Posts by DCH-Flame101

[br]I am a ghostly-looking tom with determination in my eyes and youthful, kit-like features. I tend to get in trouble a lot, but I have a way of being two steps ahead of most other cats.
[br]My brother was killed by a badger.

Orangeflare just then walked into the den. "Hello, I'm looking for buddies, too. I'm Orangeflare."

"Okay, we should probably give some time for our apprentices." Orangeflare thought.
He left just for a moment out of the den. "I'll meet you at the exit, just let me go get Swiftshine,
my apprentice." Orangeflare padded over to the Apprentice's Den, where Swiftshine was talking
with the others. "Swiftshine, we're about to go on a Border Patrol. Do you want to come with us?"
"Yes!" Swiftshine excitedly answered.

[br]I am a very long-furred tom with vivid eyes and backward-curling ears. I am always blabbing and cannot keep a secret, but I never tell a lie.
[br]My best friend was murdered by an unknown cat.

Note: Swiftshine was changed. Dewpelt is now my apprentice. Sorry, I messed up. :|

Orangeflare & Dewpelt(Swiftshine, whatever you prefer) just got back from the Apprentice's Den.
There, Goldenflower and the others were at the exit. "Is everyone ready, along with they're apprentice?" Orangeflare asked the small group of cats. :)

(Note: Yes, but I prefer calling him that in the story, but as Orangeflare, yes.)
"Okay, let's go." Orangeflare exclaimed. "I haven't been on a Border patrol before," Dewpaw thought, nervously.

"How about the border nearby Riverclan?" Dewpaw suggested. "Hey, that's what I was gonna choose." Orangeflare thought, suprised at Dewpaw chose. "Nice choice, Dewpaw. Does anybody agree with the Riverclan borderside?" Orangeflare asked.

The group then headed North-West towards the border, only to find that Riverclan was stealing prey, once again - like around the time Firestar was first a apprentice. "Really?" Orangeflare thought, his blood speeding through his body with rage.

"Yes, but how come they try taking Sunningrocks back so many times?" Orangeflare thought, very confused.

"Yes, I guess you're right." Orangeflare meowed, quietly as he could scent the nearby Riverclan cats.

"Come on, we need to tell the leader & the deputy, so that they can plan a counterattacker to get Sunningrocks back." Dewpaw told the rest of the group. "Whoa, he's acting as if he's a Warrior already." Orangeflare thought. "Maybe he should become one soon..."

The group of cats suddenly disbanded at the enterance, searching for the Deputy & the Leader. "We've got to hurry!" Orangeflare flashed to Flowerheart.

Orangeflare and Dewpaw headed towards the area where the Deputy might've been.

"I guess it's time to battle with them." Orangeflare pointed out. "Yes. Let's be ready for our first attack." Dewpaw meowed, crouching down, ready to pounce Riverclan.

"Attack!" The battle cry was let out, with a mass of cats flying at 5 warriors at once.

Note: Okay, good night. I've got something at 5pm tomorrow, so I can post until then.

Orangeflare's body was gashing, opening up with blood, his apprentice laying down, not dead, but asleep from his wounds, "We need...help." Orangeflare padded over to his apprentice, Dewpaw, and carried him to the Thunderclan camp, but the rouges were following. "I need to speed up." Orangeflare thought as he scented the 6 rouges nearby.

[br]I am a short furred she-cat with determination in my eyes and a torn right ear. I am not very good looking as cats go, but I never tell a lie.
[br]I was the favourite of my mother out of the four of us in our litter growing up. Our father was fairer about our treatment, but he was always out on patrols. My mother doting on me as a kit provoked great jealousy from the others, and I withdrew from them. When I went into training I threw all my effort into it. My mother still visits me much and I am clearly still her favourite.

Orangeflare called to his apprentice, "Dewpaw, you go right, I've got left!" "Okay, got it!" Dewpaw meowed. They each sprinted from the middle of the area and disbanded, flying at one warrrior - one who he'd never seen before. They were confused about what the tom's/she-cat's name was. But at that moment, it didn't matter.