Posts by Aurora42

The gentle breeze lifted some of Paintedwind's wispy long fur, and she lay luxuriously in the late afternoon sun. Her blue-green eyes were slitted in pleasure as the rays soaked into her auburn-and-cream patched pelt. She had enjoyed the patch of catnip especially, and was in a sort of dreamy daze. She lifted her head to look around, hoping another cat would stop by and visit. Paintedwind was a wanderer, and therefore a loner, but that never meant that she didn't enjoy company.

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In a pale patch of moonlight, a bright red tabby sits back on his haunches. His aquamarine eyes stare avidly at the misty sky, watching the creamy orb in the sky. Gray fog swirls around the lone cat, and the dark sillhouettes of tombstones rise around him. Starblaze was reading prophecies, spoken to him by the Starclan.

Character Name: Dreampaw

Character Age: 5 moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: Cometclan

Rank: Kit, soon to be apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences): She is a short-furred silver tabby. Her build is petite and slightly chubby, with a short tail and overly large ears and eyes. Dark black stripes contrast against her light grey coat, and her eyes are dark silvery-green, with hints of yellow. She has a round but sweet face. She has a dark streak along her tail. She also has large paws for age, a sign that she'll grow to be a large cat
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Dreampaw has an insatiable curiosity, and loves to learn. She is highly intelligent for her age, and has quick wits and instincts. She dreams of becoming a medicine cat, because it seems like a science to her. She is often ostracized by other kits for her smarts, as well as having no mother. Yet she endures it, and is growing a vast patience. She tends to find herself chasing trouble due to her inability to resist discovering something new.
---Likes (at least 3): She loves to learn, and bothers the elders incessantly to hear their stories. She loves honey, as any kit does. She also adores flowers, and sneaks out to find some occasionally.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She hates being made fun of by the other kits, and hides her impatience with stupid cats. She extremely dislikes being talked down to, and will snap at elder cats who do.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She has fast instincts, and a quick mind; so is therefore a good problem solver. She also has sharp senses.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She chases trouble, and can be disrespectful to elders at times. She also questions everything, which can give her a shaky loyalty.

History (8 or more sentences): Dreampaw was last kit of an elder cat, named Greyshine, who passed away giving birth to her. She had no other denmates, and her first few months were very lonely. She spent her time bothering the elders and listening to their stories about clan life, culture, and warfare. She wandered Cometclan’s mansion for hours, inspecting every inch. Dreampaw watched and studied the medicine cat, who knew her mother in her last moments, and soaked as much knowledge about healing as she could. She was soon off adventuring the near woods, looking for herbs and plants. She was
disciplined by different queens, who didn’t really know what to do with her, except to isolate her. She grew used to being lonely, and learned to be satisfied with her sciences.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Dreampaw climbed down the rickety stairs, her dark grey paws landing lightly on each step. Her large, pointed ears were perked straight up, examining the area for the signs of any adult cats. Hearing none, she slipped out of the cracked wide door, and found herself blinking in the bright afternoon light. She glanced around, sniffing for her clan’s scent trails, and scampered off in the opposite direction. Her tiny nose was working furiously, searching for that unique scent, the tangy smell of cloves. She didn’t know what it was, but she was determined to find out.

Comments (optional):

Character Name: Thorntail

Character Age: 17 moons

Gender: Female

Alliance: Shadowclan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): She has thick, silvery white fur, with dark grey streaks along her back and tail. Her face is narrow and delicate, and she has dark forest green eyes. Her body is built delicately, but she has lean, tough muscles, and holds herself as an experienced fighter. She always stands tall and strong, making up for her small size in confidence. She has a white underbelly, with a fluffy mane around her chest and neck. She usually looks determined and slightly irritated.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Thorntail is a bit of a spiteful cat, finding her joy in battle. She has little use for socialization, beyond what is necessary to follow the Warrior code. She is a great strategist, and can use that skill to accomplish many tasks besides battle. She spends most of her time training and hunting, determined to be as productive and loyal to her clan as possible. She secretly wishes for friends and perhaps a mate, but covers her emotions in a tough exterior.
---Likes (at least 3): She thoroughly enjoys a good fight, and especially a challenging one. She likes to figure out puzzles, and to make her clan leader proud.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Cats who are overly emotional, and let weaknesses cloud their judgment. She hates cowards, and is especially suspicious to loners and kittypets.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is agile, quick, and strong, all skills to be a good Warrior. She is unwaveringly loyal, and will not tell a lie.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She is in love with a cat from a different clan, and finds herself testing her own clan loyalty by visiting him. She is also ridiculously stubborn, and can be competitive.

