Posts by Dewcloud

No problem-!
I really hope it ends up helping :)

Nostalgic was really my focus.
Strickentear is a really really old character, written back in the time I wrote one-liners [so months ago.]

No, definitely point out any of my grammar or typos. When I write, I only look at the keyboard and type faster then I think at times xDD
I really appreciate when you do that. Absolutely don't find it irritating at the least.

When I wrote the post I was imagining the ex-kittypet coming back to his old kittypet home (the place he'd imagine the most beautiful) after the last time I wrote him, so he would be around elder age.

What I was intending to get in effect for the first paragraph, you got pretty much correct. He is an aging cat and just here to remember.

For the second paragraph, I meant to suggest that his body was stocky [which it is] but it came across wrong.

Should I edit it now or wait until you finished the other paragraphs?

And I really don't find your examination level ridiculous. I really want to improve my writing and whatever level you edit with to go into that is brilliant.

[xD that is alright]

Searching carefully for the response to her soft-spoken greeting, the feline was somewhat curious by the look on the kit's face that suggested she was let down. Perhaps the kit had been expecting some other cat? Blinking warmly at the the almost hostile kit, Silence dipped her head with practiced grace respectfully.

"Company," the dainty red tabby replied with a light shrug, her curious gaze drifting back towards the brilliant hues of the sunset, "I suppose that as well-intended as Darkclan is, it isn't Windclan, is it? I rather miss Windclan. Anything up with you?

A warm night gust ruffled her fur, the silver parts almost tranquil illuminated in the ghost of the starlight. Storms echoed in her mind, not visible neither by day or night, always hidden behind shivering thoughts. Energy heated up her dainty paws as she restlessly paced by her tidy nest.

She would die in a single moment if she didn't flee.

Soulpaw found herself content by the cool water from the nearby brook, cooling her heated thoughts. A challenge hovered in her mind the moment her soft amber eyes rest on the handsome tom lit up by the light of the moon nearby.

It would be a challenge to seduce him.
Just not a new one.

No tom was innocent and she spared few more then a second thought besides Shiningday. He was quite a character although she was positive she held no emotions for him other than hate and grudging admiration even if he was rather good-looking.

No, she had to think of this tom instead.
"Hello," She lowered her mew into an unreadable murmur, holding herself in the most feminine delicate way she could. Blinking warmly at him, she dipped her head with grace.

With an exasperated sigh, the she-cat turned slightly to meet the deputy's gaze. Usually trespassers were easier to deal with, this one was on the stubborn side. Her paws thumped irritably on the ground as she sought a solution.

"Hydra, Delicate murmured, lowering her soft mew the slightest, "This kittypet doesn't seem to relent with talk. Maybe we should fight now, we outnumber her. Just to drive her out of the terriotry." Not too much harm, just a little force really.

Nodding lightly in agreement with Hazeleyes, the she-cat's eyes slid up toward the gray skies. As horrifying as it seemed to her, it was queerly beautiful too. Faint shades of gray collides with the deeper ones, all moving and shifting with the flashes of lightning.

Sensing another cat out in the territory, her gaze rest on the kit. Warmly blinking at her, she listened for a moment at the conversation between Hazeleyes and the kit, they seemed to know one another. Of all types of cats, she liked very few. Kits were innocent and much less a pest then Futures.

"That means bad weather," Delicate explained, raising her otherwise soft-spoken tone to be heard over the battling winds, "Like right now."

Her misted amber eyes traced his every movement carefully, taking note of his bold frame and his handsome qualities. She held herself perfectly still, daintily swiping her tongue on her silver hued paw. Titling her muzzle up, Soulpaw's challenging gaze met his.

"I'm bored," the feline stated softly, leaning a little closer towards the tom with practiced subtlety, "Want to... do something?" Her last words ended suggestively. Pausing to see if the cat would catch on, she studied him again.

"Alright," Delicate agreed casually, her eyes shifting with ease towards the kittypet. Taking a note of the cat's general frame, she paused for a second. It seemed like a rather flimsy reason, "don't feel like it," to say when you are clearly outnumbered.

