Posts by Ravenflight12

"So whats your name?" Dogglare asked the kit.

Dogglare padded into the opening twolegs yuck! he thought. he sniffed the air whats that delicous smell!!

Another cat leaped onto the dog Switstripe was on a she cat with amazing green eyes "need any help?" said Swifttail.

Dogglare ran up to Moonshine "um can i help... with the hunting?"he asked.

(where is brassstar im sure i never see him/her commenting!)
"is Brassstar ill or something becuse where in starclan's name is he!" said Ravenflight angrilly

"thanks" he said. he dipped his head and scented the air..... mouse! Dogglae crept foward to is scource and at the last muinet he leaped. he came back to the group with a mouse in his jaws. "here i suppose you're hungry after traveling." he said putting gthe prey at the cats feet.

Suddenly a vioce from nowhere hissed "what are you doing on thundeclan territory!!" it hissed.

"yes i would quite like to know that too!" Ravenflight padded into the den "you are one of us arnt you, Brassstar doesnt keep me posted these days..." he grumbled. he was pitch black with a white left paw and a stripe on his face healso had a white chest. the sun high sunlight glistened on his fur.

"i care beuse that is thunderclan prey!!!" he hissed and scratched the cats face i have better not missed!!

"easy, easy i wont hurt you " he said looking at the kit . he sat down and wraped his tail around his paws to look less dangerous. "im Ravenflight of thunderclan , now what are you doing in the thunderclan nursery?" he asked kindly. "dont worry i will hurt no kit thunderclan, shadowclan or loner" he said.

"youd better not be sarcastic with me!" Ravenflight snapped. "or i will get the whole of thunderclan!"

"so why are you here in thunderclan?" Ravenflight asked again.

"thats! what will happen when cats mess with cats like me and Blackheart." a hint of a hiss in his voice.

(i am talking to all of you) "so you where born here where you?" he said to shadow "what about you Sky?" he asked.

"your welcome"

"good . so whats your name?" he still didnt put his claws away just in case.

"me too! before i met you i felt so shy and would not talk to anyone but now ive met you i feel we can take on the world together" Swifttail purred

"Ravenflight, so why are you in thunderclan terretory?" this was a queston not a threat Ravenflight looked relaxed and non threating.

Dogglare leaped into the air but then suddenly stoped "NO! no more fighting i will not do it no more! this cat is right flicking his tail at Death, i will not be deputy of your anti clan.i have found that clans are a good home and you can gain from living in one. thankyou" he dipped his head to Death "you have shown me the error of my ways" he started to padd off into the forest.

Ravenflight's hairs along his neak raised "i am asking you becuse you are in the thunderclan nurserry!!" he hissed.