Rainheart is almost ready to be approved but can you change one thing? The history:
Something big, like a clan to clan battle, would need to have happened in our game history. In other words, there was never a ShadowClan vs. RiverClan battle. You could say a little band of loners raided the nursery and took the kits. :)
Your character has been Accepted! Congratulations! Here are some links for you to help you get your cat and clan started.
Loner and Pseudoclans Board {You can start your clan here}:http://warriorcatsrpg.com/loners-and-pseudoclans-fan-clans/
You can check out the loner boards seen in the many boards listed, or go make your own thread in the main board.
And click here to find a mate: http://warriorcatsrpg.com/needamate/
I have Battle Revolution. :)
{Hey Spotwings! Your cat couldn't have reached the Main Camp Area without being stopped or spotted by the Darkclanners. I'm just going to move this thread somewhere else kay? :) }
{Scramsey, do not post out of character. Also be polite here, rudeness is not tolerated.
Oh and Duskfur, you don't need to announce that you're going to report someone. Just do it.}
ShadeStorm was excited. This was his first hunting patrol being a warrior. They hunted and talked for a while. Finally ShadeStorm came a cross a very plump mouse and went into crouch. He pounced and killed it.As he picked it up into his mouth he want to eat but then reminded himself "The Clan Always First." and continued to hunt.
The part that's bolded is powerplay. Don't control other player's cats, please. :)
"Ambrosiaflares I need some Supplys" OakPaw Explains
Be sure your post is in past tense please. Just a reminder. ;)
Coyotestep growled once more, leaping upwards directly at the bird. "Shut up you sh*t for brains!" He retorted, eying the soaring beast.
Lightning, could you please censor out the word more? It's supposed to be censored so that only the 's' appears. Thank you.
Hello Radiancestar!
In the bio you created, you said Radiancestar had emerald eyes. You can't change it to amythest, sorry. Also, your cat can't receive prophecies. Thank you. :)
hello skyheart i am hopestar. i am new here. you are so luckty to have a mate and i hope you have kits someday. bye!
Hopestar, be sure to put quotation marks(") around speech please. Also capitalize please! It's pretty simple right? :)
And one more thing: This is a private thread. Unless you're invited into the thread, don't post in there.
*lights start to go dim*
Reqi, it's time....... to choose. xD
Don't nag, Snivy. Reqi will choose soon enough. :)
a strange cat walked by heres a gift! [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?=R8CVR_VGh5_8[/youtube]
CoolGirl1, please don't spam. If this wasn't intended to be spam, capitilize and punctuate correctly. You were able to in your previous posts. :\
Darky here with a friendly warning:
Make sure you capitalize proper nouns (i.e| cat names, words the beginning of a sentence) and punctuate. Place periods after a sentence.
Ooc: she nocked the cat off him!!!!
Ic: darkclaw pinned the she-cat
As Rosepelt said, don't godmode. Here's an example of what's wrong:
QuoteCat pinned Cat2.
. . . and what's right:
QuoteCat attempted to pin Cat2.
Everytime I try to approve a bio, you guys ninja me. Keep up the good work. 8D
Hello everyone! Before you post please read this.
Make sure you put a period after a sentence AND capitalize words in the begginning of your sentences. Don't forget that these are the rules! It's pretty simple and you all should be able to do that.
Now that that's taken care of,
over 300 other cats made shure Silverpelt Was protected and they fallowed her takeing her to the safest place two of the cats were carrying Snowkit and Frostkit
bone escaped with 3 of his rouges "who's going to help you now"bone hissed then bone turned to his rouges "kill her"he said calmly
soon there was another clan called Direclan wich had over 200 cats and attacked bone and his rogues
bone yowled and 50 rouges came and supported bone "kill them all"bone bone yowled
You may not summon whole clans or NPCs to help you out. It's a no-no.
"fool!"bone leaps to the side and slashes adderstar's side
Kill, you cannot powerplay. Before attacking, use words like tried, attempted, or words similar to that. Also post in past tense, not in present.
I will be watching this thread and don't be surprised if I take this to the staff.
It's not horrible here in California(1 presumed dead and a lot of damage at the docks) but radiation is a whole new thing. I wish good luck at Japan. They got hit the worse. :(
Actually Lycaon, that's not true. This is perfectly acceptable.
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Character Name: Ripplethroat
Character Age: 17 moons
Gender: tom
Alliance: SapClan
Rank: Ripplethroat is a Claw, the SapClan equivalent of a warrior
Appearance(6 or more sentences): Ripplethroat has very thick fluffy fur and when alarmed he can appear almost twice his normal size. He is big boned and big toothed. His fur is mostly a dark grey but he has a black ringed tail, a silver flecked chin and throat that gave him his name, and a silvery white underbelly. His eyes are amber but seem greenish in the sunlight. Ripplethroat was a loner before joining SapClan and he traveled the Thunderpaths, so his claws have been worn down and are not much use to him in battle. One of his claws on his left paw is missing completely, the result of a nasty badger attack when he was almost apprentice age. Ripplethroat also has a scar across his nose from he was shoved into a briar bush by his much older brother.
Personality(6 or more sentences): Though Ripplethroat looks ferocious, he is very gentle at heart. He is sensitive and courageous and terrified of thunder storms. His kind nature makes him a she cat magnet, but he has no intrest in a mate. If he is ever angry, or upset he hides his feelings very well. Elation though, he has no control over. If he is happy everyone will know.
]History(6 or more sentences): Ripplethroat was born to Kiki, a kittypet. He never knew his father and Kiki refused to talk of him. He was born in the forest after Kiki's twoleg died. As soon as he was weened, Kiki left him with his brother from a previous litter. His brother was cruel to him and ate all the food Ripplethroat caught. his brother was killed by a fox and Ripplethroat was alone. He wandered through the forest for a moon until he stumbled across SapClan. He joined and finally found a place in the world.
Comments/Other: (Optional)
Roleplay Sample: Mishka lay on the stale moss, waiting for the lazy apprentice to come with his food. Young cats were getting more rude and lazy by the day! Finally the young cat came. Mishka tried desperately to remember her name so he could repremand her. Frustrated, he gave up. "Be sure to come on time next time young 'un." he said, hating how aged he had become. his joints were so stiff he could barely stand and his food almost never stayed down. Though he knew he was dying, Mishka would not accept this.
The cat in the picture is a tortie which is a rare colour in male cats. Please get rid of the picture. :)
