Posts by ClanCat123

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    [justify][font=times][size=8]Changing the font on your camp? Just put 'font-family: FONTNAMEHERE'


    ex:
    <style>
    body
    {
    background: url(URL) #000000 fixed;;
    font-family: GEORGIA
    }



    and just do that for every section c:

    [justify][font=times][size=8]"Okay." She mewed, all though she couldn't see why her first catch wouldn't be caught today... it was just hunting, after all. There didn't seem to be anything so difficult about it. What could go wrong? She wondered, lost in thought, trying to create scenarios in her mind where she wouldn't catch anything... but all that came up was her pouncing, killing, and walking back to camp with a bunch of prey. This'll be easy. She told herself.


    "I'm coming!" She called as she realized that, while she was lost in thought, her mentor had begun to pad away. I wonder where we're going... perhaps there's a spot where the prey run. She thought, having no idea where prey lived, or anything about them really. Picturing in her mind a field full of mice, little did she know what a reality check she was in for: the forest wasn't the nice, magical place she'd always dreamed it would be.

    [justify][font=times][size=8]"Wha-" She stopped and silenced herself as she noticed her mentor stalking a mouse. Only one? Where are the rest? She wondered as Briarstorm had leaped after the mouse. Didn't they all live together, like she and the other members of the clan did? As he killed the mouse, she turned to him and asked, "Where are the rest of it's clan?" She didn't understand why a mouse would be so stupid as to go out on it's own.


    Thinking back to moments ago, she replayed what she remembered of her mentor's style. He... he leaped after it, stayed quiet, and killed it by biting it. She thought. So, all she had to do was quietly chase a mouse and kill it. Easy enough... right? "Oh, and when we find it's clan, can I try hunting too?"

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    -- artificialreality
    -- 28 moons
    -- female
    -- riverclan

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    check your pulse it's proof
    that you're not listening to
    the call your life's been issuing you





    -- ooc;




    so go unlock the door
    and find what you are here for

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    She was in a warm sunny field in the middle of green-leaf, filled with plentiful mice, voles, and in the forest behind many, many squirrels could be heard chattering and scurrying about. How nice it is. Artificialreality thought with a contented sigh. She'd eaten the best she had in weeks, eating until she was really, really full; she'd never been able to do that before. This newfound place was like heaven, having everything she needed... though, she felt like something was missing. But she couldn't figure out what. Maybe I'll go for a walk to clear my mind. She thought as she stood up in a graceful stretch, her back forming an arch. Padding at an average pace, she went through the forest, it seeming all too familiar... though, she couldn't place it.




    Walking some more, she passed by plenty of food opportunities, it seemed as if the creatures were all deaf, oblivious to her, she could take whatever she wanted. Though, she wasn't hungry anymore. She didn't need that. As she walked further, she came upon a river. A calm river, soft current, abound with fish. Wading in, a memory triggered in her mind, sort of like Deja Vu, though she couldn't place her finger on it. It's probably nothing. She told herself, going for a swim. She paddled down the river, letting the gentle current push her lazily along. After awhile, feeling fairly water-logged, she climbed out, resting on shore to dry. Yet, she still felt like something was missing, something that would make this completely perfect... Perhaps she needed to make a nest.




    Conveniently, there were many beds of moss around her, tall grass along the riverbank, and the ground was soft and squishy; perfect for building a nest. She grabbed several mouthfuls of moss, carrying them over to a carefully padded down circle of grass. As she rest on it, she still felt something missing. What is it? She wondered at the emptiness she felt iside of her. It's... I'm alone. She realize. Mudpaw! All her memories came back to her; the storm, the swimming, everything. She hadn't time to think another thought before the rain roared in her ears and she blinked her eyes open to find an unconscious Mudpaw next to her.




