Posts by Stormbreaker1999

Oakpaw ran over to the forest and longed for there to be a hunting patrol she was dying to get out of the camp.

(ya i'm part of dawn clan so i can tell them)

Rainpelt turned to her. "Dawnclan" he said his fur standing on end "they've been here and by the looks of it they took prey..." he indicated to the small pile of bones and scaffle mark from where a rabbit had put up a fight a bit away.

(OMSC i'm so sorry i havn't been on in ages recap please? i really couldn't be bother reading two pages)

Raven stared at her "how do you know my name.......?" he asked cautioulsy.

Cinderpelt bounded over to Dewstar "hello Dewstar!" she said brightly "will we be training today?" she asked

(EKKKK! ya it's Cinderpaw)

Cinderpaw watched them ~ohh god~ she thought ~I hope she gets better~ she tiptoed into the forest padding near to where Raven and the kit were "whos this?!" she asked brightly wondering who Raven was and she trotted up to them.

The black rouge lashed his tail frustrated. The last thing he needed was two apprentices from DawnClan giving him away. He looked around "I don't know how you know me, but i don't think Dewstar should see me..." He trailed off knowing they would ask him how he knew Dewstar~ great~ he thought ~just give yourself away!~

Cinderpaw stayed be Destars side. She sniffed Sunfish had been a good friend. She licked Sinfish's ear and stepped back wondering about what had happened in the wood @Dewstar!" she whispered "There's a rouge in the forest, I believe his name is Raven." she said "Has he ever been near here before?"

(how should he know dewstar)

Raven watched the morning clan and looked at his paws. It saddened him to see clan members dying.

(mabey he could have like saved her when she was a kit and they became friends but he was always a rouge and they were friends outside the clan rules?)

Ciderpaw turned to her friend "sure!" she said. Hunting would take her mind of Sunfish and Dewstar.

Raven watched Dewstar. He ran after her "Dewstar!" He called out "Dewstar it's Raven!" he wondered if she still remebered him from their kithood.

"I don't know, but this dosn't smell exatly like DawnClan.......it may have been a rouge." he said

(I play a rouge called Raven in DawnClan mabey he could be connected to the both clans?)

(ok cool)

Rainpelt was confused. What was Shadowsar doing outside the clan.......He set back to hunting the same thought stuck in his head.

(so sorry i didn't post i'm not really aloud on during the week lets just pretend that we're back for my part and then go forward...)

Raven looked at her carefully "I was passing through......a strange Clan drove me towards your territory so i came here" he answered. They spent some time together and caught up. Raven sat down and sighed watching her leave.

A while later he heard her ywols and followed the Clan. Then hereing what it was about he strode out of the bushes in clear sight of the clan and padded to Dewstar 2Listen Dewstar......I want to help this clan and dog hurt me in ways you can't imagen." he looked down a pained look in his eyes.

"If this is about that dog i want to help....I've had dealings with him before..." he said only realizing she was only just seeing the long scar on his hip for the first time" He injured me and killed my sister!" he had a look of pleading in his eyes. He looked down at the ground.

Oakpaw dosed in the thick ferns of the apprentice den. She couldn't wait for the next day. It was her Warrior serimony.

(If i'm allow could she be called Oakclaw?)

Raven padded respecfully to the side but behind Destar. His tail lowered but not trailing as a sighn of peace. He had to streach his back leg every now and again because it had become stiff from not usin it. But he had to be carefull. If he streached it to much it would reopen.

Cinderpaw trotted up to her mentor and spotted Raven beside her. She froze.

Oakpaw got to her feet. She wasn't sure if shewanted to be a warrior. She walked to the fresh kill pile and sniffed it ~We need more~ she thought and trotted out of the clearing.

(I guess Dewstar.....there isn't really anyone else)

Cinderpaw attempted and smile back and went to sit by Dawnfur "who's that?" she asked flicking her tail in Raven's direction.

The black rouge watched Cinderpaw prance away and kept walking beside Dewstar "The clan has grown" he said trying to be light hearted but he was acctually dreading what lay ahead of him. He knew the dog would reconise him. Because for somereason Raven always seeme to be there when the dog had attacked and every time the dog failed to kill him the more it made it want to kill him.

Oakpaw shook of the terrible feeling of the clan's downess. It was not letting her concentrate ~Something must be really wrong.....~ she thought making her way back fast.

Oakpaw ran into the clearing and saw Flickapaw. She dashed over "What happened?" she asked urgently. The other apprentice looked awfull.

(no really he wants to be with Dewstar!)

Raven bowed his head respecfully"I will be a vallubale addition to you clan" he said "for now" he added.

Cinderpaw stared at them both in disbelife "A rouge!" she exploded quietly. only Dawnfur and Avalancestep herd her. She shook her head and made a nest beside the other two curling up. She was seething "why in the world would she let a rouge be in are clan!" she muttered.

Raven made a small nest in a thicked of ferns a bit away from the clan. He finished it and stood there staring at it. He remembered the last timee he had made a nest. It was along time ago. He trampled the nest and lepted into a tree lying on the brance perfectly balenced by his years of experience. Only relizing now that if someone saw the trampled remains of his nest they mightbe suspicious of him.