Character Name: Cometfeather
Character Age: 13 moons
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: Loner
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: Cometfeather is a grey marbled tabby with white paws and a white locket. She has a scar on her right leg and another unnoticeable one on her belly. Her right eye is aqua and her left eye is blue and she has a light brown nose and black whiskers. She has an odd blotch of brown on her dark paw pads which she assumes is nothing more than a birthmark and is actually slightly indented which leaves a mark where there is a footprint. The grey around her eyes, chest, belly, and base of tail is light and almost close to white and the black stripes on her leg get lighter as they go down, eventually fading into grey which is the same as her tail. Cometfeather has jet black ear tufts on the tips of her ears and a dark grey tipped tail. Her right paw is twisted at an odd angle as a result from an injury from her past, and causes her to limp awkwardly, but it doesn't stop her from being very fast.
Personality: Cometfeather has a big heart and is normally kind, warm, and gentle and despises violence causing her to do anything she can do to prevent it. She loves her friends and when she's with them she feels like she can be who she really is which is an energetic, enthusiastic, and crazy cat who will remain loyal and kind at the same time. Though Cometfeather can be very kind, she can also be the total opposite when a cat threatens her or her friends and she can be rude, loud, and sometimes will attack in an effort to defend her friends. Though she may get like this sometimes, it's very unlikely it will happen. Cometfeather is also quite intelligent. She knows more things than most cats which is surprising due to the fact that she had taught herself most of these things. Despite being smart and kind, she also can be a bit too crazy. When she's with her friends she might get carried away with her craziness and do something really stupid like jump head first into a rushing river, but usually, she'll be fine.
---Likes: Cometfeather likes her friends, kindness, sunsets above rivers or lakes, moonlight, fireflies, and most kitty-pets.
--- Dislikes: Cometfeather dislikes are arguments, violence, most rogues, and voles when they are alive.
---Strengths: Cometfeather is very skilled at climbing trees, she has very strong jaws, she runs very fast and light on her feet, and she can definitely be trusted.
---Weaknesses: Cometfeather is too trusting, too kind to unknown cats, her anger can take over when she is angry, and most cats can take advantage of her kindness.
History: Cometfeather was born a loner with her mother and two brothers in a small family-clan and her mother taught her and her brothers everything she could about how to be a warrior. Cometfeather grew up happily until she was 5 moons old. In early newleaf, a couple of rogue cats came and attacked her and her family and her mother and younger brother were killed but her and her older brother, Darkrain, were able to get away with only a few scratches. Darkrain took care of Cometfeather through the hard times and taught her everything else that she needed to know. She and her brother drew so close together that it felt like Darkrain was like a father to her. By the time she was 7 moons, green cough took over the forest and Darkrain was a victim of it and he died a slow, pailful death as Cometfeather tried to do everything in her power to save him. Cometfeather grieved for him as she sat vigil with him and at dawn, she then dragged his body to where she had grew up with him as a kit and buried him with the rest of her deceased family. Ever since the tragedy, she has roamed many territories to find a clan to call her home and family.
Roleplay Sample: Cometfeather padded through the forest on quiet feet, silently tracking down the scent of a small chaffinch. She came across it, pecking at the ground in a small clearing. She crouched down and stalked towards it, her eyes focused on the prey, but right before she was going to spring into the air, she heard a loud yowl sweep through the trees, scaring the chaffinch away. She smelled a cat and spun around to see a large patrol of cats staring at her. "I..I'm sorry... I didn't realize I was trespassing." she stammered. The cats hissed and she dipped her head as they surrounded her, getting ready to attack. Then the leader of the patrol flicked his tail signaling to the cats to attack and Cometfeather leaped into the air and jumped right over the cats. She pelted through the forest and sat down by a small stump to catch her breath. When she thought about what had just happened, she realized the cats didn't smell like any clan she knew of. [i]I wonder what clan they were from...[i/] she thought to herself, wondering if they even were from a clan.
Comments: Cometfeather is actually a loner now but is going to join Snowclan eventually. I'm just wondering if it's ok if I do my bio now or if I should wait until I'm in Snowclan. If it is ok, I will update my bio when it happens.
Please read it again and let me know if I got it right this time! ;)