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Hawktalon gently jabbed Mosstail playfully. "Aren't you hungry? Gravelstar gave us first pick of the fresh-kill pile because we're going on the journey! It isn't everyday that happens!" she meowed cheerfully.

Fallenrain came forward and touched noses with the new apprentice. Then slowly everything started to fade away into black untill nothing was left. Fallenrain sent Sunpaw and Honeyfur wakefulness, just as the sun bagan to rise again and the stars went away.

Shadefern was deep down in the bush, and as he tried to fight his way out of the thick thorny cage that separated him from Lilypetal, he realized a prickly vine was wrapped tight around his ankle. Silently cursing, he writhed and twisted and turned, but couldn't free himself. Shadefern heard shrieks of a cat in pain and the truimphant barking of the fox. "Great StarClan! Are we doomed?"

OOC: That means they are half-siblings. But no, the lineage of the kit does not associate with LegendClan's roots.

IC: While Sunpaw got the herbs, Honeyfur laid down next to the kit and began cleaning it's filthy fur with smooth, calming licks. As the dirt washed away, beautiful bright ginger fur began to show through. "My, what a hansome little tom you are!" Honeyfur cooed, hoping to take away some of the shock the kit was expiriencing. She looked into the kit's face when she was done. "What's your name, little one?" she asked gently.

Before her brothers even got into the game yet, Splashkit tossed the ball over thier heads, aiming it squarely to Blizzardkit.

"Hey! That's not fair! We weren't ready!" Pinekit yowled in protest.

Honeyfur yawned and woke up, stretching every muscule before turning to Sunpaw. "Looks like we're both medicine cats now." she said warmly.

OOC: Yay! Now you're the official apprentice medicine cat! Thread over.

Hawktalon gulped down the rest of her rabbit and bounded over to Goldenwhisker and Doveheart. "So which direction are we heading in?" she asked.

The fox growled with annoyance and shook off the apprentice, wanting to finish off Lilypetal before getting to the others. He dug in her throat harder, but it was difficult to concentrate on Lilypetal and Moonpaw at the same time.

Suddenly Nightmareclaw burst out of the ferns and landed squarely on the stranger's back. Swiftly, before the stranger could even react, she darted forward and sank her teeth into the stranger's neck. He twitched once, then went limp. Nightmareclaw let out out a triumphant yowl and delicately sprang off the dead stranger's back. "So is this one a keeper?" she asked Bonestar, still feeling smug about her easy victory. She looked back at the stranger's body and sized him up. I think he can feed the both of us easy. she figured.

OOC: Woah, woah, woah! Willowbloom, we've doing this thread for a long time and have already developed characters and what not, and for you to just jump in at this random time claiming your eternal loyalness to Doveheart and begging to go on the trip, it is just too random and off the storyline. We've already decided who is going on this trip, and we can't have too many RPers in it, so it stays nice, small, and uncrowded. If you're just dying to be on this thread, maybe you can come in later while we're on the journey. K?

Wavepaw had come to watch as events unfolded but now she had seen enough. With a shutter, she slowly backed into the apprentice's den telling herself over and over, Brightstar will handle this. Brightstar will handle this. Brightstar will handle this.

Yup.

"Nice to meet you, Ice. We're going to make you feel all better!" Honeyfur smiled cheerfully. She'd always wanted to be a mother and to have kits to raise and love. . . She shook her head feircely. She'd given up that dream long ago to follow her true calling; to be a medicine cat. And she wasn't going to think about that now. There was work to be done. Honeyfur hummed a lullaby while she helped Sunpaw apply the herbs to Ice.

OOC: It might just be easier for you to go to the first post and see who joined, whats changed; etc. But as far as storylines, Smokeclaw came as an evil she-cat and wants to take over the clan. Angry that she was kind of being ignored, she kills Angel (which means there is only one cat left for the RiverClan prophecy: Lily). In her last few moments of life, Rockheart tells Angel the truth about her parents and Vipertail. Everybody thinks a fox killed her, even Rockheart. As far as Lily and Vipertail, we're still onboard with the barn scene. We're right where we left off, you are going inside the barn and I'm right behind you. ;) Glad to have you back, by the way. :)

"Good idea." Honeyfur replied. She laid down next to Ice, curling her warm body and fur around his freezing one to warm him up.

OOC: Let's say it's getting dark out and the sun is setting.