Truthfully, the feline suspected the kittypet didn't know exactly how powerful they were. It wasn't like she didn't fight and hunt with all her abilities or work hard every single moment for the position. Same with Hyrdra. The kittypet was stepping in dangerous territory.

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B U M P

[xD Poor little bug *sniffles*]

"Monsters, huh?" Her bright blue eyes glinted with laughter. Instinctively dodging backwards as the kit suddenly flew at her, she purred in amusement as he got up.

"If they're your type of monster, I'm not afraid," Intricatepaw teased, blinking warmly at Vitalkit.

Wrinkling her nose disdainfully, her expression cleared before he might've noticed. She prefered the charming type to the arrogant types, but at least this one was easy. Even if he did have a problem with proper language.

"What do you think?" She teasingly replied, this time pressing up to him the slightest. She doubted he would need anymore hints.

Only moons of keeping her guard up and eyes completely passive kept her from snickering at the tom. It was completely amusing how insecure he was. Apparently the big bad boy wanted to feel he did it himself. He wasn't the first one she did, just the most willing and now rather amusing one.

Taking a step forward just slightly, she blinked warmly up at him. He seemed to prefer her delicateness she had pulled of earlier. "Just looking for a little fun," She replied easily.

Hey Piano,

*huggles*

[one] Maybe its a misunderstanding. Slightly optimistic for me to say so, but you can hope it is. Talk to him about it, see whats up. If its clear that he is definitely lying and you aren't missing any variables (I really hope not) just go ahead and tell him that you aren't going to Florida. Your mum'll back you up if must. Everybody makes mistakes so just hopes he stop.

If its to hard to talk to him about it, just text or email. Its always easier to put things into words.
Hope this works out <3

[two] It isn't necessarily cancer. Talk to her about it, beg her to check it out if you're really worried. Don't make a medic appointment without asking her unless its your last option, it might seem like betrayal to her and might make a huge break in your parent/kid relationship. But if you're really worried, and she absolutely refuses to, then go ahead and do it if you must.

[three] No one does notice when you're working hard and its hard. That sucks but its reality. Just remember, I know you're prolly trying your best. *hugs*

[four] If you wan tot save even a little of your relationship, you've got to confront her. Take a few friends you definitely trust and confront both of them, same time or separately your choice.

I hope this helps!
<3 Wisty

I was roleplaying with one of the CA's when I first saw the leaving thing. I was worried, so I immediately haunted their threads, a bit confused not to see leaving threads. An hour later, same hting again. Making the, "hey, they're both CA's" connection, I check out the staff list.

Yep, I was worried. I PMed the one I originally saw the leaving thing on, who told me it was a joke. So I wasn't really worried long.

I don't really blame you guys xD If I was a CA, I'd probably be doing it myself.

I know its just a joke, mistakes happen ^^

It hadn't been much of a surprise when the apprentice suddenly pinned her back. She could feel his weight on hers, and she purred warmly at him.

"Are you?" She inquired, carefully placing a paw on his chest.

[sorry: low muse]

She took a moment to reply, choosing to study his silver-blue eyes. Everything was still but them. They must've looked odd in that clearing under the moonlight.

"Soulpaw," She said simply.

Got it ^_^

I wasn't sure if I should put in welcome mat as cats can't... read xD

Yep, I meant disconcerting. ^^

I figured the cat might have trouble figuring expressions on the man's face. That is why I said distorted, so anyone can reasonably assume its fear or anger or some negative expression along those lines c:

For the last paragraph, why would it be welcome silence instead of welcomed silence out of curiousity?

one:fifty
Her paw dabbed the water, squealing as the surface of the water broke. Hypnotizingly rippling, the sun lit up the shifting waters. She was regretting coming. Exactly why did she agree? Oh, yes, because she was bored. She was deathly afraid of water.

Fearful green eyes drifted towards the damp swimmers. Looking up with interest, she grinned, "A tie, huh?"