History (8 or more sentences): Thorntail was born and raised in Shadowclan. She grew up with a fiery aspiration, and trained diligently throughout her youth. She was allowed to become a warrior early in her apprenticeship after attacking and defeating an old loner tom who had been stealing the clan’s prey for months. Other warriors were often jealous of her exceptional hunting and battle skills. She grew competitive and jealous of their friendships in return. She met Snake, a dark calico tom, during a lone patrol, and has continued to meet with the grizzled, like-minded cat. Her heart is torn due to her fierce clan loyalty, but she is determined not to allow herself to become impregnated. She wishes to never have kits and become soft like her mother did.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Thorntail met the opposing force of cats with a wild snarl. Several Thunderclan cats had breached the territory, and the Thorntail and her patrol were infuriated. She threw herself into a orange she-cat, digging her claws and teeth deep into the cat’s flesh. She hung on fiercely, her back legs shredding the cat’s underbelly. The stranger yowled in pain, and struggled to be released from Thorntail’s iron grip. Certain that she got the message across, she let the she-cat go, swiping at her tail as she leapt away. The handful of outsiders hissed at the Shadowclan patrol before slinking back across the border. Thorntail grinned and her dark eyes flashed with the adrenaline rush pumping through her veins.

Comments (optional):

Character Name: Rose(blossom)

Character Age: 12

Gender: Female

Alliance: Shadowclan

Rank: Queen

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Roseblossom is a young, lithe tabby, with a creamy tan pelt. Pinkish-orange stripes crisscross across her back , nose and tail. Her eyes are a bright, ocean green. She has a long tail, that sweeps the ground if she lets it. Her paws are still a tad too large for her, since she still had yet to grow. She has a bit of the soft belly of a kittypet.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Roseblossom has a very sweet demeanor. She is very loving and caring, and melts when shown compassion. She is imaginative, and considers herself a story teller. She is very playful. She adapts very quickly, and is loyal to those she loves. She has a tender heart, and falls in love easily.
---Likes (at least 3): She loves young kittens, and telling them stories. She loves to feel useful, and enjoys simple play as much as any kit.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She doesn’t like judgmental cats, because they usually distrust her for once being a kittypet. She dislikes cats who are overly aggressive, and she is also sensitive to loud noises.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is very compassionate and caring. She will go out of her way to help another cat, especially a kit. She learns quickly, and is a good hunter.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She is considered soft and weak due to her large heart and kittypet past. She is fairly new to the wild, and she scares easily. She’s also too trusting, and can get her feelings hurt.

History (8 or more sentences): Rose was the child of a kittypet, and lived in a gorgeous house with her family during her youth. It was fairly enjoyable, if dull, and she grew up strong and beautiful. At a tender age, a local tom began to bother her. He ended up r.aping her, leaving her impregnated. She gave birth to only one surviving kit (Piper.) The tom continued to harass her, and she finally abandoned her suburban home. She learned to survive in the wild, and was absorbed into Shadowclan soon after making herself known. She learned the clan ways, and dedicated herself to the warrior code, as well as providing the clan with a future warrior.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Roseblossom was laid out luxuriously in the sun, the afternoon rays soaking into her ginger-striped coat. Her young and restless kit played nearby, batting dandelions and pouncing occasionally on Rose’s wiggling tail. She had a soft smile on her face, her eyes glowing with happiness. Even if not all of the surrounding cats accepted her, she knew that she and her kit were safe. She cleaned her coat, dreaming up a tale to share with the young ones. She had spruced up the Nursery with fragrant flowers and fresh moss, and was eagerly looking forward to relaxing inside with the kits.

Comments (optional): Her young kit was originally named Piper, but her clan name would be Hazelkit.

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Dreampaw-

Thorntail-




Roseblossom and Hazelkit-

I added those sentences to Dreampaw's appearance and edited her history. She and her mother weren't close to the medicine cat (I'm not sure who they are or how to find out exactly) but is it ok to say that Dreampaw studied them from a distance?

I suppose so, yes. It's my application for advanced posts as well, according to what I read. :) In fact, I was actually wondering if I could add more cats at a later time?

Unknown to the other two, Dreampaw had already found her way up into the hole. She peeked her silver tabby head out at the others, giggling. "While you guys were wrestling the dead two-legs, I found something awesome!" She disappeared back into its black emptiness.

