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"This world is deplorable. Cats...ugh... fornicate left and right, get drunk, do catnip, murder and rape. To put it short, sin is rampant. And respect for the Almighty is undetectable. If you join us, we can cleanse you of this disgusting world and save you. You can beg for forgiveness and devout yourself in serving the one true God, the Unnamed."

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Territory
The Undefiled live in a small abandoned church, that lies in an opening of a forest. Inside the church is a row of pews, and an altar that holds a box of rosaries. Their claimed territory is to a large rock to the south, a wooden fence to the north, a cliff to the west, and a pond to the east.

History
The Undefiled was started by Ezra, a cat born in an alley to a neglectful she-cat who abandoned him at the age of five moons. He wandered around aimlessly for moons, malnourished and depressed, suffering delusions and hearing voices. While wandering on a road, he was hit by a truck and was knocked unconscious, waking up hours later. The first thing he saw through the trees was a rickety old abandoned white church. He limped over to it as fast as he could. It looked angelic, mesmerizing. He heard a voice when his paw touched it's entrance, commanding him to start the Defiled, telling him all of it's rules and how he had been saved to lead this group. And the rest is history.

Beliefs and Traditions
In Ezra's first 'vision' from god, he was tasked with a mission; to convert as many cats as he could, and cleanse the world of those he couldn't. Therefore, the Undefiled are innately aggressive, and believe it is their duty to convert whoever they can to their religion. They will steal kits, take over other groups, anything to 'save' as many cats as possible. And if that cat refuses to convert, they'll sacrifice them, believing it to be just.
For traditions, they only have a few so far, as the group is rather young. First, all of the Undefiled wear rosaries around their necks, which Ezra found in a big box under the altar of the church. This symbolizes their devotion to their god. Secondly, every night everyone gathers before the altar and prays, with Ezra holding a service every quarter moon.

Rituals
1. When kits are born, the Messenger will take them to the closest body of water and wash them in it, while murmuring a pray of protection against evil.
2. When a Servant in Training becomes a God's Servant, they will be blessed by the Messenger, who will wrap a rosary around their neck.
3. When a outside cat joins, they will be bled to get rid of their evil while they beg for forgiveness, be cleansed in the closest body of water, and finally have a rosary wrapped around their neck (If they're trainee aged or younger, they won't receive a rosary until they become a God's Servant).
4. Those who can not be saved, and those who have committed great sins will be sacrificed to the Unnamed and their body impaled outside the church on a pole.

Positions
God's Messenger/ The Messenger (1/1) / The leader of the group, said to receive messages from the Unnamed.
- Ezra, played by Jammy[font=times new roman][color=black]

Priest (0/1) / In line to become the Messenger, have role of a deputy

God's Servants (2/unlimited) / Essentially warriors, general members of the clan. Hunt, fight, etcetera.
- Zelana, played by Amber Angelle
- William, or 'Will', played by honor x

Servants in Training (2/unlimited) / Essentially apprentices, become so at 5 moons old
- Convel, played by ♞CherishedGatherer♗
- Teli, played by ♞CherishedGatherer♗

Kits (2/unlimited) / Kits, of course
- Sasha, played by KITTY-KAT
- Asuca, played by StarDust☆〜（ゝ。∂）

Relationships
Mentor-Trainee
- Ezra and Convel
- Zelana and Teli

Form
Please try to be detailed in your descriptions.

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Rules
1. She-cats are discouraged from high positions, as the group is pretty misogynistic and patriarchal.
2. The Messenger's word is law.
3. Those who don't convert will be sacrificed.
4. All members must wear their rosary at all times, to show their devotion, and it is a sin not to.
5. You must be married to have kits, it is a sin not to.
6. A she-cat that has kits when unwed will be sacrificed, and the kits bled to rid them of evil.
7. You must partake in the nightly services.
Plots
1. ??
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Character Name/Gender;;
Smokingpaw/Tomcat
Appearance ;;
Smokingpelt is a young tomcat with a medium-length raggedy grey coat and slanted green eyes. He's bony, but agile and elegant in his gentle step. He has scarring on his belly from getting stuck into a bramble bush as a kit. His face is delicate, with long ears and a soft nose. He has a long, poofy, and soft tail, perfect for a pillow at night.
Personality ;;
Smokingpaw is very outgoing, joking constantly. He seems to never take anything seriously, laughing at anything the world throws at him. You'd think he'd even laugh at his own rolling, severed head. This is a facade, something he'd spill out at you the moment you questioned him about it. He's quite sensitive, finding everything and everyone a bit too overwhelming. He's also very empathetic, wanting and able to understand anyone, and loves to give advice. It makes him feel useful.
Kin;;
n/a
Crush/Mate;;
n/a
History;;
n/a
Desired Rank;;
Apprentice
Sample of your RP abilities;;
The sun was peaking over the trees, warming the cold, musty ground. Smokingpaw had woken up earlier than usual, so he decided to go hunt for the day to get it over with. He had forgotten had beautiful the sunrise really was. When he was a kit, his mother would wake him up to watch it, but he was always so worn out as an apprentice that he never woke up early. He wondered why the sun was there. His mother told him that it was Starclan's light, but he didn't know if he believed that. Perhaps it was something else? Maybe something even greater than Starclan, if such a thing could exist?
The sudden scurrying of a squirrel broke his thought, and he raised his ears, getting into position. Time to hunt.
Do you understand that this is a semi-advanced rp & you mustn't begin RP until approved?;;
yup
Screen Name;;
Jammy
Other;;
nah

