Posts by JasperClaw

Firestorm looked into the sky, seeing large clouds. He laid down on the path Dreampool and he was on.

"Oh, okay. See you soon Dreampool." Firestorm stood up. He licked Dreampool's muzzle gently and dashed off.

It was BloodClaw. He saw the female run off. He marked the area as his and padded off to join Frostbite, Dragontooth, and RigidSnarl.

Streampaw padded around, bumping into Comfreyrunner. "Hi there!" She said cheerfully. She smiled from ear to ear. Her inner ear lobe was missing. Streampaw looked at the other members of the pack then at Comfreyrunner. "Who are you and what's your rank?" Streampaw asked.

FrostBlood walked around the camp, looking at the tall trees. He was a scout, so he kept lookout. He twitched his tail as he sat on a rock.

WhiteStripe was stalking caribou. He flickered his tail at Ashclaw who was behind him. Ashclaw circled the lone caribou from the back. WhiteStripe lunged forward and loud bark. Ashclaw was up on the caribou's back, biting at it's back. WhitStripe bit the Caribou's leg and pulled, flipping the caribou over. Ashclaw did a flip before landing on the ground on her side. She quickly got back up, looking at WhiteStripe. He took the lead in bringing the caribou back to camp.

WildStar looked around for the apprentices. Streampaw was aloud to stay up because she was a older apprentice. She had found Thunderpaw, Fallpaw, and Lonepaw. She told them to head to bed if there was nothing to eat if AshClaw and Whitestripe didn't manage a kill.

BloodClaw heard the howl. It sounded like a wolf from Jadepack. He growled and ran towards the howl. He stopped, seeing SpiritMoon. He lunged at her, fangs showing out and eyes bright yellow.

Streampaw was amazed. "Really? Cool! I must be Fallpaw's Mentor. You are so lucky." She smiled at Comfreyrunner.

Soon, the other 3 members of the Outcasts Pack arrived. They snarled, coming in behind BloodClaw. FrostBite sneaked around SpiritMoon and pounced on her.

RigidSnarl barked loudly, sending himself flying at SpiritMoon. He clamped his jaws shut on SpiritMoon's paw.

BloodClaw was 6 feet away from the fight. He quickly stood and trotted over to the fight. He sat on a rock, watching.

He felt like this was too much for the she-wolf. "Stop!" He howled. He jumped off the rock and padded towards the hurt female. He helped her up and looked at the other 3. BloodClaw whispered something towards them and they wagged their tails. "Sorry, they're just a bit...pushy sometimes whenever someone is on our territory." BloodClaw said. "You know, I think we will need to keep you for "certain" reasons.." He sinckered slightly. The wolves smirked, looking at eachother.

OOC: That could work.

"It's not that important really, It's just that we've been missing out on mating season. But anyway... your the first female on this territory." BloodClaw said calmly. He swished his tail. "Can you walk?" He said, sounding concerned.

BloodClaw jumped in front of SpiritMoon. "You won't be going anywhere anytime soon." He snickered, smiling at SpiritMoon. His tail swished and he circled SpiritMoon.

BlackClaw and the other 3 wolves smirked at SpiritMoon. The 4 four took SpiritMoon to their den, feeding her so she can walk without much pain.

WildStar hoped that SpiritMoon will come back. She had no idea what had just happened. WhiteStripe and Ashclaw came to sit by her. "Don't worry WildStar, she'll come back sooner or later." AshClaw said.

FrostBlood stood up on a rock, watching over the pack. There was no other Scouts than him, and his rank meant something to him. He was to protect his pack from any threats. FrostBlood stared up into the night.

StreamPaw was still showing Comfreyrunner around so that he could get use to the camp.

Fallpaw laid in the den asleep. She awoke and looked out of the apprentice's den, looking at Thunderpaw and Lonepaw, her two siblings. She wandered out of the den, stretching.

"Your welcome, Comfreyrunner. Oh, and Fallpaw just woke up. You might want to go talk to her about you being her mentor." Streampaw said, looking over at FallPaw then back up at Comfreyrunner.

