"Bramblepaw!" Mistypaw yelled. "Don't move! You'll only bury yourself!" She hoped her friend could hear her! If she clawed at the dirt she'd tire herself out and run out of air faster, but she didn't mention it, in case that only would induce more panic. The fluffy Apprentice grabbed Bramblepaw's back foot in her teeth and pulled, hoping to loosen her enough to grab onto her scruff
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[img width=339 height=510]http://www.sobi.org/photos/Cat…TopSpot/AthensCat_091.jpg[/img]
NAME- Duststorm
FUTURE NAME(S)- unknown
PAST NAME(S)- Dusty/Dustkit/Dustpaw
AGE- 53 moons (4 1/2 years roughly)
RANK- warrior
BACKUP RANK(S)-
LOOK DESCRIPTION(one sentence like the ones up there^) solid gray brown tom with green eyes
MOTHER- rouge named Mollie
FATHER- unknown
SIBLING(S)- kittypet named Fey
CRUSH(S)- none yet
MATE- none yet
PAST MATE(S)- none
KIT(S)- none
OTHER- Ivy -
(I love her)
Frogpaw twitched his whiskers. Usually he hated when cats laughed at him but Toad was so sweet, he didn't mind. "Well it's tradition. Clan names are a symbol of your rank and skills. Apprentices have 'paw at the end of their names to show that they are still training. When you complete your training, you earn your warrior name." He explained, hoping she understood.
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Mosspaw had a spring in her step the whole way from her mentor's compliment. She couldn't clear fallen trees as easily as the older cats, but she had enough energy to figure out how to maneuver and still catch back up. Her gold eyes narrowed as she scanned the forest for any prey. Faint scents tickled her nose but Redwing was leading the patrol so she couldn't stop until the warrior's command.
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Apprentice: Petalpaw
Love Interest: None
Kits: None
"Good," he praised his apprentice. A faint scent of the breeze dampened his pride. "I smell rouge. It might be stale but be prepared..." The tabby followed the breeze towards Pricklestep.
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(I can maybe! Also i forgot who we said his mentor would be?)
Frogpaw lowered his tail. "Actually, Frostbreeze said it would be a while. It'll be another season I bet. Everyone's too focused on the Clan right now to worry about the apprentices. But it's okay I guess. I mean I understand why..." He sighed and sniffed around the tree roots for a dry pocket or an abanoned fox den.
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[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] personality
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Past Name(s)» Cloudkit/Cloudpaw
Current Name» Cloudpelt
Future Name(s)» Cloudpelt
Gender» Male
Age in Moons» 42 moons
Rank» warrior
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Positive Persona» He's very patient and understanding. He forgives easily and tries to see the best in others. He's loyal and trustworthy. He enjoys helping others.
Negative Persona» He can often be too chatty and always imputs his opinion, even if no one asked. He thinks he knows what to do all the time and this can be bothersome. He is too relaxed on things such as border skirmishes and can tend to let cats take advantage of his kindness. He doesn't know when to put his paw down.
Likes» cool breezes, first snowfalls
Dislikes» maggots, cranky elders
Disorders» none
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] love story
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] appearance
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Past Relations» none
Crush» none yet
Mate» none yet
Kits» none yet
Parents» deceased
Siblings» Riverripple
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Breed» tabby mix
Appearance» {4+ sentences} Cloudpelt was named after his pale gray fur. His fur is long and soft, unlike his sisters. He has a feathery tail which mutes his stalking, helping him be a strong hunter. He has dull green eyes which show his kindness.
