Posts by paspaul321

Cat's Name: Sandfire
Cat's Age: Sixteen Moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: Loner
Position: Loner
Appearance: <blockquote>Sandfire is a little bit bigger than normal. He's very muscular under short ginger fur. His fur is also dapped with small red spots. He as blue eyes. His tail is short and sleek. He as a torned out ear.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>Sandfire hates taking orders, he's very selfish. He does not like sharing prey and is very prudent when he see's an other cat. He does not think he's that good but will always try to show no pain or no fear. He pitys Clan cats because they have to follow rules. He dosent like to fight. But if you push im hard enough, he can willingly fight back. He likes to hunt and knows if a cat is in need of something.</blockquote>History: <blockquote>Sandfire was born in an old mansion, on a couch with is two sisters Chilly and Rose. He never knew his father. His mother called him Sandfire in her admiration for clan cats. Eight moons after is mother died of an unlucky fall than a rocky slope. He and his sisters had to fend for themselves till they met a group of rogues. they were accepted in this group were Sandfire stayed for three moons. He left after being chase aways for not listening to orders and questionning his leader. He now lives alone in an old bagger hole and hides from any cats he see's.</blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote>Sandfire crouched slowly towards a mouse in the ferns. Sundenly a pawstep noise maked him spin around to see a small gray tom looking at him puzzled,
"Who are you! You scared me to death!"
The intruder slowly sat down then mewed "Sorry I dint mean to scare you, my name is Picollo I live in a house no far from here."
Sandfire crouched low and narrowed is eyes.
"A Kittypet!"
Picollo quicly replied "No wait i want no harm!"</blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote></blockquote>

Thank you for cheking and guiding me, im redoing it rigth away!

Ok i have fixed it just waiting for aprroval thanks alot!

Ok thanks alot for bhot youre help i understand know. Thanks alot this should be approoved tomorrow!

Here all fixed up should be apprrooved an looking for RP buddy as soon as it is. Thanks for all your help. Im Canadian so i have a bit of probs with English but thanks to all!

Sandfire looked up to the high branches and trees. He was looking for a place to sleep and possibly a territory were he could hunt. After is long journey he tought these woods would be a new home. He found a small bush and crept under it to suddenly fall asleep.

Sandfire woke up and saw a tom pacing a few tail lenghts away.
He wondered if that was wath woke him up and deicded to follow this intruder. he kept hidden behind trees thus keeping up with the tom, wich looked injured.

Oops! Sandfire got spotted, he dint exactly know wath to do and dint want to get into a fight. The ginger tom decided to act friendly with this intruder. He'll probably learn more this way than fighting.
"Hi, sorry to disturb you but you woke me up and id like to know why!?".

"I dont know who you are or wath you want but this place is my territory and youre tresspassing it"Quicly replied Sandfire.
"If you want a fight than go away if not I'd like to know the reason of youre anger"
The ginger tom crouched low into a defensif stance, he dint feel like fighting and really dint want to get all scratched up by this odd looking and apperently angry tom.

"Okay its not my territorry but youre still tresspassing it"
(Or maybe im just being fussy) He thought.
"Okay im sorry its just been a long day and i dont want to fight either, peace?"

Sandfire looked lost and jump from paw to paw.
"I dont know but if you do I would be pleased to know."
"Even if, I'd rather not have to fight, and i wont take orders easly!"
He mewed quickly.

"Wath do you mean" Sandfire mewed aloud to take this tom out of its trance.

"Can you hear me!?" Squealed Sandfire. He was feeling guilty about these words and wanted the tom to stop, no matter wath.
"Wath your name?" He sundenlly tried asking."Mine's Sandfire".

Cat's Name: Silverkit
Cat's Age: three moons
Gender: She-Cat
Alliance: WindClan
Position: Kit
Appearance: <blockquote>Silverkit has a blue fur dappled with spark of gray and white. She has ice-blue eyes and a small tail. She is quite small and has the body stucture of a runner. Silverkit as a fluffy tail and very blue paws.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>Silverkit like to ply and run. She hates small and confined areas.
She wants to be the best warrior of her clan and cant wait to be apprenticed. She's very stubborn. Silverkit is also quite shy and craves to always prove loyalties. She is not careful and like to jump into action.</blockquote>History: <blockquote>Silverkit was born in the nursery with her two other sisters. Her mom was a cat named Inktail, her father is Talonfur. Both her sisters died during a hard leafbare. Silverkit also had an adventure trying to hunt and almost got killed. The She-cat is also very curious and puts her nose in everything. She thinks Tomcats are stupid furballs.</blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote></blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote></blockquote>

Well that was a bad start. Sandfire thought. He flick his tails towards his temporary sleeping area and ask Haki "Want to hunt, I would'nt mine. Do you know where we can find shelter, its getting dark."

all done, waiting for approval

"Well then, come on and lets try to find something!" Sandfire starting to pace away he quicly added: "And stop mumbling, it makes you look even worse."

"Wow sorry, its when you flare up or bend down, your wounds swell. Its makes you look quite scary to be honest." Sandfire dint want to start a fight after this, i just wanted to eat sleep and deal with it tommorow." Do you know any herbs to help those wounds of yours, I dont want to be pushy be you could, for the best, wash them." Then Sandfire stop and scented the air, he spotted a vole but was waiting for Haki's answer before he would move.

"Okay, then lets get on to hunting if your fine." Sandfire replied, trying to match Haki's tone.
He pounced up on that vole he scented.

Quicly eating up, Sandfire scented the air again for another cathc, he thought about Haki, in wich possible things the bicolored knew about this place.