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Jared sighed softly, she had hoped that they could go to the pool and possibly stay there until they had to go to their rooms. Oh well, she couldn't dwell on the negative, she had always been a silently positive, outwardly realist person. The positiveness she thought must have come from her mother, since her father was a realist at best, and mostly a pessimist. But Jared had always silently been happy and always found the good in things, outwardly she kept the appearance of a realist.

Jared realised she hadn't seen Red in a while, not that she was unhappy about that, Red had been, rude to say the least, and hadn't seemed to like Jared or Avahon very much, still, Red was another girl, a human, and Jared could imagine was also intimidated by all of this. Though Jared couldn't pick Red out from the amount of people around at first, she finally found the girl, visually, and watched as the small thing fell down, from what? She had seemed fine and then suddenly she dropped and looked in pain.

Jared tugged Avahons arm softly, before leaving his side and silently running over to Red, what was wrong? She examined Red, she seemed in pain at the very least, but not outward by the looks of it, unless she was hiding some wound under her clothes, it seemed it was inward pain, Red didn't seem to be breathing well or at all. Jared not knowing what to do, bit her lip for one second before scooping Red up and running towards where Nowaki had taken her. She didn't know if this was the smart plan or not... but it was the only thing she could think of.

As she was running, she began to feel more sick or sore, she didn't know how to describe it, but she shook the feeling off, it was probably just her imagining things, maybe because of her nervousness, or lack of sleep, or lack of proper nutrients. She looked around slowing to a walk as she neared the infirmary, was it a smart thing what she was doing? Maybe Red was fine? No she was definitely not fine, she could hear that Red's breathing was off, and the girl seemed to be in a lot of pain. She looked around for help,

Jared shook her head at Marys attempt to help her, as much as she liked peoples attempt to help, she was already at the infirmary, she had been there before, and had a good memory, so she hadn't taken long to get there. Plus Red was not heavy, and Jared could run rather fast, even though she may look skinny and fragile, she was quite strong, or at least, she had good stamina.

Jared walked in the room, she felt very uncomfortable with everyone around, it made her nervous, especially since they were all watching her with Red. Noticing Leif in the room she walked up to him quickly showing him Red, who she was currently holding. Before laying Red down on a bed and stepping back, she didn't know quite what to do now, and she was intimidated by all these people.

Jared nodded at Avahon, and after listening to Leif telling them he would look after Red, she turned and left silently, with Avahon of course. As she left her keen magenta eyes searched out Marys figure, finding her, she walked over. Now Jared wasn't familiar with Mary, compared to the others, who she technically wasn't quite familiar with either, but out of all of them, she knew Mary the least. Jared bit her lip then quietly said. "I'm sorry I didn't listen, I just wanted to get Red to safety." She said, then quickly left to go back towards the training area. Again, the feeling of discomfort and slight pain was starting to become more and more painful and annoying, but she didn't really let any of it show on her face, or in any physical movement, she walked silently her eyes searching for Nowaki.

Finding Nowaki, she quickly went over to him. "Rooms?" Was the one word she said. In this place, she had been made to talk more than ever, back where she used to live, she only spoke with her father on rare occasions, and communicated with her friends (who were all guys) in either one worded sentences, or without saying anything at all.

RSP - THATS A GREAT IDEA! That's so cool :)

also would it be cool if I made a faerie form for Jared? So explaining her 'abilities/powers' and weaknesses a little more? I would also like to possibly do a better form for her anyway, as I did a pretty bad job before.
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Also could people help me figure out 'powers/abilities' for Jared? She is/will be an elemental water faerie?
Or I can change that to some sort of Organism Water Creature, (or water loving creature) (well technically half water faerie but that's getting complicated)

Yeh I won't be able to reply till tomorrow bc

Jared felt ill, and she didn't know exactly what type of ill that was, she just followed behind Darcy waiting till she could lie on her bed, or maybe a bath, yes, a bath would be brilliant, though she could fall asleep in a bath... Jared shook her mane of hair and silently sighed, wincing for no paticular reason, she silently just wished that they'd be at their rooms any second now...

Finally they happened upon their rooms, Jared didn't care at this point what her room looked like, what she was doing here, or what transitioning meant, she just wanted to get into her room, be alone, and relax. Jared smiled at Avahon before slipping into her room and shutting the door, seeing a bath, already made she almost felt like crying, but forced herself not to.
Where were all these emotions coming from? She couldn't tell, she was getting more sore but she just kept ignoring it.

Jared stripped off and slipped into the hot bath, and immediately felt 1000% better. Since she was tall she couldn't slip completely under the water, and her knees topped out of the water uncomfortably, but she didn't care. She closed her eyes, and lay back, and like a light switch, turned off. Falling asleep, or passing out, she didn't know herself.

Jared woke up a few minutes later, and got up, getting dressed into some sort of robes that were in the room, she flopped onto the bed and properly passed out this time.

(sorry post sucked I just woke up)

Ok I've re done my form but I still need help with abilities/powers

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Ok that's a good idea Kaju, but at first she won't understand how she's actually making water, she will probably think that she's just creating it, but she's really taking it from everywhere?

Yeh, that's why I changed the water breathing part, but maybe after time Jared can start creating water properly. :)

Yeh I did that too Rome, and it's weird...

