Character Name: Echomelody
Character Age: 17 moons
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: RiverClan
Rank: Queen
Appearance (6 or more sentences): A long-furred brown she-cat. Long tufts of fur hang out of her big curved ears. She has round elegant golden-yellow eyes that shimmer all the time enthusiasticaly. You can almost always read her expression except when she's far off. Her small agile paws are very dark grey and stand out against brown. What really stands out is her Florida-shaped splash of bright orange across her left eye. Her mew is a soothing mother sounding kind of voice. Her nose is brownish-pink.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): A fun-to-be-around cat. She is graceful and very talented in a lot of things. She can get crazy at times, though. Her enthusiastic ways help her try new things in life. She is warm-hearted and likes to help first-time-queens. Other than her kind and loving ways, you can see her bad side at times. She is forgetful and is mouse-brained sometimes. If she doesn't like you and you upset her- Watch out! She'll shred you before you can say, mousetail! Also, she is mean when she is in a bad mood but that doesn't happen much. She always seems far away. Other than that she may seem like a medicine cat. To sum it up, she is loyal and caing but when you get on her bad side, bad things may happen.
---Likes (at least 3): Kits, helping, hunting, leading, and the warrior code
--- Dislikes (at least 3): fighting/bloodshed, being disloyal, secretive cats, rain, and the thunderpath
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):hunting, having kits, and balance, and swiftness
---Weaknesses (At least 3):fighting, seeing a cat in pain, killing, and thinking about her(dead) sister. and she is not good at defence either. She is like a kmacose type of a cat.
History (8 or more sentences): When she was a kit, Echomelody-Echokit then- went exploring with her sister, Dawnkit, and her brother, Lionkit. They explored until they finally found what they were looking for. The Thunderpath. They had heard many stories about it and wanted to see it for themselves. Dawnkit wanted to know what the mysterious path felt like. So Dawnkit stepped onto the scorching hot path. She hopped in suprise farther onto the path. By that time they heard a very loud rumbling coming from the path. They didn't know what it could be. The rumbling still got louder yet and pretty soon Dawnkit was used to the hotness and called the other kits to come play on the path with her. They finally found out what it was as a huge black monster roared past. A loud thump sounded from the path. She stared at a brown dappled coat lying on the thunderpath, unmoving. She rushed to her dead sisters side. "You'll be okay." She murmured into her sisters' ear, "Our Medicine cat will fix you up." But by that time her sisters bruised body was growing cold. Some warriors appeared by the thunderpath and helped carry her dead sisters body back to camp. Today, she still rembers that day perfectly.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Echomelody was waiting in the rain, fishing. She just hated rain. It always seemed to soak her thick pelt to the bone. After a few heartbeats, some kind of HUGE orange fish appeared in the water. She scooped her paw in and felt slimy scales of the mysterious golden fish. In fact it WAS huge indeed! Enough to fill at least 3 cats' hungry bellies! She hurried up and sunk her teeth into the fish and killed it quickly. She stated to haul her enormous catch back to camp. Her neck was aching by th time she reached the camp. As she entered, every cat stared at her and the golden fish. ' Now THIS was going to be news' She thought excitedly.
Comments (optional): ima look for some people to play as my kits. Frogkit, A grey tomkit, and Sunkit, almost and exact copy of her mother- she-kit.
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