WildStar became more worried about SpiritMoon everyday. She was unaware of what had happened. She called for her Beta, Fading Shadows. "Go find AshClaw, WhiteStripe, FrostBlood, and GoldenPelt. We're going on a Search for SpiritMoon. We probably won't be back for days so I need you to be in charge until we get back. Can I trust you?" WildStar said, smiling slightly. But her smile had faded when she looked out into the Outcast Lands.

BloodClaw and the others we're making SpiritMoon work for them. Even having a bit of time with her. The Outcasts we're pure evil but WildStar had a plan, well sorta.

BloodClaw stood over SpiritMoon. "It's your turn with FrostBite..." He growled, turning away as FrostBite came up to SpiritMoon. He smirked slightly and laid down next to her.

FallPaw came trotting up to Comfreyrunner. "Hi!" She said happily, sounding hyper and energetic.

WildStar looked towards ThristleStar. "She's mates with BloodClaw?" She seemed bewildered. Her tail swished. To WildStar, this was unbelievable. But she had understood. "Okay then," She said. "There are no pack right against being mates with an Exiled wolf." She looked at WhiteStripe, AshClaw, FrostBlood, and FadingShadows and shook her head slowly.

BloodClaw growled. "Fine, one more night here and your free to go..." He grumbled, looking at FrostBite.

FrostBite slowly nodded and stood up, glaring at BloodClaw for a moment then continuing to pad away from SpiritMoon. He certainly didn't seem to like BloodClaw at all. He looked pretty sick of him.

Fallpaw looked up at Comfreyrunner, smiling. "Yes, I am Fallpaw." Her tail was up and wagging about. Her ears twitched lightly.

WildStar sighed, "I'll miss her too..." She frowned, looking away almost. She got up and padded to High Rock, howling for the others to join in on the latest meeting.

OOC: Yes, ThristleStar can be up on High Rock as Alpha Male. And SpiritMoon, BloodClaw said in quote: "Fine, one more night here and your free to go..."

IC: FallPaw heard her leader's howls. "Oh, see you later Comfreyrunner, a meeting is in place!" She said, bounding off.

WildStar waited for everyone to come to High Rock. She looked over at the gathering crowd below her. The wind was blowing in from the southwest, and the sun was starting to set. WildStar sighed and looked around.

FrostBlood sat patiently beside ThunderPaw and LonePaw. The crowd was chattering with anticipation. They couldn't wait till their leader speaks of the news, Old News, Old businesses, New businesses, and Seasonal Feedback. And what was going around inside the pack.

BloodClaw snapped at SpiritMoon. "Nope!" He laughed and crept out of the den, leaving FrostBite with SpiritMoon.

FrostBite snarled. "I'm just about sick of BloodClaw!" Frostbite exclaimed after BloodClaw was good kilometer away. He sat at a corner of a den, swishing his tail in anger. "Maybe, SpiritMoon, you could sneak out of here unnoticed..." He'd insisted.

FrostBite stood and went over to SpiritMoon. "For your own health... you need to go and now." He sounded serious. FrostBite looked out of the den and into the setting sun.

"You just don't understand don't you? Your pack misses you dearly. And I even guess someone in JadePack likes you..." FrostBite said, sitting beside SpiritMoon. He was trying to sound as convincing as possible.

Character Name:Duskfeather

Character Age: 19 Moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: Of No Clan

Rank: Experienced Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Duskfeather is a brightly marked orange she-cat with a pale underbelly. Her paws a white and underneath, her paw-pads are pink with a mixture of paleness. Duskfeather's strong and muscular frame, long, willowy legs and large paws carry her far on long adventures, treks, or simple moving territories. Duskfeather also has large dark green eyes. Her fur is silky, but short with a long, graceful tail. She only contains one scar that is slowly healing on her left shoulder.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Duskfeather is weary of others for those who cross her path. She's as curios as a kit looking for adventure or just trouble. Duskfeather acts like any other cat would act. She is loyal, fun-loving, and somewhat kind. Despite her looks, she's rude and disrespectful to others and you wouldn't choose her to tell your secret, because she'll tell someone else. She is also aggressive yet protective over who she loves.
---Likes (at least 3):Toms, Open Spaces, Night time
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Water, sunlight, rainy days
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Flexibility, brute strength, a lot of stamina, speed, and Fighting/Hunting
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Scenting, Hearing (Not Deaf though), Sight (Not blind but can see 5 kilometers away)