If I ever left a thread it's because it either died, or I had to leave, and I told the thread I was leaving.

Those are some cool ideas! Dude I'm totally gonna put them in the form, let me just go edit it XD

Edited it :P Thanks for the ideas :)

Ooh yeh, if she's too overpowered can you guys go check the form and see which ones to maybe tone down, or take away from her?

Though most of them I have said would tire her out, or she hasn't got complete control, or she would have to be seriously trained to do, because I didn't want her to be op (though she is a rare elemental water faerie which in the first post was said to be more powerful but I didn't want to make her too powerful :/)

I didn't say she would be op, I was just pointing out that the first post did say they would be more powerful :/

I have limited them, Plus Jared is probably one of the weakest when it comes to strength, and she has extremely weak skin, so I did put some big weaknesses in there

Also does anyone else have any interesting weaknesses that she could have? LIke... water doesn't go well with electricity so maybe if she ever get's an electric shock or something it could possibly stop her powers temporarily or almost kill her if shocked enough?

I have a small idea for Nowaki (listen or throw it away I don't mind)
If we do go with the idea of him and Jared being half siblings, then maybe the reason he is unknown and she is half water (there can only be one elemental faerie and it gets handed down through childbirth I think but I'm not sure) Is that, her father, is a human, so she only had the water faerie and human blood.
BUT
if Nowaki's father was some dark faerie, or just another unknown, maybe he ended up being unknown as the darker faeries blood was stronger than the water faeries blood?

(I also have other plans for if you think that the half-sibling idea was good, Thanks to RSP for that idea)

Jareds dreams consisted of burning, constant, terrifying, painful burning. Everything was on fire, and as much as she tried to put it out with buckets of water, it just grew and grew. Even though it was a dream, it felt so real, as her chest caught on fire Jared could feel her dream body starting to scream in pain, collapsing to the ground as the feeling of her chest erupted in flames.
Jared woke up sweating and breathing fast, it was just a dream... But... She still felt the burning, her chest seemed to be burning from the inside out! Jared could feel the painful feeling of flames tickling her insides, or in other words, it felt like there was a hot iron in her chest pressing against every piece of her torso.

Jared was sweating profusely, but she didn't want to bother anyone, she just tried to sit up in bed, but her body didn't want to move from its fetal position that it had placed itself in, holding her chest. Again she tried to sit up, but it just ended up making her roll onto the floor, hitting the ground with a painful thud. Jared tried to take calm breaths, trying to figure this out, what was happening?
Then the pain travelled and now it was still in her chest, but had also moved to her upper arms, throat and legs. She wanted to scream out in pain but it was almost as though she couldn't, her voice never really went very loud in the first place, and this burning sensation in her throat was not helping. She was curled up in a ball feeling like she was burning to death.

Somehow Jared managed to crawl halfway to the door, before seeing the now cold bath, water! Yes water would help... Jared tried to crawl towards it but instead sprawled across the floor as her body began to shake, still burning inside, as if all her blood was burning and dying. She needed help, but again she couldn't seem to make any noise, in fact she could hardly breath, but that was not the main problem.
Her vision started to get blurry, to the point where everything in the room swam together to make one fuzzy image, Jared again tried to move, but her body reacted so painfully she fell limp, not having the strength to even move herself. She looked dead, though any person looking closer could see her body involuntarily shaking in pain, the faint rise and fall of her chest.

Since I only have one character I cannot do much if that one character is doing something already sorry

If anyone wants they could find Jared if their character is bored.

Haha thanks RSP XD btw is it cool if I call you RSP? Rock Solid Panda is kinda long :P

Jared in fact, had been seeing hallucinations, she'd been hearing voices, seeing images, feeling sensations, that weren't even there. For instance she kept seeing flashes of light, floods of water, flames, images from her memory. She kept hearing peoples voices, such as her fathers, her 'friends back home' even Avahon, Nowakis and Ronans voices were speaking nonsense around her. She could still feel the burning sensation of being on fire. And because of all this strange noises and visions, it took at least a minute for Jared to even realise there really WAS someone in the room calling her name.

Jared couldn't speak, nor did she want to, as her throat already felt like it had been burnt into ashes. So all she did was nod to this girl, whoever it was, and hoped that she would get help. Jared couldn't even pass out anymore, the pain was stopping her from passing out so she was just feeling pain. It wasn't as bad as it was when she first got it, it had dulled only slightly, but it was worse in the fact that it was over her entire body, and was consistant.

Jared closed her eyes and clenched her jaw, curling into a tight ball, she wished that it would stop, that she could pass out, anything to stop this constant, malicious pain. But nothing happened, Jared felt a single tear drip down her face, or maybe it was sweat, who knew, she was boiling hot, again it felt to her like her blood was boiling inside. (Little did she know, her hidden faerie blood was in fact fighting the foreign faerie blood)

If Jared could've screamed, she would have, as the pain was so much that she would've screamed for hours if she could have, but she couldn't. INstead she bit her tongue, causing blood to fill her mouth a little, and oddly enough, it seemed to distract her from the pain a tiny bit, allowing her a little bit of still painful comfort. All of this happening in only a minute or so since the little girl had talked to her, Jared didn't even remember what she had asked.

Naw Skylars cute :P