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Character Name: Scartail
Character Age:25 moons (He has been a warrior for about 1 year now)
Gender:Tom
Alliance:He is with BraveClan, and the leader is named Hawkstar (I made up BraveClan)
Rank:Deputy
Appearance (6 or more sentences):Scartail has a long, dark orange pelt with black paws, chest, and black stripes on his back. He has deep green eyes and is mildly muscly. His whiskers aren't very long. Their is a small black stripe on his tail that looks kind of like a scratch (How he got his name). His legs aren't very long. He got the orange color from his mother. (His father's pelt is gray)
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):He is nice and caring most of the time, but very defendant of his friends and family. Sometimes he can make strangers who have never met him feel shy and uneasy around him. If he trusts someone, he makes friends with them easily. If he doesn't, it is hard to get him to trust you. He doesn't have a mate, but he is good friends with Softpelt, a she-cat in his clan. He can get very sad and sometimes kind of mad if you talk about his father, Bravestar (Former leader of BraveClan) who was killed by rogues, so it would be best if you didn't bring it up.
---Likes (at least 3): Unlike most cats, he likes the snow of Leaf-Bare, and he likes running as fast as he can through open territory. His favorite piece of fresh kill is a squirrel.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): He prefers cold over hot weather, and dislikes very hot days (like i said above, he likes snow) He also hates falling long distances. The last thing that he dislikes is very strict instuctions and guidelines. ( He likes to be more free)
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): He is a fast runner, and an excellent hunter. He is friendly if you choose to be friendly towards him.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): He can't climb trees very well (He dislikes falling from long distances). He is a horrible swimmer, and is secretly afraid of badgers.
History (8 or more sentences): His mother disappeared into a twolegplace when he was an apprentice, and his father, Bravestar was leader of his clan. He was good friends with Hawkpaw, another BraveClan apprentice. Eventually they both became warriors, and Hawkfur became the deputy. Eventually, Scartail's father, Bravestar, was killed by rogues, the deputy, Hawkfur, became Hawkstar. The new leader of BraveClan made Scartail the deputy. Even though Scartail was very sad at the loss of both his parents, he was still a very strong warrior. The rogues don't haunt the forest much anymore, but Scartail is usually the first to chase them off when one is sighted. Several moons after Bravestar's death, life in BraveClan has gone back to normal. But things won't be normal for long....
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Scartail crept out of the warriors den into the BraveClan camp. He was a warrior of BraveClan, and his father, Bravestar, was the leader. It was a hot day, the sun just rising over the horizon, so the air was filled with a orangish glow. There didn’t appear to be anything wrong.
The camp was large compared to the other clan camps he had visited, with dirt on the ground and dens made of rock. His father, Bravestar’s den was underground, there were also rocks surrounding the clearing for protection.
He padded to the fresh kill pile and picked out a small mouse, he wasn’t very hungry. A warrior and an elder, Softpelt and her father, Sunfoot, were sharing fresh kill by a bare spot in the ground that had no grass. Scartail couldn’t tell them apart because they were almost identical gray and white tabbies.
Only until he heard the one on the left mutter in a scratchy voice, “This mouse is scrawny, can’t our warriors catch decent prey?”, he knew it was the grouchy elder, Sunfoot.
Comments (optional): One of the reasons that I love to RP is becuase, with other people, it's more exciting than telling the story of a warrior by yourself. If you have oter actual people playing the other cats in your clan, you never know what might happen next, and they all have their own unique personalities.
