>Her pelt is pure black so is very hard to see in the dark. She has bight blue eyes which are mixed between icy Blue and normal blue. Shes not too tall but not too small and she weighs less then an ordinary apprentice would (aka shes rather small).She can use her mussles well even though being small built.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>Shes normaly quiet calm and chilled. But she can be serius when needed. She is ready to help out anybody that needs helping (in her clan). But she can also be cheeky at times.</blockquote>History: <blockquote>Her mother was called Soulwinds and her father Darkheart. She grew up with her brother Blackkit who died when he was a kit of green cough. When she was a kit she was very hyper active and livley. So ended up going out of camp to "explore" and nearly drowned herself. Now hates water and normaly wont go in it to save her life. Her father was killed by a fox when she was a kit and her mother died when she was an apprentice from being attacked by a badger.</blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote>Nightpaw returned from hunting her mouth filled with prey she padded toward the fresh kill pile and dropped her catch there with the other cats who had gone with her, she turned to the elders den 'i wonder if the elders have had any prey yet' she wondered then picking up two mice from the pile and trotting over to the elders den, one lay just inside the den licking his fur,
"I brought you some fresh kill" nightpaw mewed brightly as she dropped the prey at the elders paws then smiled politly</blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote></blockquote>

Frostsoul wrote:

Hello!

Can you please split your words up into sentences? Currently you have a paragraph that is a solid, run-on sentence. Please don't capitalize every word, too. Thanks!

OOPS, im soooo sorry i just have a habbit of doing stuff like that but ive changed it now so it shouldnt be wrong

Nightpaw padded across the clearing to the kits and warriors, "Hello Northkit, Coalkit" she mewed happily "good day Ivyclaw" Nightpaw dipped her head in respect to the warrior as she sat down with the group

"if Ivyclaw is taking you out ill come, if you dont mind that is?" nightpaw asked politly

hey i might join, but make a loner she-cat called Xinx can cats stil join? and if i was making one what age do u think would be best? i want her young though

Cat's Name: Xinx
Cat's Age: 5 Moons
Gender: She-Cat
Alliance: Loner
Position: Loner
Appearance: <blockquote>Young pritty black and white she-cat. She has one white paw (back left) and her ears are white. Her eyes are bright green. Shes very slim and normal sized with a silky pelt. Her tail is thin and gracefull when she walks or runs.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>She is nice to be around. She loves pritty much everybody but her enemys. She loves to talk with other loners. She can be very stubborn at times and doesnt like people telling her what to do. She can sometimes lash out at people if they get on her nerves</blockquote>History: <blockquote>Her parents were called Daisy and Smoke. Daisy her mother was pure white while Smoke was black. Her mother was a kitty-pet along with her brother Patch. She always wanted to be like her father and be a loner traveling the world. She left her mother and brother when they told her that she was going to be given away so instead ran away and tried to fend for herself. She never wants to return to being a kitty-pet she wants to be wild and free and maybe join a clan.</blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote></blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote></blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote></blockquote>

ace ~the~ ace wrote:

Cats here can't have any special or coherent birthmarks... please edit that~

Also, could you fill out some of your sentences more? - "Loves to talk with other loners. " for example becomes "She loves to talk with other loners."

Ok Sorry about that still getting to grips with this system, its changed now so should be ok. Thanks for your pacience

"ohh, well ive not got a mentor at the moment, but ive just finnished cleaning out the elders den" Nightpaw screwed her face up to the memory of her shifting dirty moss from the den "So i could come with you, if you want that is and ill hunt for you, theres nothing to do around here" Nightpaw mewed softly "And i can take on a few lob sided bagders!" she replied sarcasticly to the tom

ooc: im atualy a she-cat just to tell you lol

Hey, Im waiting for my approval on Xinx shes 5 moons old so isn't that old at all, but as soon as the approval comes through ill be ready to rp ^^

Hey i have some apprentices from differnt clans plus i have some warriors that can mentor an apprentice they are below (there clans are shown at end of the description)

Littlekit - 5 Moons - pure white she cat with bright blue eyes, she is very small even for a kit - a very happy go jolly character she smiles a lot and always trys her best (Is free at the moment but needs to age a week before becoming an apprentice) Wind Clan

Commetpaw - 11 Moons - A beautiful creamy // brown she-cat with bright yellow eyes, she is slim like most windclan - Shes cool and calm and has a big heart shes very lively and doesnt like sitting around she is very warm and easy to talk to (Free at the moment) Wind Clan

Youngpaw - 14 Moons - A once pritty gray she-cat but now has huge scars down her face and body, she has one green eye the other is white because she cant see out of it, she is thin and agile - She is sometimes timid and shy after facing her attack with dogs which left her with the scars, but she is normaly very warm and open but wont let her scars hold her back - Yes you may thing "shes to old to be an apprentice!" but she was held back for over 5 moons so that she could recover from her attack which makes her old for an apprentice but she will need very little training at the most 1 moon (Free at the moment) Windclan

Nightpaw - 8 Moons - pure black thin and small she cat with bright light and dark blue eyes mixed together - quiet calm and confident loves everybody but can be sencible when needed (In a thread at the moment) Thunder Clan

Wolfpaw - 6 Moons - Thin, tall silver she-cat with pure blue eyes - fearce in battle but a nice she-cat at heart - (Free at the moment) Thunder Clan

Solarshine - 12 Moons - A normal sized dark grey she-cat with lighter gray stripes on her back and legs - A young warrior that has never mentored before shes pacient but can have a temper but likes it when the apprentice trys its best - (Free at the moment) Shadow Clan

If you want any bio's for these characters ill do my best to find them for you x3

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Xinx crouched low inside a bush waiting for the right moment to strike when suddenly all the mice darted away 'what happened!' the thought to herself, lifting her head up she saw a she-cat darting through the bushes totaly unaware of her pressance Xinx hissed to herself "what does she think shes doing" she hissed aloud not realising that other cats were follow she ducked back into the bushes and watched

wow lol, ive jst been accepted so ive already started to rp hope i see u soon x3

lol im already rping and u chased away my mouse how very dare you lmao

SpottedFur

( I like mind XD, probz cos i lovvvvvvv SpottedLeaf (L) )

Waiting for somebody! to relpy or even come on lmao. I WANA RP SO BADD XDDDD as u can tell im rather bored

"Uhh i hate water, stupid river clan cats how can they stand it!" hissed nightpaw as she follow ivyclaw and the others out of camp "sure, sunning rocks sounds good there should be some prey there aswell, if there is any in this leaf-bare! non of us have had a decent meal in weeks" she complained

occ: lmao yah i dont mind getting genders wrong cos normaly night is a male name but yahno (im random) XD and sure if you mean all of us get stuck outside

Nightpaw pads along with the small group "you sure seem exsited Northkit" she Mewed "I was the first time i left camp when i was a kit" she then remembers her and her brother sneeking out of camp to go on an adventure and how fun it was when they pretended to be warriors.

Xinx hissed to herself quietly knowing she had been spotted she calmly lifted her head and padded out toward the group of cats "Thanks for chasing away my meal" she mews with a little coldness in her voice "im Xinx, who are all of you?" she asked trying her best to sound polite

rofl, i wish i had some (Loner muchly) XD ima outcast in rl aswell rofl cos im like the person thats sits in the corner and never talks, well no im the person behind that who sits at the back of the class and learns and stays silent XDDD, But anyways ive relpied DX u come on later then people in the UK do, seen as its like 11pm when u get on and im in bed -epic fail timewise- rofl anyways hope to chaaatttt sooooon