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Goldengaze paddled over. Well I'll do anything to help. I mean look a that pile! Wrathstar should send out all the free cats he has! Oh well. Goldengaze blinked. Oh I'm sorry, we haven't met yet have we? I'm Goldengaze.

Hello Wrathstar. Goldengaze dipped her head. I found this former med. cat in an old badger's den. She wants to join our clan. Goldengaze explained.

Goldengaze nodded. Thank you. Then she turned to Mistypelt. You wanna? Goldengaze asked.

Goldengaze smiled and followed her friend. Do you think we need more cats?

ooc:
Cool so new post?

Character Name:Goldengaze

Character Age:15 moons

Gender:She-cat

Alliance:ThunderClan

Rank:Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences):

Goldengaze, a goldenish, flameish colored, tabby with fire red stripes on her flank, looks just like Firestar. Her pelt is a silky, medium length pelt and is usually groomed very nicely with her rough, pink, tongue. She has the dazzling color of aqua colored eyes which sometimes may look ice blue in the sparkling sun. She has a long, flame colored tail with a fluffy white cloud like spot on the end. A scar across her left ear from a terrible fight against rogues is a scar that would last forever; even after joining StarClan. Although Goldengaze is not the biggest cat around, she does have a strong muscle tone and puts up a can last a long time in a good fight .

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):

Goldengaze's personality is different from a lot of cats; it would be called, unique. She feels amazing whenever she goes hunting, tracking or just chating with some good friends. However, she feels sad when swimming because she's the type of cat that just hates getting her paws wet! Goldengaze is sometimes a blabber mouth but when it comes to the good of the clan, she's your cat. She also has a short temper and gets angry easier than most cats but she makes it up by being a loyal cat to anyone she trusts. Also, another thing that ticks her off is missing easy prey; when she does, her face turns bright red and she lets out a snarl. Goldengaze can be your best friend or worst enemy so if you meet her in battle, you'd better watch out!

---Likes (at least 3): mice, bathing in sunshine, being around and smelling flowers, making cats happy
--- Dislikes (at least 3): swimming, being ignored, pain, blood, twolegs, foxes, badgers
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):fighting in forested areas, hunting, tracking, fast
---Weaknesses (At least 3):swimming, hunting in moorlands, climbing

History (8 or more sentences):

Goldenkit was born into FlowerClan just as greenleaf was starting. She loved to explore and play fight with the other kits in the nursery, and most likely, the victor was her (which is one of the reasons cats call her a strong fighter these days). When she was first apprenticed, she was assigned the deputy Flowerblossom, as her mentor; her first task was to bring back a clan missing for four moons now. Her mother was killed by cougar when she was 7 moons and her father also mysteriously disappeared during that moon. At the age of 13 moons, Goldenpaw officially became an warrior and took the name of Goldengaze for her superior hunting and tracking skills. Sadly, about one moon later, FlowerClan was attacked and eliminated by rogues leaving Goldengaze, the only one left alive forced to make the impossible decision of joining another clan or live a lonely life as a rouge. She had heard many stories about the all and mighty ThunderClan and decided to head for it. It took her well over a moon to find ThunderClan, but when she arrived she was welcomed warmly. Goldengaze knew she made the right choice; joining ThunderClan was the best thing that ever happened to her.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):

Goldengaze opened her mouth to sent the cool, damp, fresh air. Mice! She thought. That would make a tasty meal! At that moment she heard the loud rustling sound bushes and instantly dropped to her hunters crouch. With a quick flash of her right paw and a quick bite to the neck, the plump and juicy mouse was her's. Goldengaze opened her mouth again to once again tasting the air hoping to get another good bite for the clan. I'll catch one for the elders this time. Goldengaze said to herself. Mice, starlings, magpie, and... rabbit? It wasn't often that the clan got a taste of rabbit. She set her heart on getting tasty rabbit. She caught the rabbit just like the mouse, quick, simple and easy. Goldengaze hunted for a while longer and then headed back to the camp with the delicious aroma of tasty fresh kill in her jaws.

Comments (optional):

Yeah, sure. So you're name's... um? Goldengaze tilted her head.

ooc: its stallionfoot right. srry i have to make it this way cause goldengaze wouldnt really know that so...

Bump!! I fixed it, can you check it again?

Fixed

Goldengaze smiled. It is fine. Should we go?

Goldengaze leaped into battle and yelled out a battle cry.

Godengaze jumped away just as an adder tried to bite her. Well, we're going to have a lot of fresh kill when we're done!

Goldengaze opened her mouth to sent to cool air. Then a rustling sound came from the bushes. She pounced and appeared with a mouse in her jaws.

ooc: srry about the late replay i had school! :(

Goldengaze was surrounded. There was no where left to go.

Goldengaze had no choice but to let the rouges lead her to a dense forest.

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As soon as the cats disappeared, she ran back the way she came following the sent trail.

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Then Goldengaze spotted a loner. She could tell by smell.

ooc: would you like to be the loner Abhai?

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Then Goldengaze smelled another cat. Who's there!? She called out.

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When no cat answered she padded away.

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It was getting late and Goldengaze was getting hungry, she caught a mouse and found a safe place and drifted off to sleep.

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