Posts by sorrelwing

Wolfpaw looked around at all the Shadowclan apprentices. He was glad they were willing to be his friend. "Everyone, have you heard about Snowclan? They're moving." He meowed, hoping to start a conversation.

"Hmm... I'm not exactly sure." Wolfpaw said.

Wolfpaw nodded excitedly. "That sounds great! I'll meet you outside in a second.." He said.

ooc: I gtg to Piano class, but I might be on later or tomorrow. Give me the link to the hunting thread!

Wolfpaw quietly snuck up behind her, and with sheathed claws, he pounced on her tail. "Hi!" He shouted.

Wolfpaw needs a mentor, someone who is patient, kind and forgiving.
He is a great cat who has big, great ambitions

Character Name: Jaguarheart

Character Age: 12 moons

Gender: Female

Alliance: Riverclan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Jaguarheart is a spotted grey she-cat. She is a bengal cat, but unusually is a smokey-grey colour. She has river-blue eyes. Her ears are big and pointy and they are tipped black. Her spots are black and Jaguar-like. Her paws are jet black. She has short claws, but very long, sharp fangs. Her limbs are very muscular. She is long-haired, but she is not persian.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): She is a very loyal warrior. She is always willing to take orders from the leader. She will not take orders from anyone else. She is independant and doesn't like help. She gets angry easily. She strongly believes in Starclan and would do anything for them. She likes adventures. She is hard of hearing at times, but her eye sight is Incredible.
---Likes (at least 3): adventures, hunting, harmless battles
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Harmful battles, annoying cats, badgers
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Long fangs, muscular limbs
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Short claws, easily angered, hard of hearing

History (8 or more sentences): She was born in riverclan. She grew up surrounded by her friends. Her mother died of a serious sickness. Her father died battleing. She trained hard as an apprentice. She forced herself to do better. She got very strong. Before she became a warrior she was told she was amazing. She became a warrior early due to saving a clanmate from a fox.

Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): This is my secound advanced bio <3

Comments (optional):

Wolfpaw got up and brushed the dirt of himself. He opened his mouth to taste the air and crouched down. A pigeon was a fox-length away from him.

That sounds perfect! Wolfpaw is advanced, mainly because I don't like roleplaying with people who don't use proper grammer and sentence structure. It bothers me when people don't use quotation marks; It's so hard to understand them!
So yeah, based on what you've written above, Lizardtail sounds like a great mentor for Wolfpaw. The only problem---Wolfpaw might get on his nerves a little bit. He has a "smart mouth" and he's pretty disrespectful. However, he is a loyal Shadowclan warrior.

Wolfpaw pounced on the pigeon, killing it. He dug a hole and burried it so he could collect it later. He turned to Rainpaw. "What are you looking at?" He wondered.

Wolfpaw gritted his teeth. "Riverclan?" He hissed. "They're always intruding, those mouse-brained prey stealers."

"What is it, Rainpaw?" Wolfpaw asked, padding over to her.

Perfect! My mom is on my tail right now--Science test tomorrow.. So We can start Wolfpaw's training tomorrow?

"Poor lil' guy.." Wolfpaw mewed, sympatheticly.

Thanks! See you soon! I'll message you the link to the training thread.

Wolfpaw padded near a tree and sat down, waiting for his mentor.

Wolfpaw sighed. "It might be annoying having to look after them, but they've been through a lot." He meowed

ooc: I replied to this earlier, but it didn't work o.O

ib: Wolfpaw yawned. "I guess." He said unenthusiastically. He looked around. "What are we doing first? Tour of the borders?"

"Good idea," Wolfpaw agreed.

Why thank you! Is it accepted?

Luxray climbed into the cannon and closed his eyes tightly. "Here I go," It blasted and there he went, spiraling out of sight.