Posts by Crypticblood

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    Crypticpaw stared over at Hawkeye and narrowed her eyes slightly noticing that when she asked him about how old he had been a warrior for that he looked away. She wondered why, had something happened to him? Or... Perhaps he had some sort of secret? Either way it was really none of her business, so she decided to let it drop with out any questions.


    Crypticpaw expression didn't change at all when he asked the question, she had long ago gained controlled over her facial expressions as was able to mask her emotions. "Well since I've been alone most of my life I decided to see what it was like here." She lied, well it was only really partly a lie. Her father and the cats who followed him had never counted as company to her. Plus it wasn't like they had cared if she was alive or not.

    (aww okay bye~! :C)


    Crypticpaw's eyes traveled around at their surroundings with mild interest. It seemed the forest was a lively place as ever. She closed her eyes and opened them again and was shocked to find everything covered in blood. She stopped dead in her tracks her eyes wide but as she blinked again it vanished. She shook her head and righted herself, what had that been? A memory...? She shivered and pushed it to the back of her head.


    Hawkeye's voice bought her out of her thoughts, she looked straight ahead but her ears were angled in his direction as she carried on walking so that he knew she was listening to him. So this was the reason he had turned his head away when she had asked, made sense. "Envyclan? She mewed with a look of confusion, she didn't think she had heard of the clan before.


    "If she wanted to go, there not much you could have done." Crypticpaw mewed slowly, "She-cats once they have made up their minds are hard to persuade trust me. I should know I am one, but then again that could just be me."

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    Art (c) to me.


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    Character Name:


    ~Minx~


    Character Age:


    1 Year old.


    Gender:


    Female


    Alliance:


    None.


    Rank:


    Loner


    Appearance:
    Minx is a she-cat with many scars that show from her many pass fights. Even with her scars she has a regal, fiery air to her. The color of her main pelt is a pale cream color and she has dark ginger stripes on her on her forehead and one stripe on each other checks going to her eyes. She also has dark ginger ears and makings that go from her shoulders down to her flank.


    The insides of her ears are white and she also has a fluffy white chest and belly. She has white paws and also the bottom of her tail is white. She has two stunning emerald green eyes that are captivating hard often hard to take you eyes off. Minx's right ear is torn in half and she has a scar running across her right eye. Her other scars include ones on her right should and two slashes on her front paws. She also has a scar on the right side of her flank and a scratch on her belly on the left side of her body. Minx also had the right side of her jaw tore open though it's not very big.


    Personality:
    Minx is a rough she-cat with an attitude, she is someone you don't want to mess with. She is a very proud she-cat and she hates the very though of even losing to someone. She is strong and very stubborn, once something gets into her mind, you can bet that there will a a very slim chance that you can ever persuade her otherwise.


    She has a smart mind and is very good at tricking and fooling others and planning things. She has little care for appearances so her own doesn't bother her at all. She has a special hatred for all toms because of her father and despises them with all her heart. Minx is still a young she-cat though so she has a lack of patience and a very short temper, it is very easy to get her annoyed.


    She refuses to listen to someone else and likes to do everything her own way and at her own pace. Try to hurry her along and you'll never hear the end off it!


    ---Likes: Fighting, winning and kits (her soft spot.).
    --- Dislikes: Toms, losing and whining.
    ---Strengths: Smart, cunning, strong, sly, quick.
    ---Weaknesses: No patience, easily annoyed and short tempered.


    History:


    Minx has never known anything such as the thing cats call 'love', she had two siblings, a older brother and a younger sister. She only knew her mother for a brief amount of time, she was a pretty young she-cat was a voice like honey but she neglected Minx and her siblings a lot, not on purpose, she just didn't know how to cope with kits. Her mother was slaughter before her as a young kit by her own father because he was trying to hurt Minx because she had been hungry and tried to take more then what she was allowed to eat. and her mother had been trying to protect her. After that her father had just laughed and then swipe at Minx tear half her right ear off and muttering to her, "Stupid she-cat, see this as a warning and remember it well. That's what you'll get if you disobey."


    Minx was sure to never put a paw out of line after that but her hatred for toms started there. Her father left her alone until her ear healed up. She had a brother but my father killed him while training with him one day. Then the training started, minx was a replacement for my brother since she was the second oldest, the training was cruel and harsh and her father himself was the one who fought against her. Minx however had a much stronger will then her brother though she was young and didn't know how to protect herself properly and so she gained many off the scars that show on her today.


    She didn't get to see her sister much as everyday Minx was trained hard with her father and was never allowed to rest. At night her body ached all over and she was giving nothing more then the leftovers from what her father had eaten. What she caught herself she had to give to her father and she was never allowed very far from where they lived. Slowly but surely she became a skillful and strong she-cat, she still hated her father though with all her heart.


    Minx liked her younger sister a lot, her name was snow and she looked a lot like their mother. She was a sweet she-cat who was set to do most of the hunting. One day though when the cold days came and all the prey had hidden away Snow came back and hadn't caught much. Their father was furious and proceeded to attack her, Snow was not like Minx and it didn't take much before she was killed.


    Minx was shocked and horrified, but that soon turned to anger and she leaped at her father and aimed for her neck, her father swiped at her and caught the edge of her jaw ripping it before Minx grabbed his neck and used to death blow that he had taught her.


    After that she mourned her sisters death and buried her before leaving the place and never looking back.


    Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}:


    I think if you already have done an advanced bio you don't have to do this again? If I'm wrong just tell me and I can add one up :3


    Comments (optional):

    Minx slowly opened one of her emerald green eyes, but winced and quickly snapped it shut again as the sun shone brightly down on her, she waited a moment for her eyes to adjust to the light before she opened both of her eyes. Minx stretched and flew her claws before she slowly rose to her paws, her body felt stiff, that's what she got for sleeping on the floor of the forest.