Eye color(s)» A light and faded green color
Fur Patterns» pale gray tabby
Fur Length & Color» Long soft gray stripes on slightly dark white fur
[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] history
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]History» {Optional} clanborn
Origin» clanborn
Belief» Starclan
Past Rank(s)» kit/apprentice
Future Rank(s)» warrior
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Screen Name»trash goat
Activity» 6/10
Muse» 7/10
Plot Ideas» answer here
Roleplay Example» high positions only
Other» answer here
[img width=510 height=288]http://media.mnn.com/assets/images/2014/01/low-tail.jpg[/img]
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] introduction
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px] personality
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Past Name(s)» Riverkit/Riverpaw
Current Name» Riverripple
Future Name(s)» Riverripple
Gender» female
Age in Moons» 42 moons
Rank» warrior
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Positive Persona» {4+ sentences}Like her brother, Riverripple is friendly and social. She loves to be involved with the clan on a personal level, from the youngest kit to the crankiest elder, and the most tired apprentice. She cares for everyone like her family. Even the cats she doesnt like, she treats with respect
Negative Persona» {4+ sentences} She has no sense of boundaries and doesnt understand that some cats jsut like to be left alone. Shes always sticking her nose in where it doesnt belong and gets upset when it bites her in the butt. She takes everything personally. A lot of her self worth is based on how other people like her
Likes» playing with kits, gossip, and warm nests
Dislikes» rain, bossy cats, and tough prey
Disorders» none
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px][align=center]love story [fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px][align=center]appearance [fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Past Relations» answer here
Crush» none
Mate» none
Kits» none
Parents» deceased
Siblings» Cloudpelt
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Breed» feral mixed tabby
Appearance» {4+ sentences} shes a stocky warrior, which makes her a good fighter. Shes big for a she-cat but still smaller than most of the toms. Her short fur is always well groomed and she keeps her claws sharp as possible. She has sleek fur, unlike her fluffy brother Cloudpelt
Eye color(s)» yellow
Fur Patterns» marble tabby
Fur Length & Color» short and light and dark gray
[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px][align=center]history [fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 20px; width: 200px][align=center]conclusion [fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]History» {Optional} Clanborn
Origin» Clanborn
Belief» StarClan
Past Rank(s)» kit and apprentice
Future Rank(s)» queen and elder possibly
[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; bordercolor=transparent borderwidth=2px; overflow: auto; height: 200px; width: 200px]Screen Name» Trashgoat
Activity» 6/10
Muse» 7/10
Plot Ideas» answer here
Roleplay Example» high positions only
Other» answer here
DONE FINALLY
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"I'm sorry! How deep is the hole? I'll dig you out," Mistypaw didn't want Bramblepaw to slide further so she'd have to dig fast.
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Duststorm||Warrior||Male
OOC--- recap?
IC--- Duststorm woke up n his nest. Faint light filtering through the den told him he slept into the late morning. The brown furred yawned and sat up to wash his pelt.
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Mistypaw hesitated, hoping Bramblepaw was right. It could be a fatal mistake possibly. "Okay," her voice shook as she released Bramblepaw's leg.
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((Birchstep is also open for an apprentice too))
Badgerfoot heaved herself to her paws. "I should go for a walk. Swiftcloud said it is still important I stay a little active. Do you want to come?" The queen asked Cherrystep.
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Apprentice: Petalpaw
Love Interest:
Kits: None
Palestripe crept, following the scent. "A cat has passed through here very recently," he confirmed in a whisper. The paw prints through the thick snow could have been anycat's but the scent was not one of a clan cat. And it was fresh.
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Apprentice: None
Love Interest: Frostpoppy
Kits: None
Owlfur sighed. "You're right. And we have to stay strong. No better to keep moral up than by going to bed with full bellies." He brought the topic back to hunting. "Sorry for getting depressing there."
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I think they were just saying a cat of a younger age couldn't be so incredibly skilled (which you addressed by aging him up which worked fine?), and just for plot purposes to wait to unleash any more evil cats? I don't think anyone tried to tell anyone what kind of characters to make?
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OOC- thank you!
IC- Duststorm padded out of the warrior den. His fur slick from his grooming. The brown tom's stomach growled and he thought about eating. Surely by now all the cats would have had their chance for prey and a hunting party would be out. He grabbed a squirrel and sat in the shade to eat.
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Frogpaw stared at her, taken aback by her anger. "The only thing Frostbreeze think's I'm capable of is dragging vines across the territory." He messed grudgingly. He found an old badger set, the scent was so stale it must have been a cycle of seasons since one had last lived there. He looked at Toad over his shoulder, "and it's Frogpaw. I might not be a warrior but I'm still a Clan cat." His tone was light and his amber eyes sparkled.
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Badgerfoot purred. "Of course! The more the merrier!" The queen stretched out each of her legs painfully slow. "Swiftcloud says I've got another moon but I think it's got to be sooner than that!"
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Frostbreeze shivered in the water. "Graywing? I don't think this is going to work," the black and white deputy sighed.
Frogpaw froze and looked at Toad. "Why shouldn't I be nice to you? I'm not being disloyal."
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Badgerfoot twitched her whiskers. "I know! I can't wait! I love kits I've always wanted to be a queen."
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BrightEye helped drag the clutter form the storm out of camp. Two leg rubbish had blown in. Shiny smooth leaves with brightly colored markings where scattered. "Twolegs..." The pale ginger Tom growled, picking up the wrappers in his mouth and walking out of camp.
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Apprentice: Petalpaw
Love Interest: None
Kits: None
Palestripe looked at his apprentice. "We find out his plan, and either take him back to camp or chase him across the border."
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Apprentice: None
Love Interest: None
Kits: None
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