Geez Kitty-Kat I've been seeing you everywhere on this board! :)
Your application is accepted, though the priest wouldn't be killed for this reason, as the Undefiled would only kill the mother. And I think the relationship between her father and her would be interesting if he's still alive.

Accepted, Cherished. Until a Priest or a God's Servant joins, Ezra will be their mentor.

Okay, cool. Any plot ideas y'all? Maybe something to do with Sasha

Accepted, Amber and Stardust. I'll make an RP thread now and post it.

Stardust, how do you want to introduce Asuca? Like during a patrol or should she just walk into the church?

Sign up

Ezra lay on the altar. It was here he felt closest to the Unnamed, with a hole in the ceiling basking him in His light, the box of unclaimed rosaries against his flank. He stared at his followers, wondering if his priest would return soon.
He also wanted to know where his trainees, Convel and Teli were. He was planning to assign one of them Zelana as their mentor instead, since she was now ready to take on a trainee herself.

https://feralfront.com/index.p…3.msg88192817#msg88192817

Thanks! So who will his mentor be?

Smokingpaw had been hunting in the forests surrounding the camp for a little while, and was on his way back with a vole in his mouth when he saw Sorrelwind lazing around on a sun-baked treestump. He chuckled to himself, knowing that if he had the audacity to do that when he was supposed to be hunting, he'd be crucified. The tomcat dropped his prey beside his feet, and called out,"Wow, Sorrelwind, you're such a honorable, dedicated warrior!"

Ezra's slanted eyes closed in on Sasha, fumbling around on the pews. Even her presence angered him, reminding him of the first time one of his own, one of the Undefiled, had sinned beyond salvation. Had sinned against him, gone against him. He supposed that little incident had it's upsides though, considering it had cemented the rules of the group and his authority. No cat had tried to challenge him when he sacrificed her mother. Some even showed support, slandering the she-cat while Ezra raked his claws down her belly again and again and again, a smile perched on his lips.

He supposed he ought to think of a less barbaric way to sacrifice sinners, but that way was just so fun.

Still, despite the depravity of her birth, he quite liked little Sasha. Sure, she would never have his respect, but he did find her unrelenting tenacity towards her present task cute. As if she thought mastering walking along those pews would let her walk amongst the Saved in the next life.

He grinned at her, and trotted over. He leaped effortlessly onto the pews and stared down at her, blocking her path. He was about to say something to her when he noticed something out of the corner of his eye, a little kit just outside of the building.

He leapt back off the pews, calling out,"Come outside, Zelana, we have a guest to welcome", before smoothing the soft tuft of hair on his chest, and trotting outside with a smile that was much warmer than the predatory one he had given Sasha.

"Hello, little one, what are you doing here?" he asked the little she-cat, cocking his head a bit.

Okay, cool. Cherished, do you care which of your characters is mentored by Ezra or?

I'm going to be a ghost!!

name: Alfonsina, prefers to be called Alonzo
pre-existing or created?: Created
age: 5 moons
taken from the clan or territory?: the clan
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basic appearance + personality: White, medium-length pelt, with dapples and splotches of black. Her eyes are a pale, reflecting green, often looking quite detached. She's long and leanly muscled, agile. A natural hunter.
Alfonsina is a very aloof she-cat, finding the world overwhelming. She would never admit it, of course, wanting to look strong. She has a hard time with relationships, especially romantic ones, not knowing what to do or how to act. She's either too clingy or too detached. She's also very desperate to prove herself in the clan, wanting to advance herself by any means.
plot ideas: They went willingly, feeling unloved by their mother, and finding Sunclan's life a bit sickening. She might develop an eating disorder later in life, due to the stress of Boneclan.

Faith, do you mind if my character has a bit of a crush on Saerin?

He struggled to keep himself from smiling too much. He was just so excited about this kit. She'd be easy to convert, all he'd have to do is make her trust him. And getting kits to trust you was a piece of cake; or should I say a piece of fresh-kill.

"Looking for a place to stay? Well, if you'd like, you're welcome to stay here. We have some fresh-kill in that building over there," he said, flicking his tail in the direction of the church. He had been about to say that she had to go through a ceremony before she could eat it, but he figured that she would be scared off by that. He'd let her eat under a close watch by the altar, and then initiate her with Zelana's help.

Sure, that sounds pretty interesting for plots. I'd also assume he didn't care much about her mother, considering he knew that if he didn't marry her she'd be sacrificed if got pregnant.

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