    Next time to would need to find some moss or something. Feeling hungry she decided to see if she could find something around her to eat. Her left ear which wasn't torn twitched and she narrowed her eyes glancing round as an unfamiliar scent blew towards her on the wind.


    With nothing better to do since getting something to eat could be done later, Minx decided to investigate. She prowled forwards and her eyes narrowed as she neared that cat. Must to her disgust it was a tom, "Great... Just great..." She muttered to herself, "Just what I need."

    oo I would like that, are you free now? I'll give you a pm :3



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    EHHHH?! I tried to send a reply to your message and it says I've exceeded my limit of posting 10 messages per hour?! Your only allowed to send 10 messages every hour?!

    Crypticpaw turned restless in her sleep and her nose twitched, she lay completely still for a moment before she snapped awake her eyes wide and she gazed around wondering where she was and then she remembered. That was right... She was in Thunderclan now. With a sigh she covered her face with her paws for a moment.


    Crypticpaw was a slender pure white apprentice, her ear slowly twitched and her two red eyes peered out from her paws and she detected movement outside the apprentices den. She stayed where she was though and watched as a young she-kit ran over to the apprentices leaving her two brothers at the entrance.


    Drawing herself up to her fur height she stretched and flexed her claws. "What brings you to the apprentices den?" She asked curiously to the two toms at the entrance seeing that the other kit joined by another one was talking to some other apprentices.

    (lol if Lucus loves to love others and be loved back, he's gonna get one heck of a shock with Minx xD)


    Minx's muzzled curled in disgust as she pulled away taking a step back, ick the last thing she wanted was to talk to a tom right now, she despised all toms because to her they were all the same. Her emerald eyes were cold as they glared back at the smiling tom, just but the look in her eyes you could see the hatred.


    She flinched as he bounded up towards her and long to swipe at his face, she saw no even a scar upon him unlike her, who was covered in may scars of the past. A snort of disgust came from her, she hated cats who cared about appearance. Minx stood her ground this time, "Don't come any closer unless you want your pretty face to have a nice scar on it." She hissed threateningly through narrowed eyes, her tail lashing back and forth in anger.

    [size=2]Crypticpaw dusted herself off and shook her pelt, a few bits of dirt and twigs stuck to her fur but she ignored that, she wasn't really a cat to care about her appearance. Her eyes narrowed as one of the two apprentices spoke, asking for her name, she half wanted to not answer him but that wouldn't get her anywhere. "I'm Crypticpaw, who are you two?" She asked both of them expecting for the apprentice to tell her now that he had told him.


    Crypticpaw was new to the clan so she didn't know a lot of cats nor did she really want to. Her eyes turned to the sky as she felt a few drops fall down onto her pelt, so it was raining, that was good, she liked the rain. It was peaceful. She glanced down as the other apprentice there took a few step's towards her, "It was my fault I lost it." She mewed, "I wasn't fast enough."
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    Minx was irritated by this tom, he didn't seem to understand that she wanted nothing to do with him. Her emerald green eyes glared at him, this is why she didn't like toms, they never seem to understand anything! It seemed he was trying to soften her up, she smirked. Interesting... Hmph lets see what this tom has got... But he diffidently doesn't know what he's getting himself into, does he think I'm like any other silly she-cat?!


    She held herself proudly and despite her many scars Minx still have a regal, powerful air to her. Looking at him it seemed this tom was as stubborn as she was, she knew that look in his eyes well. He wasn't going to back down but neither was she! "Hmph, I'm Minx not that, that matters since it's not like I'm gonna be see you again." She smirked.


    (ooc: xD)

    Thank you very much^^ Actually this is something I would like to know, how do I make a link where you click a word(So not the whole url) but it takes you to somewhere?


    I know how to do it with normal HTML but not with the [ ]<-- stuff

    Red eyes turned as studied the tom curiously, she could see that he blamed himself for the fact that her sister had left. She glanced up at the sky wondering what it was like to have siblings.... She had been an only child and had never received any care except for from her mother who she barely remembered and so she found it hard to miss her. What was it like to want to see someone? To care for someone? She didn't know. These emotions were ones that she didn't know very well.


    "No I don't have a mentor yet." Crypticpaw replied with a flick of her tail, "I honestly don't think i really need one though." She shrugged, "But then again I guess I need one if I want to be able to become a warrior." She mewed thoughtfully.

    Minx's eyes left the tom and she gazed around at her surroundings, she quickly calculated the newest escape routes and places where if a battle happened to happen that she could have an advantage from. Minx always prepared herself for anything, even now she was slightly calculating as she watched the tom, his movements and guessing what he might be like in battle. You could never be to prepared, her body appeared to be relaxed but really she was on high alert.


    If there was one tom, then there was a possible he could have some friends around here. Her eyes narrowed again as they returned back to Lucus and she twitched her long busy tail which appeared to be the only part of her with out a single scar. "How am I?" Minx mewed raising one eyebrow, "Well right now I'm not very happy I have to sit here looking at you." She mewed with a smile.

    Crypticpaw blinked for a moment and stared at Hawkeye, well he wouldn't be a bad mentor but did he realize that she already knew how to hunt and fight? She had been taught from a young age on how to kill and survive... Then again it wasn't exactly the same here, he could probably teach her about the clans customs. Her ear twitched slowly as she thought, well it probably would be be better if it was him, since she already knew him so she wouldn't have to go through the stage of having to get to know the cat.


    "Sounds fine to me." Crypticpaw replied as she stretched, "But won't we have to like check with the clan leader or something? I thought it was them who give out mentors?" She mewed looking at Hawkeye curiously.