Posts by _PhoenixFur_

A 5 moon old curious she-cat wandered into WindClan territory. Her glimmering golden fur ruffled by the wind. She looks back for a moment, "never again will I return to the housefolk!" she meowed to herself, and continued to walk away from the human nest, and into the field.

A 5 moon old curious she-cat wandered into ThunderClan territory. Her glimmering golden fur ruffled by the wind. She looks back for a moment, "Never again will I return to the housefolk!" she meowed to herself, and continued to walk away from the human nest, and into the forest.

Dustie, 5 moon old grey she-cat, stood on the edge of the ShadowClan Territory. The cold ground sent shivers up her spine. "I will never return to the twoleg place." The kit meowed to herself,"I will always be wild like my mother and father! No twoleg will take me again!" With those words, the young she-cat made her way into ShadowClan territory.

"Hello JaggedKit." meowed a she-cat from the shadows. "I am DustieKit." she said padding towards the trio of kittens. "next moon I will become an apprentice." Boasted DustieKit, sticking her nose in the air. "To be honest with you, I'de take on a warrior any day! I'm not afraid of anyth-" DustieKit paused, "NettleKit!? what in the name of starclan are you doing?" Her eyes seemed to glare into NettleKit's soul. "Anyway! I hope to get to know you three." Grinning, the she-cat went back into the shadows.

Dustiekit looked up at the moon, her eyes glimmering from the light of the moon and the stars. "Wow," the kit thought ,"Next moon i'll be a fierce apprentice for ShadowClan! I wonder who my mentor will be!" She looked down at her paws, and compared them too the pawprint of a ShadowClan warrior. "If my parents could see me," She began, "They'de be proud."

OOC-Anyone want to mentor Dustiekit?

Dustie was startled by the tom's sudden appearance, and stepped back a few paws. "Well...um..." The she-cat began to say. "I'm leaving the twoleg place to live out here in the wild! Got a problem with that?" She had sounded brave and bold, but inside she quivered with fear. She wanted to run, but with the determination to stay in the wild, Dustie stayed put; her eyes locked on the tom.

Dustie Looked towards the two new cats, their muscles clearly showed through their fur. She became scared, and panicked. "Sh-sh-shadowClan?!? I-I didn't realise! Please D-D-don't hurt me! I've told my parents I would always be wild, never to become a pathetic Kittypet!! I'm stronger than you think!"

As more powerful cats arrived, she started to cry. Dusty closed her eyes, "This is it!" she thought, "This is how My life ends!"

OOC- Pwease don't kill her ♥ :3

Shocked at all the commotion, Dustie covered her face with her paws. "EEEeeek!!!" she meowed, as a cat jumped, and another blocked her. When Dustie heard the words, "We won't hurt you." she removed her paws, only to see the attacking cat picking herself up from the mud. Looking around, she noticed claws had been tucked away. Cautiously, dustie stood up. "Thank you Deathclaw. You've placed yourself at risk for a stupid kit like myself. It was foolish of me to act so arrogantly! I am SO sorry!" Her attention now turned to the attacker who was spitting up blood. "Are you okay?" The concerned kis asked.

Character Name: DustieKit, soon to be DustiePaw, later to be DustedFur

Gender:She-Cat

Clan{if any}:ShadowClan (hopefully...)

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): Kitten? ( I'm not sure of all the ranks)

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!): White face, tail, and paws. Light Grey body, with random dark grey spots and stripes. Big blue eyes.

Personality: Arrogant, Considerate, Determined. Frequent Mood swings. :\

History(Not needed): When the twolegs took her and her parents, she was determined to remain wild and free!

Dustie slowly backed away from the hissing cats, afraid of a fight breaking out between them.

Dustie was startled by the question. "To the leader?" She thought, "Would the clan welcome a loner like me? If I leave, I will be alone and at risk to larger animals, and be exposed to the elements. Well, it's worth a shot." Placing her trust in the ShadowClan, Dustie responded "Please take me to the leader. I cannot survive as a lo-AGGKK!" Dustie attempted to dodge the cat leaping towards her, but failed.

OOC-
D: Sorrry! I'm very new to roleplaying. Please excuse my boring-ness

Dustie hissed, and spat at Blazefeather. "Son of a badger!" she meowed in obvious pain, then attempted to bite Blazefeather's ear.

OOC- Thanks!

Tigerclaw. He's makes my angry! .

I'm only on the second book.

I want to do something in the scientific field. :/ I'm not sure what I want to be though xD

Woahhhhh! Crazy huge quote!!! XD

Chuck Norris Was here. 8)

Dustie glared at the attacker, wishing she was strong enough to have bitten the ear right off. "I am not a kittypet."She mumbled under her breath. Nervously, Dustie picked herself up from the ground; Her eyes whipped around to make sure she was free of other attackers. Her ears shot up when she had heard the name PhoenixStar. "PhoenixStar?" She thought, "Hmm...the name sounds oddly familiar, but where have I heard it before?" Realizing this wasn't the time to be thinking about a name, Dustie snapped back to reality.

~~OOC: Hahaa! Thank you :-[. Your posts are amazing Deathclaw! *W*~~

~~OOC: Deathclaw would make a GREAT mentor! DustieKit is sitting on the edge of the camp. ^u^ I laughed so hard when I read the begining of the last paragraph xD Sorry I don't write much! I'm not skilful like you. :) ~~

Shocked by Deathclaw's sudden appearance, DustieKit jumped up and spun around. "IN THE NAME OF STARCLAN! DON'T SNEAK UP ON ME LIKE THAT!" She hissed, then suddenly realised it was Deathclaw. "Oh! Hello Deathclaw! I couldn't sleep over the sound of... err...the couples. They're making such a noise tonight!" Dustiekit explained, flicking her tail in annoyance. "Hey! Why are you still awake?

I'm such a noob... I've only read one WC book O: (come on book #2! Come in at the library already! I've been waiting two weeks!)

"Hello JaggedKit." meowed a she-cat from the shadows. "I am DustieKit." she said padding towards the trio of kittens. "next moon I will become an apprentice." Boasted DustieKit, sticking her nose in the air. "To be honest with you, I'de take on a warrior any day! I'm not afraid of anyth-" DustieKit paused, "NettleKit!? what in the name of starclan are you doing?" Her eyes seemed to glare into NettleKit's soul. "Anyway! I hope to get to know you three." Grinning, the she-cat went back into the shadows.

^ A sample of my RP talking.

Dustiekit looked up at the moon, her eyes glimmering from the light of the moon and the stars. "Wow," the kit thought ,"Next moon i'll be a fierce apprentice for ShadowClan! I wonder who my mentor will be!" She looked down at her paws, and compared them too the pawprint of a ShadowClan warrior. "If my parents could see me," She began, "They'de be proud."

^Starting a topic/thread

What are your opinions on these two samples? Do you have any tips for a newb like me? xD