Thorntail nodded in agreement with Applegaze. "I sure hope this stranger isn't a threat to the Clan's security," she said in a low voice.

That's no problem, but Thorntail is a she-cat (to clear that up.) Thanks so much! :)

Thanks for the description! I'll add her to the list of characters, and I'm pretty sure that since the main slots are filled, we can start soon. Thanks guys!

Thorntail was hunting in the desert, systematically slaying a den of scorpions. With the pile of prey at her paws, she heard the voices of cats nearby. The tough long warrior opened her jaws, tasting their dusty scent. A clan? Out in this wilderness? She wondered. Hesitantly, she stepped closer, the fresh-kill in her jaws.

Sounds awesome! I'll edit this asap! Thanks for the help. I can't wait to be approved! :)

Inside the small hole was a crevice, large enough for the small kits to call a cave. Dried flowers were bundled together with a shining red ribbon, and a few pieces of golden jewelry were piled near it. "What do you think it means?" Dreampaw wondered, pawing a gold chain encrusted with pearls.

Thorntail approaches Applegaze. "Perhaps we should make the camp aware, in case of an invasion?"

Character Name: Dreampaw

Character Age: 5 moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: Cometclan

Rank: Kit, soon to be apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences): She is a short-furred silver tabby. Her build is petite and slightly chubby, with a short tail and overly large ears and eyes. Dark black stripes contrast against her light grey coat, and her eyes are dark silvery-green, with hints of yellow. She has a round but sweet face. She has a dark streak along her tail. She also has large paws for age, a sign that she'll grow to be a large cat
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Dreampaw has an insatiable curiosity, and loves to learn. She is highly intelligent for her age, and has quick wits and instincts. She dreams of becoming a medicine cat, because it seems like a science to her. She is often ostracized by other kits for her smarts, as well as having no mother. Yet she endures it, and is growing a vast patience. She tends to find herself chasing trouble due to her inability to resist discovering something new.
---Likes (at least 3): She loves to learn, and bothers the elders incessantly to hear their stories. She loves honey, as any kit does. She also adores flowers, and sneaks out to find some occasionally.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She hates being made fun of by the other kits, and hides her impatience with stupid cats. She extremely dislikes being talked down to, and will snap at elder cats who do.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She has fast instincts, and a quick mind; so is therefore a good problem solver. She also has sharp senses.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She chases trouble, and can be disrespectful to elders at times. She also questions everything, which can give her a shaky loyalty.

History (8 or more sentences): Dreampaw was last kit of an elder cat, named Greyshine, who passed away giving birth to her. She had no other denmates, and her first few months were very lonely. She spent her time bothering the elders and listening to their stories about clan life, culture, and warfare. She wandered Cometclan’s mansion for hours, inspecting every inch. Dreampaw watched and studied the medicine cat, who knew her mother in her last moments, and soaked as much knowledge about healing as she could. She was soon off adventuring the near woods, looking for herbs and plants. She was
disciplined by different queens, who didn’t really know what to do with her, except to isolate her. She grew used to being lonely, and learned to be satisfied with her sciences.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Dreampaw climbed down the rickety stairs, her dark grey paws landing lightly on each step. Her large, pointed ears were perked straight up, examining the area for the signs of any adult cats. Hearing none, she slipped out of the cracked wide door, and found herself blinking in the bright afternoon light. She glanced around, sniffing for her clan’s scent trails, and scampered off in the opposite direction. Her tiny nose was working furiously, searching for that unique scent, the tangy smell of cloves. She didn’t know what it was, but she was determined to find out.

Comments (optional):
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Character Name: Thorntail

Character Age: 17 moons

Gender: Female

Alliance: Shadowclan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): She has thick, silvery white fur, with dark grey streaks along her back and tail. Her face is narrow and delicate, and she has dark forest green eyes. Her body is built delicately, but she has lean, tough muscles, and holds herself as an experienced fighter. She always stands tall and strong, making up for her small size in confidence. She has a white underbelly, with a fluffy mane around her chest and neck. She usually looks determined and slightly irritated.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Thorntail is a bit of a spiteful cat, finding her joy in battle. She has little use for socialization, beyond what is necessary to follow the Warrior code. She is a great strategist, and can use that skill to accomplish many tasks besides battle. She spends most of her time training and hunting, determined to be as productive and loyal to her clan as possible. She secretly wishes for friends and perhaps a mate, but covers her emotions in a tough exterior.
---Likes (at least 3): She thoroughly enjoys a good fight, and especially a challenging one. She likes to figure out puzzles, and to make her clan leader proud.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Cats who are overly emotional, and let weaknesses cloud their judgment. She hates cowards, and is especially suspicious to loners and kittypets.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is agile, quick, and strong, all skills to be a good Warrior. She is unwaveringly loyal, and will not tell a lie.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She is in love with a cat from a different clan, and finds herself testing her own clan loyalty by visiting him. She is also ridiculously stubborn, and can be competitive.

