Posts by Shunky

OOC: Having two mentors is fine! I asked a mod and they said it's fine! =D

"Good. We will continue your training tomorrow, right now I have some business to take care of." Sealpaw told him. No need to alert him of danger, he won't be able to do anything anyways, she thought. This is between me and the bear, he won't know what to do. The only thing to do is keep him away from it's den.......where my kittens are.

When Tawney awoke, she couldn't see outside the den for how fast the snow came down. Or maybe it was because there was snow blocking her exit? Lionflame was nowhere to be seen, and when she stood, her joints were stiff with the cold. She tottered to her feet and realised her tummy was fatter, not to mention heavier. With a jolt of surprise, she realised she would have kittens within the next month.
It was hard to move out in the storm, because she couldn't see, hear, or smell anything but snow and cold. But her heart led her, deep into an evergreen patch. She searched high and low, deep in the snow to the tops of the trees, but no matter how hard she tried she couldn't find Lionflame. She broke down on the last tree, sitting on a well sheltered branch, and cried. "Lionflame! Lionflameeeee!!!!!" She screamed, but the wind whipped the words back into her mouth. She yelled for hours in the snow, watching, waiting, praying the the StarClan, that he would come back to her. But nothing answered her desperate cries on that day, and she sensed nothing ever would. In this storm, nothing short of a miracle would bring Lionflame back to her.
She curled up in a tight ball around her tummy, trying in a futile attempt to keep her body and kittens warm, and fell asleep still crying out for her beloved mate. Her body forced her to keep calling out that night, in a way to keep alive, and though it worked, Tawney wished it had not, for without her Lionflame, she felt nothing at all. The wind was like a thousand shards of ice against her fur, the snow was like sinking into a frozen lake, the cold like a biting frost, but she couldn't feel it. Nothing touched her, nothing could reach her in her depressed state, nothing but Lionflame.

Fawnheart stepped onto the high rock over looking her beautiful clan. Looking down, she saw her two newest clanners, Scarepaw and Hazelgaze. She had accepted them earlier that day. Being a healing cat, she looked them over to see if they were hurt. Seeing no injuries, she smiled and troted back to her den. She laid down and waited for the day to begin.

Sealpaw glanced back and caught Beepaw's eye. With a cold stare, she silently warned him to stay back. She wouldn't have him getting hurt. Turning back around, she picked up her feet and ran to the den, then stalked quietly in. The bear was asleep, her kittens laid in the corner. Only one of them breathed and felt warm, and with tears in her eyes she picked it up in her jaws, quietly willing it not to cry.

OOC: I'd better go make my kitten's character!

Character Name:
Maykit
Character Age:
3 moons
Gender:
female
Alliance:
Thunderclan
Rank:
Kit/apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences):

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
---Likes (at least 3):
--- Dislikes (at least 3):
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
---Weaknesses (At least 3):

History (8 or more sentences):

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):

Comments (optional):

"So, you were a kittypet huh?" Riverpad stalked over to the cat and walked aroun her, sniffing the new kitten.

Character Name: Rustling Wind
NicnameWind
Character Age:6 years

Gender:female

Alliance:ThunderClan

Rank:soon-to-be queen, was a warrior and knows medicine

Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Let's start from the head down, I want this to be very descriptive as this will be a main character of mine!
Wind's eyes are a violet, passed on to her from her mother's blue eyes and her father's copper. Her whiskers are rather long and are pure shining white, and her nose is a mottled pink and black. Her face looks like it's been dropped in a vat of cream, smeared with honey and chocolate, dusted with sugar, then topped with black syrup. Though this sounds like an ice cream dish, the incredible amount of color on her face only helps her to blend in more. Her ears are a soft gold and they fade into black at the tips. Her neck and base coat in the same as her face. Her tail is ringed like a lemurs and, when only her tail is seen, many animals have been known to mistake her as one. Her feet have milky white socks or mittens as some might say, and her claws each have black tips. Her paw pads are a soft pink and have miniscule spots of all colors on them. Overall, she is a multicolored calico with a lemur tail. She is also very muscly, though you cannot see it, and she is rather easy to find in water because of her leafy coloration.
Based on this kitten: http://farm4.static.flickr.com…3459900526_428b1ea5a7.jpg
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Wind is a high-maintinence cat with a lot of spunk. She tends to be very excitable and has quite a bit of energy. When angered, she could set even the calmest of cats off, and she doesn't care what anyone thinks of her. Her voice is a sweet one and is normally very calm, and she enjoys singing in her alone time. Wind absolutely loves kittens and can't wait to have some. She visits the nursery often to check for any stray ones that need a mom. Her gentle heart has a huge soft spot for babies, and she actually raised a fox cub she found in the woods with it'd dead family. (The fox's name is Tanu, it only speaks cat since it was raised by one, he sees Wind as his mom and knows he is a fox but doesn't care. No, he's not a goon or anything, he just loves his "mom" fiercely. I asked Frostsoul about this and they agreed that it was ok. I'll be making Tanu's bio soon!) Wind thinks of him as her kit and is very proud of Tanu, and stands up for him when he is bashed by fox-haters. With her strong and intelligent mind, Wind could go anywhere.
---Likes (at least 3):Kittens, food, naps, playing, climbing, Tanu, freedom
--- Dislikes (at least 3):being caged, wars, ghosts, rude cats
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):hunting, having an open mind/heart to new things(Tanu), climbing, Guarding(Tanu, kits, friends, ect.), and leading
---Weaknesses (At least 3):Swimming, digging, and balance(Will train during my rp, so I'll toss on another one), understanding the daylights times(daylight savings, telling the time, ect)