    Leaping to her feet, she hoped with all her heart he was okay. "Mudpaw!" She screeched, eyes filling with tears. "Mudpaw, wake up!" She cried, pushing on his pelt. The small part in the back of her mind told her he was just exhausted, but she wasn't listening to that. The irrational part of her mind, the easier one to believe, told her that Mudpaw wasn't going to wake up. "Mudpaw, please!" She cried again, burying her nose into the top of his head.
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    template [c]lime
    graphic [c]heights
    lyrics [c]john mayer, great indoors
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    - You still need a space aver every punctuation {period, exclamation point, question mark, comma, etc.}


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look!


    Hi, I'm Lime :)
    You've got a great bio here, but some edits need to be made before this can be approved:


    - You need a space after every punctuation.


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look! :D


    Hi, I'm lime :)
    You've got a great bio here, but there are some edits that need to be made before it can be approved:


    - You have some grammar mistakes {places where commas are needed, apostrophes where they shouldn't be, etc.}


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look! :D



    Hi, I'm lime :)
    You've got a great bio here, but there are some edits that need to be made before it can be approved:


    - You need a space after every colon.


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look! :D


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    Hi, I'm lime :)
    You've got a great bio here, but there are some edits that need to be made before it can be approved:


    - You need a space after every punctuation.


    - You have a few spelling mistakes. Try running your bio through a spell checker, such as MS Word.


    - You have some choppy sentences throughout your bio. You can lengthen them by adding more details or combining two smaller, alike sentences.


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look! :D



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    Hi, I'm lime :)
    You've got a great bio here, but there are some edits that need to be made before it can be approved:


    - You need a space after every punctuation.


    - You have a sentence fragment in your appearance section. Make sure all of your sentences have subjects.


    Edit and bump so I or another staff member can take a look! :D

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    -- artificialreality
    -- 28 moons
    -- female
    -- riverclan

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    check your pulse it's proof
    that you're not listening to
    the call your life's been issuing you





    -- ooc;




    so go unlock the door
    and find what you are here for

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    Nose buried in his head, she wished with all her might something would happen, a twitch, a deep breath; anything. Mudpaw, please wake up! She thought, tears forming in her eyes. I've lost him... She began to bring her mind to the thought. He died... to save me... Horror filled her eyes as she realized he wasn't the exception to her curse; she'd never, ever get close to anyone again. She couldn't deal with this anymore.




    "Artificialreality?" She heard the words as they rolled from his lips. Was he really alive? "You're alive."[/b] She couldn't believe her ears, thinking her mind was playing tricks on her. But as she looked at the body laying on the ground next to her, eyes open, mouth moving, she knew she'd heard right. "Oh, Mudpaw, you're okay!" She cried with glee, so many emotions going through her at that moment. Relief, joy, disbelief, sadness, all flowing in to her voice at once. "Yes. I'm alive... because of you." She murmured, her voice muffled as she pressed her nose gently to his head once more. "I owe my life to you, Mudpaw." She said.




    As she sat there, another thought crossed her mind... he'd lived. [i]He'd lived! Could that mean... that he really was the exception, that they could be close? Or was it just luck he didn't die, luck that in all reality wouldn't happen again, that he'd die the next time they got closer? She didn't want to find out... but she didn't want to be without Mudpaw, either. Though, this was a discussion for a different time, one that wasn't needed to occur at this moment. Right now, all they needed to worry about was staying alive and finding shelter from this rain... and figuring out just exactly where they were.
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    template [c]lime
    graphic [c]heights
    lyrics [c]john mayer, great indoors
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    It looks blank without a background... D8
    But, on the bright side, I figured out double borders! 8D
    Aren't they pretty? xD


    Awesome!


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    If you're ready to post in the advanced boards you'd be able to find them yourself. :)


    Read the sentences aloud, and where you find that they're a bit short or lacking in detail, add some more.


    Example:


    Previous sentence: Examplekit has a brown tabby pelt. The stripes are thick and dark.


    Edited Sentence: Examplekit has a thick brown pelt with dark tabby stripes that cover her body from head to tail.


    There are several short or choppy sentence throughout the bio, mostly in your Roleplay Sample. :)