Posts by TeamJacob

Deathskull a muscular white tom with patches of black on him and amber eyes walked over to deathface "hello i would like to join your clan i want to steal kits and raise them to be like us instead of those goodytoe shoes.

( ;) I found one artemis could look like do you wanna see)

Emily took the forms first she filled out the dog adopt form
Name:emily
Age:13
Dob: 05/21/1998
Dog name:artemis
Breed :siberian husky
Gender:female
Shots:yes
Neutered/spayed:nope
than she filled out volunteer form to help out mr.smith and then handed the forms to him. Emily pleaded she did everything right on the forms.

Name:bear
Gender:male
Age:3
Personality:handsome,honest,obedient,and gentle
Breed: leonberger
Photo: http://www.123rf.com/photo_471…-of-white-background.html

Name:moonshine
Gender:female
Age:4moons
Personality: caring,protective, may get agressive towards strangers
Breed:artic wolf
photo: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs2…lf_Girl_by_derSheltie.jpg

Moonshine looked over at simba "are you okay" she asked him concerned he was sprawled out in the sun not moving. She nuzzled the cub and picked him up bringing him to her little den to take care of him and raise him as her own.

Bear looked over at artemis "who do you want to take you home" the big brown fluffy dog asked the siberian husky gently. What if he never got adopted he would die sad and alone he started crying as he thought about being the only dog left in the pound

Emily "oh okay then how do you decide" she asked mr.smith hopefully not by age she thought. She became heartbroken if she didnt get artemis that meant no dog sleddin in the artic this winter she started crying.

(Oh sorry i thought you didnt know what a samoyed was my bad )

Moonlight wandered around the neighborhood watching for any dog catchers or any doors that had dog doors so she could slip inside for the night. She looked at the stars and solomnly howled for maxwell the doberman that had raise her and for her best friend jake the wolf hybrid he was hit by a car the other day.
As sshe scoped out the area she saw a cat "hey there can you speak my language" she asked Hawk hopeful that maybe someone would understand her.

Moonlight "great i have no where to go do you know of a place i can rest in warmth" she asked his excitedly pawing the ground. She looked at him he looked familiar but who she couldn't put her paw on it but it bugged her a lot. Oh well maybe I'll remember later she thought.

(How about they met when she was a pup and he was a kit if its okay with you)

Moonlight followed she growled in frustration as she tried figuring out where she had seen him before oh god this was bugging her so much. She followed hawk but stopped outside the door and whimpered she wasnt allowed in without a humans permission.

The samoyed puppy lay at the door her fur coat keeping her nice and warm as she finally figured out who hawk was she waited for him to come out of the house so she could tell him and see if he remembered her. She sniffed the twolegs hand cautiosly crawling closer to her on her belly when she finally stood up and wagged her big fluffy tail.

Moonshine looked at simbe "want me to be your adopted mother" she asked him excitedly hoping he would say yes then she could take care of him all the time. She lay on the floor of the cave then waited for the answer from the little cub.

Bear lay on the ground crying and sobbing because he couldnt help feel that he was going to have to go to the back room.

Emily ran back to the shelter "can i take her home yet" she asked mr.smith who was on the phone

Moonlight backed up falling off the porch and hitting her head on the concrete she whimpered then went unconcious.

"Were a anti-clan then" deathskull managed to say above the noise of a thunderpath about 10pawsteps north

Moonshine sighed "alright never mind then" she said turning away from the cub and looking at the cave wall. She sobbed sadly in the corner "nobody likes me i can tell" she howled sadly.

Bear whimpered as a kennel worker came to.his cage and brought him to be neutered

Emily waited patiently for him to be off the phone so she sat beside artemis's cage

Name:ryleigh
Age: 6months
Species:cat
Apperance: very small blue grey she cat with beautiful mint green eyes
Personality:shy,nervous,timid,and gentle

Can you teach me im failing writing in school and advanced roleplay should help because its grammar,punctuation,and descriptive writing

"Slam" three doors slam shut exactly at the same time then three men in black jumped out with two dobermans who jump at my throat. The two dogs start to try and knock me down bringing me flat on my back so they can feed off my body. Ever since I had escaped from the lab where they used me as a lab rat and gave me super abilities which i still haven't figured out what they are. I also kind of stole one of the mutated and abused animals also oops I giggle. Why couldn't Cody's henchmen leave me alone oh yeah that's right because I stole his precious lab animal.

(This is a story I've been working on but want to be more descriptive and learn how to use figures of speech,punctuation,grammar better,and also sentence structure)

Me i could use all the help i can get trying to get my marks up i n writing so roleplaying helps me with sentence structure.

Alright i will but wheres the training area

"Slam"three doors slam shut exactly at the same time, then three men in black jumped out with two dobermans who jump at my throat. The two dogs start to try and knock me down trying to bring me flat on my back so they can feed off my body. Ever since I had escaped from the lab, they used me as a lab rat and gave me super abilities which I still haven't figured out how to use them, or what they are. I also kind of stole one of the mutated, and abused animals also oops I giggle.Why couldn't Cody's henchmen leave me alone, oh yeah that's right because I stole his precious lab animal.

Waiting for willowsong to come give me my first task
*eats cookie and waffles while wwiting for willowsong*

The thing is i got school but i can go on at 6pm-10pm on weekdays and weekends mostly anytime

Name- teamjacob (changing to~Hedley 4 eva
Gender-female
How long have you been on this site-a month
Have you ever been banned-nope
What you need help with most-sentence structure,punctuation,descriptive,battle scenes,and grammar
What school are you applying to-(Which Course,or the academy)~the academy