History (8 or more sentences):Rustling Wind grew up with a loving family that any cat would be envious of. Her mother taught her the basics of hunting, fishing, climbing, and ect. Her father taught her more advanced things, such as how to care for injuries and such. Being a medical cat for a rouge clan, he was able to teach her more than regular training. And this helped her out later on. When her parents died 3 years ago, (courtesy of a big black bear that she has held a grudge against since then) she has withdrawn herself from the family area, but found comfort in it again by the time she realized that the bear continued to hang around it. She decided against this area and chose a safer, quieter one and raised Tanu, and she fought fiercely if something were to come to close to him, since she saw him as a kit. She acted as a medi cat for a while, helping with any common-place injuries, and had been promoted to full time medic when she chose not to accept. Finishing her extensive training, she had taken place as a op warrior and fought to protect her clan. When she left the warriors, she stayed near the nursery, where she swore she'd have kits of her own some day. She continues to help injured cats but only when she feels the need to, like when the clan is running low on healers.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):This is my third or fourth bio.

Comments (optional): Hope you like it! I'll be finding a mate for her soon.

Meaning? Could she possibly have learned a lot about medicine from a medicine cat and kind of help out? And what do you mean by her father couldn't have been a medicine cat? I'll lower her age to 6 as well.

Alright, but could her father have known the medicine cat and learned a lot from him? Or maybe he was the medicine cat for a rouge clan?

Riverpad looked down at the kitten with sympathy in her heart. It flashed in her eyes for a minute but she quickly hid it; that could get you caught off guard out here.

Alrighty then. Swapping her to a cat that simply knows medicine, and her dad to a medicine cat from a rouge clan!

IC:"By what?" She tipped her head to the side and stared at the kitten.

OOC: I mean that an enemy could jump at any moment. Always stay on guard. =) Oh, by the way, ooc means out of chat, and this isn't included in the rp. IC means in chat, and that part is in the chat. =)

ooc:Ah, ok. =)

I need to make an advanced fox bio but I can't find where they go! Help? =)

But if I want it to be an advanced one.....?

Alrighty then! Thank you guys so much!

Character Name:Tanu

Character Age:1 year

Gender:male

Alliance:Thunderclan

Rank:Apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Tanu is a regular, run-of-the-mill fox. His bright red pelt helps him to hide, best in autumn. His tail has the normal white tuft at the end and his paws are white (they're called "boots" I believe). His tummy is plush white fur and his snout is black, like he stuck his nose in a pile of cinders. The only irregular thing bout him is the peculiar swirl of white fur on his front left shoulder. This coloration is merely a color gene mix-up though, as it effects him in no way possible. He is not very muscly, at least not visibly, but can be rather strong when required. His eyes are blue with golden flecks in them, giving them a sheen of proudness.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):Tanu is a loving, rambunctious kit. He loves the freedom of the woods and the warmth of his "Mom" Rustling Wind. He can get a little rude at times, when dealing with a very difficult cats. *He only speaks cat because he was raised by Rustling Wind, one of my advanced cats. He has a very, very limited fox vocabulary and only knows how to say his dead parents' names and mom and dad.* Other than that, he's overall a very sweet fox. He loves to play in the grass and trees and he is really nimble. He jumps really high and his outgoing personality leaves everyone he meets with a smile. Most cats are a bit afraid of him at first but when they see he's really just like a cat in a fox's fur, they warm up to him quickly. He's very friendly to strangers and if they're rude first he can become a bit defensive.
---Likes (at least 3):Rustling Wind, cats, trees, his pelt, catnip, horses, snow, water
--- Dislikes (at least 3):rude cats, goats, birds, "Loud birds"(airplanes), hunters, loud noises, thunder
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):digging, climbing trees, smell, camouflage, nimbleness
---Weaknesses (At least 3):swimming(though he loves to), his own language(being raised by a cat, he doesn't speak fox!), attention span, hunting (can't catch anything larger than a fawn)

History (8 or more sentences): When Tanu was a baby, he was deemed "Spila" by his parents, Kara and Feler. When he turned a month old, his parents were attacked and killed by hunters. He was found by Rustling Wind, a cat who took him in. She had no kittens of her own and cared for him like one of her own. He was raised under her wing, and she taught him the essentials of life. He became friends with some of the kits in Thunderclan and was always aware of the fact that he was stronger and bigger, being a fox. Since he was only a month old when he was found by Rustling Wind, he can only remember his parent's name and how to say mom and dad in fox language. He doesn't remember much of them except their smell, feel, and sounds. He often dreams of his parent's faces but nothing else. His only real memory of them is when they played with him in the evergreen trees one time. Other than that, he remembers trying to wake them after the loud booms and their cries in pain. The Rustling Wind's voice. He is exactly like a little cat in a fox suit.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): This is like my fifth advanced bio. ;)

Comments (optional): Hope you like it! I enjoyed making it.

OOC: I think I'm back on track now. Night of the Living dead, right? =)

Leafpelt padded out and sat down next to Blazethunder. "It's a wonderful night, huh?" She murmured.

And he was called Tanu by Rustling Wind when she found him.