Posts by snowfeather

ooc: sorry! she dident eat! !!!

feather snorted she hated that feeling of love she once loved but it had been riped away from her like a peace of flesh she growled low before turning and spining out of camp her tail up

ooc: I WANT DRAMA DIS IS MAKING ME SNORE
ic: feather raced though the forest her silver fur shinning tears streaming down the sides of her cheeks she ran faster and faster untill she reached a lake feather sat down and looked at her reflection she hit the water with her paw in anger

ooc:brb

she nodded then lunged for a fish grabing it making water fly up every where she smiled "like that?" her silver fur turning gray from the water the water droplets clung to her fur making it shine

feather looked up a huge black wolf stood in the water the water around the wolf was black it looked like a demon "hello" it said in a voice like a snake

shardclaw snarled at the darkclan cats his anger and fear blinding him his eyes glowed a evil yellow "you shameless rats hunting a clan for food" [when angry shardclaw can become a vary evil strong warrior hes not able to kill when he is like this] his black pelt let off some sort of black smoke he looked like a demon- from the dark forest

ooc: OK hi jayeye here the plot- shardclaw likes jayeye but he also likes this she-cat from riverclan and is sad he has to chose but he gose with jayeye but the she-cat [shimmerwing] has his kit [copperkit] and he is mates with jayeye and they has kits [idk]! ok but we can change the plot if it gets boring ^^

ooc: OK hi jayeye here the plot- shardclaw likes jayeye but he also likes this she-cat from riverclan and is sad he has to chose but he gose with jayeye but the she-cat [shimmerwing] has his kit [copperkit] and he is mates with jayeye and they has kits [idk]! ok but we can change the plot if it gets boring ^^
sorry had to make two messed up on the other one

black [wolf] saw a loner his huge black pelt melting in to the darkness he was a huge timber wolf
shardclaw padded around in the territory he was hunting

er whitestar car u rp from third person please.... 1. when you say i it could mean your talking about any one.... 2. its annoying and hard sto understand :) thanks
black saw the loner turning and he closed his eyes so they couldn't be seen

ooc: ok im leaving this tread u guys cant rp.... no offense

shardclaw lept at the darkclan leader
ooc: lets skip the fighting part cause there not here
ic: shardclaw lay in a pool of blood panting he had one scar going down his side it was bleeding heavly starclan NO i i cant die-not now he yowled in his mind

ooc: lol hi i have a tom but- he loves a nother cat they can be friends!!
shardclaw padded alone holding a large bird he sneezed and the bird droped out of his mouth he looked up and saw mintleaf "hi" he called

shardclaw saw what was going on he snarled with hate his black pelt bloody from the cats he had killed [i know late!] shardclaw hated boneclan he hated rouges [idk] shardclaw hissed from his tree as teh boneclan cats retreaded he leaped on lazuli clawing at her ripping tuffs of fur out[/i]

shardclaw snarled "im going to die why are you just standing there" he rolled over to face one last darkclan cat he stood shakley to his feet he narrowed his eyes before racing at the cat and slashing the cats sides the cat kicked him away and he landed in the sand there was a loud snap and shardclaw yowled he had broke his leg he snarled anger burning like fire he leaped at the cat he looked just like tigerstar before landing and killing it,then shardclaw fell and passed out

he hissed [he masked his sent] he masked his voice making it sound deep and evil "im taking back what is rightfully mine" he snarled before snaking into the woods and into the lake

Rudeness Edited Out By Staff.

he snarled unleashing his claws his voice darker "its what is mine-my soul" he leaped into the tree and faded into the branches he new windclan cats couldn`t clime

shardclaw felt the power of one thousand stars in his paws he rose and spun before looking at the deer running at him he stood on his hindlegs unleashed his claws and yowled the deer stoped and looked at him before turning and backing out of camp