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    Welcome to Fadingshadow's RolePlay Guide! Emphasis on the guide part, I am not active often enough to keep track of/tutor other members. So, I hope that this guide will compensate for me not teaching you one-on-one.


    I hope you're aware that it's really simple to roleplay, first of all. So don't get halfway through this guide and say you can't do it, it's just a lame excuse. It gives me a right to call you a quitter who can't take the challenge.
    Anyways, onto my guide- I've tried to make it short and sweet so you can spend more time RPing than reading it:



    First: Building a good character~

    To roleplay at all, you need a character of your own! I oftentimes see others who believe that they have a good character, but upon further inspection, the character has a big fat flaw; they have no flaws, or are considered perfect by the owner. I'm certain that you are familiar with the term "Mary Sue/Gary Sue", which is what I just said- a perfect character.
    Example:
    Nightinggale is an ivory-skinned 15 year old girl who has unmarred skin and piercing berry eyes. She has many friends and those who hate her are dealt with quickly. Nightinggale is usually better at most things than others, which make them very jealous inside, but they still love her.


    That kind of writing right there makes me want to retch- not only that, but most smart RPers will kick you out of the roleplay right then and there. I know I would. Anyways, there are many methods that can be used to change your character from a Mary-Sue to a Mary-Suen't; even if that means just changing one thing about their appearance or personality, it means you are one step further from a "perfect" character.
    Are you starting to get it? I can only hope so. Only intellegent people can find the real idea of a perfect persona- the best kind, one with balanced strengths and weaknesses. If you notice that your charrie has more strengths than bad points, fix it. Nobody here on Earth is really better than they are bad, because every individual has good traits and bad traits to them. Here is an example of a balanced character:
    Jake is a thirteen year old boy who likes extermintating things; he likes pyrotechnics too, basically anything that explodes violently. Jake has short brown hair and hazel eyes, but under his left eye is a faded scar from when a pair of sunglasses dug into his face. He's not very good at reading or academics in general, but now Jake is trying harder because his father threatened to make him take summer school.


    ↑ See how Jake is a lot better than Nightinggale? It's because he has flaws in his character, but some good points- in my opinion, Jake would make a very good extermintator as a profession, since he has fun killing pests. Out of the two, I would be much more tmepted to read about the boy than the girl.
    ----
    Because this is a WIP, it is not finished! To be continued!

    1. What's your favorite anime? Hetalia. I'm not an anime fan, persay, but manga's pretty cool. :3
    2. What's your favorite anime character? Ikuto is pretty entertaining. You know, from Shugo Chara? I don't like watching it, but I like the manga ^^
    3. Do you watch Hetalia YESYESYES
    4. What does France call Britain? The black sheep?of Europe.
    ...
    I know I'm waaaaaayy the fluff late in this thread, but I hardly ever got on here.
    I was all like "EEEEEEEE YAY" when I saw you accept Hetalians, the WC:UT forum also has a Hetalia thread.
    ...
    Favorite character? Germany.

    Oh my fluff, this thread has gotten so many more pages since I last checked upon it...
    Anyways, today my friend was like, "You know what? If you had a shipping, it would be You x Kumajiro! And you'd have a wedding, but only a few countries would come..."
    I can just see it now:
    Me: *burst into World Meeting* Hey guys, guess what?
    Countries: What?
    Me: Kumajiro and I are getting married! :D
    Countries: ._____.

    Chapter 1:
    Upon the upcoming noon of the morrow, the group of 'forumers', as they were called, had prepared the necessities for a woodland hike; fortunately, not one was sick and everybody was able to participate. Some were eager to leave, even as dusk set in that very evening. Others were reluctant-- the thought of walking through the creature-infested forest made them shudder a bit.

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    In the time that the sun had risen, many members had arisen as well. Fruity, a girl with dark copper hair and brown eyes was slacking around and idly conversing with a few friends. "I'm kinda excited about the hike, but I'll have a hard time not exploring like the rest of you. Besides, I'm not the best tree climber."
    The girl next to her, who had bronze, curly hair and brown eyes as well, glanced at Fruity and snorted comptemtously. "C'mon, Fruity, what harm could a few beetles and such do? It's not like we don't have the first-aid items to heal you if you get hurt."
    Although the words hadn't changed her opinion much, Fruity smiled. "Eh... I suppose you're right. And hey, if I get any cuts or scrapes, you'll be the first to know, trust me." The others in the circle joined in on the talk, yet soon enough, it was time to leave.
    Falconstar, as well as Dawnleaf and a few more, had made food for the "adventure"; everything from sandwiches to a Dutch apple pie. There was as much as everyone needed, but no extras. Falconstar checked along the baskets again, making sure nothing had spilled, been squashed, or any damage of the likes.
    Fruity's watch struck 11 AM, signifying that the band had nearly an hour to get to Turtle Rock, which had definitely earned its name. It portrayed a giant, lazy grey reptile which beckoned travelers to sit on its back, and one could partake in all the merriment they wanted. The boulder was just that monumental.