History (8 or more sentences): Thorntail was born and raised in Shadowclan. She grew up with a fiery aspiration, and trained diligently throughout her youth. She was allowed to become a warrior early in her apprenticeship after attacking and defeating an old loner tom who had been stealing the clan’s prey for months. Other warriors were often jealous of her exceptional hunting and battle skills. She grew competitive and jealous of their friendships in return. She met Snake, a dark calico tom, during a lone patrol, and has continued to meet with the grizzled, like-minded cat. Her heart is torn due to her fierce clan loyalty, but she is determined not to allow herself to become impregnated. She wishes to never have kits and become soft like her mother did.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Thorntail met the opposing force of cats with a wild snarl. Several Thunderclan cats had breached the territory, and the Thorntail and her patrol were infuriated. She threw herself into a orange she-cat, digging her claws and teeth deep into the cat’s flesh. She hung on fiercely, her back legs shredding the cat’s underbelly. The stranger yowled in pain, and struggled to be released from Thorntail’s iron grip. Certain that she got the message across, she let the she-cat go, swiping at her tail as she leapt away. The handful of outsiders hissed at the Shadowclan patrol before slinking back across the border. Thorntail grinned and her dark eyes flashed with the adrenaline rush pumping through her veins.

Comments (optional):

Character Name: Rose(blossom)

Character Age: 12

Gender: Female

Alliance: Shadowclan

Rank: Queen

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Roseblossom is a young, lithe tabby, with a creamy tan pelt. Pinkish-orange stripes crisscross across her back , nose and tail. Her eyes are a bright, ocean green. She has a long tail, that sweeps the ground if she lets it. Her paws are still a tad too large for her, since she still had yet to grow. She has a bit of the soft belly of a kittypet.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Roseblossom has a very sweet demeanor. She is very loving and caring, and melts when shown compassion. She is imaginative, and considers herself a story teller. She is very playful. She adapts very quickly, and is loyal to those she loves. She has a tender heart, and falls in love easily.
---Likes (at least 3): She loves young kittens, and telling them stories. She loves to feel useful, and enjoys simple play as much as any kit.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She doesn’t like judgmental cats, because they usually distrust her for once being a kittypet. She dislikes cats who are overly aggressive, and she is also sensitive to loud noises.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is very compassionate and caring. She will go out of her way to help another cat, especially a kit. She learns quickly, and is a good hunter.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She is considered soft and weak due to her large heart and kittypet past. She is fairly new to the wild, and she scares easily. She’s also too trusting, and can get her feelings hurt.

History (8 or more sentences): Rose was the child of a kittypet, and lived in a gorgeous house with her family during her youth. It was fairly enjoyable, if dull, and she grew up strong and beautiful. At a tender age, a local tom began to bother her. He ended up r.aping her, leaving her impregnated. She gave birth to only one surviving kit (Piper.) The tom continued to harass her, and she finally abandoned her suburban home. She learned to survive in the wild, and was absorbed into Shadowclan soon after making herself known. She learned the clan ways, and dedicated herself to the warrior code, as well as providing the clan with a future warrior.

Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Roseblossom was laid out luxuriously in the sun, the afternoon rays soaking into her ginger-striped coat. Her young and restless kit played nearby, batting dandelions and pouncing occasionally on Rose’s wiggling tail. She had a soft smile on her face, her eyes glowing with happiness. Even if not all of the surrounding cats accepted her, she knew that she and her kit were safe. She cleaned her coat, dreaming up a tale to share with the young ones. She had spruced up the Nursery with fragrant flowers and fresh moss, and was eagerly looking forward to relaxing inside with the kits.

Comments (optional): Her young kit was originally named Piper, but her clan name would be Hazelkit.

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OH!! I'm so sorry! Lol, I didn't know! If this thread can be deleted, I can start all over, clean and neat! Sorry about that!