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||øøƈ|| My characters are both talking to someone, but I could make her go away....I'll do it in the next post and natsumiumi I'm not trying to be rude it's just so we can include her.
||ıƈ|| Riddle couldn't help the corners of her lip cracking in a small smile. "Well, at least you're unique. Although I can't say we have that in common." She stared into her drink swirling it slightly as she though of what else to say.
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||ıƈ||Elizabeth looked at her score and blew a bubble, a 100% as per the norm. She quietly walked into the hallway and 'accidentally' tried to book-check Sara.
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||øøƈ|| Sorry if my posts are bad it's my first time playing the snotty mean girl.
||ıƈ|| Elizabeth walked away a smirk on her lips she didn't look back. She repositioned her books on her hip and turned to go to her next class.
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||ıƈ|| Riddle gave a slight curtsy and walked away a little bit relieved. Her stomach loosened and the nervousness disappeared.
Hawk thought for a moment,"Where I lived and grew up in Spain it was by the coast, it had beautiful beaches and started my love of art. France was another matter entirely I was studying in Paris so it was bustling with activity but had great food and good views. But overall I guess I came here because I needed a break." Hawk pulled out his sketch pad and leafed through to his two favorite pictures each representing part of him. Spain his past and France his future. A picture fell out but Hawk didn't notice. (The last one)
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||øøƈ|| Sure, and sorry I'm starting to get tons of homework :(
||ıƈ|| (If it's morning) Brianna stretched as she saw the sun peeking over the horizon and looked down at the meal she had made, satisfied.
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||ıƈ|| Melody smiled although she was a little sad she missed the nachos, "Let's dance." She turned up her music and it immediately amplified to an earthquaking sound. Several hero hunter just turned to ash because the pressure was too intense.
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||øøƈ|| Sorry I haven't been on it what seems like forever! ...Riddle needs a guy...
||ıƈ|| Hawk smiled a little embarrassed by her commenting on his artwork then his cheeks flushed a little as he asked, "Would you like to go to the ball with me?"
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||øøƈ|| Fine by me, to complicate things a little.
||ıƈ|| Elizabeth stared at Jake's retreating back wishing she could rack up the courage to talk to him.
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||øøƈ|| I'm really sorry, I normally can't post often now that I'm in school. If I don't respond right away please be merciful to me I'm try to post A.S.A.P.
||ıƈ|| Brianna looked at the others and smiled brightly, "Are you guys hungry?"
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||ıƈ|| Melody poked out her pouty lip, music helped her focus. "But it makes the battle seem so much more intense."
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||øøƈ|| Timekeeper we've been wanting to rp for a while and you mentioned how you needed help with your writing so here we go. *Cracks knuckles* let's get started. I want you to give me an sample (about 3 sentences long) of your writing, so I can get to know your style, sentence structure, and descriptiveness. We'll begin here and I'll give you some pointers along the way.
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||øøƈ|| Yeah for longer posts! Other then her dad what is the plot?
||ıƈ|| "It's no problem I'm glad you guys enjoy it." But she knew they were well aware of the rations. Brianna's smile was bittersweet as her mind swirled with memories. "Well, my mom, but technically she just memorized the recipes and how to do it. She burned everything, so we had an unanimous vote in our house that I should cook from that moment on." She bit into her apple marveling at the taste, she hadn't had sugar or cinnamon in years.
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||ıƈ|| Melody shrugged choking a little with memories, "Hey, I gave you earplugs and told you to use them. It was your choice."
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||øøƈ|| See here the idea's fine but you need to really organize your thoughts so they flow better. You also have run on sentences and repeat yourself.
Here's an example (Although I'm changing it a little to fit with my idea.):
Ally looked around at the lab before her. Everything was a spotless white and the smell of antiseptic made her stomach turn. She didn't know how long she'd been there or even how she had arrived for that matter. Ally shivered at the eerie silence, it was unnerving she tried to stand but found she was chained. Well, that's unusual for a hospital. She thought while stopping the struggle to stand. Her knees caved in and she sat roughly on the edge of the hospital bed. Her phone rang and Ally mindlessly looked at the number hoping it was her dad calling to tell her this was a dream. But she didn't even recognize the number. The ringing filled the deathly quiet and to keep from going completely insane Ally answered it. "Hello?" "This is Agent Kay, it's ready. We need you now." The emphasis was unmistakable, it was obviously important. Ally talked quickly into the phone, "I think you've got the wrong number." But there was only static on the other line and she heard a beep as the call disconnected. She slumped over trying to rub the raw spots on her wrist. Questions ran endlessly through her mind. Wasn't this exactly how this nightmare had started the last time? How she'd been kidnapped. Interrupting her train of thought Ally's stomach tightened as the door opened and a hollow voice filled her ears, "I hope you're enjoying your stay, the fun's just beginning."
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