Dawnfang awoke from his slumber before pouncing n a small vole that was skidding clumsily on the ice. He devoured the creature in seconds as he went back to skating playfully on the ice.
OOC:alright wynn, wont happen again! I just love posting and no one else was online to post there. Now I'm back to 18 posts! 
:) :) :) 
Dawnfang yawned loudly and padded over to a comfortable patch of moss located at the other side of the river. His eyes quickly dropped for he had not rested for some time now.
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Dawnfang padded over to Tigerpaw whom appeared to be hunting. He asked, "May I join in too?"
OOC: Great work on the rp everyone! I'm impressed!
Dawnfang sank his fangs into the fox's thigh and he spat at it, "Don't ever mess with DawnClan again you foxhead!" Dawnfang chased the fox all the way to the border before coming back to camp.
OOC: Sorry guys I made a typo on the ceremony, Tigerpaw, you are apprentice to Suntiger and Silverpaw is mentored by the medicine cat, Whispertail.
Dawnfang padded over to the cat lying down, "Is that you?" he asked, remembering the cat that had pulled him out of the river.
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"Sorry I was so depressed about my parents. Its just that I can't seem to get over it." Dawnfang glanced at the river. The tom ripped through a hole in the ice, grabbed a fish and placed it in front of the she-cat before padding off to the frozen river.
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OOC: Hey guys. One small favor could you do me in your spare time? If you know any friends in need of a clan just tell them to join DawnClan because I think that the rp would be way more fun with more members!
IC: Dawnfang casually padded up to the frightened Silverpaw and mellowly asked, "Are you okay?"
Dawnfang clawed at the fox's eye as he watched it writhe on the ground in blood. He looked into Silverpaw's eyes and saw the look of terror on her face. He saw the two apprentices standing together and he padded away to leave them together.
Dawnfang spotted a vole and killed it instantly before settling down on the hard ice. He bit into the fresh meat and blood squirted over the now red ice.
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Dawnfang encircled the fox and leaned to the left, distracting the creature and therefor giving Tigerpaw a chance to hit the fox. The fox scratched Dawnfang in the flank as he tried to distract the creature.
Dawnfang bounded over to the harsh scream to see the fox holding Silverpaw in its jaws. Dawnfang looked into the eyes of the she-cat to see pure fear and terror. He then looked at Tigerpaw to see a blazing ambition burning in his eyes.
OOC: See ya tomorrow afternoon people! Great work on the rp. The fox shall be vanquished!
OOC: Sorry, once a newbie, always a newbie! :)
IC: This time Dawnfang didn't care that the foxes couldn't understand him he just roared in frustration. "Let go! No one messes with my clan!" Dawnfang aimed a fierce blow at the mothers calf and he quickly leapt back to avoid a rebound blow from the fox.
Dawnfang breathed a sigh of relief and looked a the wound gashing blood on his shoulder. He gave SIlverpaw a reassuring nod before bounding off to tell the rest of the clan, leaving the two apprentices lying alone in the scene of a past battle.
"Your very nice, do you want to have kits?" i whispered, licking his cheek repeadeatly.
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"I would, you are a very interesting she-cat, but the loss of my previous mate, Skywing, was too much for me and I still grieve of her death today. I just wouldn't want that to happen again, especially to you. Don't take it personally, its just me. We can still be friends though, okay?" Dawnfang looked down, waiting for an agreement from the she-cat.
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Hey Cats4life, I can't miss this!
Name: Faolan
Gender: Male
Personality: Sly, wise, defiant, has a strong heart, lonely, tormented, fierce, spiritual, loyal, bold, handsome
Description: Is tormented by others for his defiance and strange ways. Was born with the ability to see visions through fire and ran away when he was young. This is him when in command over fire.
History: Ran away when he was a kit and then sheltered by the cat, Dawnfang(my cat), until he was able to live on his own. He then reintroduced himself into the packs. He later returned to find that his parents had been murdered and he vowed to have vengeance.
Other: Is jet black with sea-blue eyes and an ambition for hunting. Although he does not know it yet and others don't believe it, Faolan believes that he has an actual purpose in the world.
Pack: Pack of Blazing Fire
Power: Has command over the elements and can have visions if he sees fire.
OOC: Since no one is volunteering I guess I will be the brother. :) :) :)
May Lupa go with you, (Wolf version)
OOC: The two pack thing I agree with!
Faolan padded over to the other wolves as he saw one make a whirlpool! He remarked, "Oh, goodie, I've got another person that isn't normal with me. So what can you do exactly?" asked the black wolf.
OOC: I'm probably one of the torturing before throwing him off of a cliff type of people, lol, Deathstar.
"Okay, I believe I have a way to find some prey." Faolan concentrated fiercely on the patch of dry grass in front of him and it randomly burst into flames. At first, it wildly raged, making itself bigger and bigger until Faolan turned it into a small, controlled flame. His eyes grew thinner as he continued to stare at it. Then everything changed. He wasn't with the other wolves. A booming voice came out of no where, "Faolan, to find what you seek, look places beyond where the naked eye can see." Then he was back. Back with the other wolves. He appeared to have been sweating heavily. Upon turning away, the fire went out. "Follow me," he instructed. He led them to the forest and looked around to see no prey. He lunged his paw forth abruptly and surprisingly heard a small yelp. It was a bird. It was the exact color of the tree, making it almost invisible. "Look for the outline of them by the trees," he informed them.
Okay, I'm cool with the two packs thing. How about neither of us know it yet to build suspense?
While on their journey to find the packs, Faolan has another fire vision showing him a scene of the past involving him running away, staring into his parent's eyes one last time. He also recognizes his sister who looks very similar to the character you have today. That is when he realizes it and he also tells you but no one else finds out until later.