History (8 or more sentences): Duskfeather came from a twoleg family. She was abandoned on the streets of Twoleg Place. She was injured, helpless, and defenseless. She grew up with her brother, Northwind. Northwind taught her skills and moves that she'll need for survival among the fittest. DuskFeather seemed to always care for her brother, in sickness and in health. She risked every part of her fur for Northwind's life. Duskfeather protects her brother with all her might and so does he. She had been recently winning fights against Northwind. And she felt proud at how much work she had been putting into her efforts to keep herself and her brother strong.

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Character Name: Northwind

Character Age: 24 Moons

Gender: Tom

Alliance: Of No Clan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance (6 or more sentences): Northwind, a strikingly handsome silver tabby with brilliant grey markings. Starting as stripes. His fur is short, but like his sister, Duskfeather, he has a fluffy, gracefull, long tail. Northwind has a broad face with blazing blue eyes. His ears are large also. He can hear very far away from where he stands here and there. He has a strong, muscular, body and muscular legs. His paw pads have silver covering on the bottom of them and crystal clear claws that are sharp as razors and poised to strike. He has a unusual sharp canine so the point sticks out of his mouth. He has a small scar on the base of his tail from the play fights that has suddenly went overboard with his sister.

Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Northwind is strong and brave like every tom should be. He has the fur to take on anyone who dares to hurt his sister. Although he's a bit flirty at the touch. He is loyal and nice, but sensitive. Mostly he is protective of his sister but is tough in fights. He's sometimes self-secure but he'd rather be alone with his sister than in a clan.
---Likes (at least 3): She-cats, Wandering Around, Trees
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Twolegs, Other Clans, Kittypets
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Brute Strength, loads of stamina, Skills, Hunting, Fighting
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Direction, Social activity, Huge Groups

History (8 or more sentences): He has been with his sister for cycles (Years). Northwind and his sister were abandoned in Twoleg Place without any food nor water. Obviously, he taught Duskfeather all the skills and tricks that every cat needs to survive. It's a contest against the Survival of the Fittest. Northwind traveled alongside Duskfeather, protecting her from unknown dangers. And Duskfeather had been doing the same. Before then, Duskfeather had been beating him at fights. Either he had completely lost it or he was just getting pinned by a she-cat younger than him.

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Comments (optional): Okay, I've edited the names. And I'm working on making the sentences longer instead of choppy. Thank you for notifying my Bio. Let me know if there are any other problems with my bio! :)

P.S Is this good enough? I had to shorten some sentences but instead of making them choppy, I had put them in all in a sentence!

FrostBite whimpered slightly, feeling hurt by SpiritMoons growls. "You don't know how much your pack misses you! And they want you in their pack, we were exiled for something we did." He said loudly as SpiritMoon ran away. "You can always tell them the truth, they won't be mad! If they are, leave. Your choice..." He said, getting up and walking to the back exit of the den.

WildStar settled herself down on the High Rock and looked over everyone. "We have lost another member of our pack... It was SpiritMoon. She had choose to stay with the Exiles and be BloodClaw's mate." Her voice kind of cracked after the sentence. "And for the good news, FallPaw is Comfreyrunner's apprentice! Her training will start tomorrow at Sunhigh!" She said in a cheerful voice.

FallPaw was amazed that she was already somebody's apprentice. Woah, I'm somebody's apprentice? Comfreyrunner must be excited! Fallpaw thought, smiling.

"And as for ThunderPaw and Lonepaw, ThunderPaw is a apprentice of AshClaw! And also for Lonepaw, she is a apprentice scout under FrostBlood!" WildStar had announced, smiling at the two pups.