IC: "I think it's time we all got some sleep. Goodnight, Sunpaw." Honeyfur meowed sleepily. She laid her head down next to Ice's small one. As she drifted off to sleep, she thought, Maybe you can be my "kit", little Ice.

Nightmareclaw glowed (not literaly ;)) under her mentor's praise. "I think it's big enough to feed the both of us." she judged, still feeling smug.

OOC: Sorry, I LOVE CHOCOLATE PIE!!!. I thought you might be upset that another cat was going, but you're right. I shouldn't have left that up to me. I'm sorry, I really wasn't trying to be mean. :( And I'm sorry to you too, Willowbloom. Is everything cool?

IC: Hawktalon smiled at Crystalsong and started out of the thorn tunnel.

Character Name: Sunpaw

Character Age: 9 moons (12 and a half in human years)

Gender: Tom

Alliance: WindClan

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Sunpaw is a golden tabby (although the stripes are slightly faded) with white front paws and a small white patch of fur on his chest. He has sky-blue eyes and an old scar on his left ear that never went away. His whiskers are shorter than most, with which he is slightly self-conscience. Sunpaw has long fur but is a bit small for his age (he was teased and called names like bite-size when he was in BloodClan). He inherits most of his looks from his mother, which is a bit strange considering he's a tom. But Sunpaw does have the lean muscles and body structure of Flame.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Sunpaw is sweet and usually cheerful and easy-going. However, he values his pride a lot and is not afraid to defend it! Because of this, he sometimes acts without thinking and can let his curiosity get in the the way of common sense (Sunpaw will take almost any dare). Sunpaw is pretty loyal to WindClan, but even more so to his family and friends. He is outgoing, as mentioned before, but will clam up when around others much older than him (big kids, adults). Sunpaw has accustomed well back in his birth clan, but sometimes he thinks about BloodClan from time to time.
---Likes (at least 3): Hawktalon (older sister), gatherings, and hunting patrols.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): His bossy mentor: Snakefang, being left out, and Flame and BloodClan.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Hiding, running, and playing tricks.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Fighting (his smaller size to blame a little), fishing, understanding some parts of the warrior code.

History (8 or more sentences): His sister, Hawktalon, was born pre-mature and Sunpaw was born about a moon later! His mother, Spottedpath, had a crush on Flamestreak (father) ever since they were apprentices! Eventually they became mates and Spottedpath moved to the nursery. Flamestreak then fell in love with a BloodClan she-cat called Night. They met each other in secret for moons untill Spottedpath, close to birthing, became suspicous and followed Flamestreak one night. After finding out the truth, she returned to camp with a broken heart. The next day, Spottedpath gave birth to Sunpaw, suckling in the nursery next to Hawktalon. A week later, BloodClan attacked WindClan and Flamestreak fought with BloodClan. During the battle, Flamestreak stole Sunpaw from the nursery and he was brought up by BloodClan. Flamestreak joined BloodClan and became Flame. Spottedpath soon after died of severe depression. Hawktalon, now a warrior, found out she had a brother in BloodClan and rescued Sunpaw from the lies of his life and returned him to WindClan. At first, he was shy and reluctent, but eventually his personality shone through and he made friends.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Sunpaw landed with a loud thud on the ground as the breath was knocked out of him. Snakefang towered over him wearing an expression of disgust on his face. Sunpaw writhed and flailed his paws as tried vainly to escape his mentor's tight grasp. "Too slow! Sunpaw, we've doing this move all afternoon. This time you are going to get it right!" Snakefang grunted with annoyance as he climbed off Sunpaw. Sunpaw struggled to his paws, panting. He hated battle training. Snakefang always pushed him too hard and came out with all these advanced battle moves that he could never get right. Sunpaw narrowed his eyes with determination and crouched down, preparing to counter Snakefang's attack. Snakefang lunged for him, but this time Sunpaw was prepared. He twisted to avoid Snakefang's sheathed claws and lashed out at his side with his paws. Snakefang turned to face Sunpaw, his pleasure at his apprentice's acomplishment obvious on his face. "Well done. Let's get back to camp." he meowed, padding off in the direction of the WindClan camp. Sunpaw was worn out, but he was glad that he finally mastered the defense move and he could rest. His eyes shone with pride as he bounded after his mentor to tell Hawktalon all about it.

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Nightmareclaw's tail shot straight up in excitement. "Yeah!" she meowed evily happy.