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    Chapter 2:
    The "children", as most of them were, settled down on the cold surface of the turtle after a long and arduous time walking. Falconstar stood up to make an announcement, only for his blue hair to get flaffed about in the wind. After a few seconds, he was able to regain his composture and started to speak:
    "Listen up, you guys! I'm glad that everyone could be here today, because lately a fair amount of members have been sick. However, since that's not the case, I'll move on. I'd like to give my thanks to Dawnleaf, Spottedleaf, and Birchstar; they helped greatly in preparing today's lunch." The others clapped politely, while the three girls singled out simply dipped their heads in gratitude. Falcon sat down and started eating his sandwich.
    Meanwhile, in a small group a little ways away, Cevi, Fruity, Ripple, Phoenix, Terror and Lily sat. Fruity unwrapped her roast beef sandwich and begun nomming slowly. After she had finished a couple of bites, Fruity set down her meal and slipped into Ripple's talk. Somehow, the conversation had turned to England, but Fruity didn't mind; she herself was a Hetalian, as they called them. Ripple's slight raise in voice made her turn and listen.
    "If France even thinks about touching him, he'll get The Safe. And I don't mean my cool safe where I keep Iggy, either."
    Fruity laughed a bit, and decided to finally intervene.
    "Ripple, you've got so many safes, maybe you should start your own business!" The girl with wavy black hair, who was Ripple, looked back at her and smiled. Cevi also had an input--
    "Yeah, and for every safe there would be an England!" They started to laugh. Ripple grinned devilishly at the thought of so many Arthur Kirlands in one place...
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    Chapter 3:
    Falconstar's picked band had continued trekking onward after lunch. Further and deeper they went into the forest, and though nothing was happening, everybody seemed a bit apprehensive. The leaders did there best not to show it, yet even they too felt a slight worried; the map being read appeared of no use anymore, causing mass confusion and lost forumers.
    Already unaware of there location, Fruity worried silently about the forest predators-- any one of her acquaintances could simply be maimed by a mountain lion, a bear, or some creature more vicious than the latter.
    Phoenix, the dark-haired girl, who was walking aside her, spoke out: "Fruity, where do you think we're going? It might just be me, but it looks as if the leaders don't know where they're going."
    "I can't be sure, honestly. And, it's not just you, I was kinda thinking the same thing. Anyways, wherever we're going, we'll find out soon enough, I suppose."
    A slow creak, a heavy fall.
    The sound echoed through the woods for a mere few seconds, but was enough to catch the attention of all nearby. Many had been caught off guard and turned around to scout for the noise. It wasn't difficult, however; there, on the ground, was a young girl of about 13, with auburn hair and green eyes, covered in the earthly debris around her.
    "Stofp! I'lla flay ya if ya touch me, and th'ts a promis!" Muffled by dirt and leaves, the girl's voice was rough and raspy, as if she was angry. At the time, though, and considering she'd just fallen out of a tree, one could presume she was.
    Dawnleaf was the first to ask anything. "Are you okay?"
    Sitting up and spitting out leaves, the reply came: "Yeah, I'm okay, but enough of that. Who are you and what are you doing here?"
    Falconstar stepped up to the plate, and though his facial expressions were emotionless, his words showed that he was a little worried. "Now, let's not be hasty and interrogate each other, okay? I'll go get the first aid kit, if you're h--"
    He was interrupted rudely by the kid. "Listen, none of that matters now. And, since I guess I won't get a straightforward answer from you, maybe the Abbot can. Follow me." She scrambled up, brushed off the clothing, and begun treading on the overgrowth. After a few minutes of quiet walking, she turned to the nearest member, Spottedleaf.
    "Guess I should introduce myself... name's Gremith. Not the greatest name, I know, but at least it's not one of those pricky names like Jessabella or of the sort."
    Luckily, Spottedleaf was able to say the right thing; it seemed as though this girl would do a good beating if she wasn't pleased.
    "Names don't matter, it's what you do that counts."
    "Mhm... guess you're right. And uh, I forgot to ask, but what are you called? Not that I care or anything, but I need to kn--"
    "It's alright, Gremith. I go by the name of Spottedleaf, but I'm not the leader. He is." she pointed to Falconstar, who had been padding to the right for quite some time.
    After Spottedleaf had made quick conversation with Gremith, the red-head slowed to a halt. "Right, then, here it is. Stick with me and don't try and talk. Not that the villagers aren't friendly, but a few of them can be suspicious towards newcomers..."
    The group followed Gremith into the open space.
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    Chapter 4:
    The surrounding area was filled with fine examples of masonry; quaint brick and stone cottages dotted the dry hay field, as well as small concession stands covered by white tarps. Each group member scanned the 'village' as it was called, silently admiring the landscape. Fruity stalked up to Gremith and asked, "Is this where you live? These are the kind of houses I'd like to live in when I get older."
    "Yeah, but it's nothin' special."
    "Are you sure? The houses are so cute!"
    "I wouldn't call them 'cute'. 'Old and musty' is more fitting."
    Fruity seemed even happier at the last statement. "I like old and musty houses... they're just so... quiet, I guess. It's like something you come to love, I guess. But, then again, I've never lived in a cottage."
    Gremith tilted her head slightly, a bit puzzled by Fruity's words. But she wasn't about to show that, and instead replied, "Well, come on, I've got to take you to the Abbot now." With that, she continued on the straw-layered path towards a stone house, slightly different than the others. Meanwhile, the members stood and asked questions of which no other friend knew the answer to, but could only guess. Fruity succame to her urge to go check out the nearest shop, and based on what they sold, it was a food store; she saw things such as apples, bread loaves, quince tarts, and even something that looked like bakalava, but certainly wasn't.
    Meanwhile, Ripple and Red strolled around together, waiting, as Firestarscourge and Icemoon trottted off to a ceramics stand. Everyone else went there seperate ways-- until they would have to gather with Gremith again.
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    Chapter 5:
    "I welcome you to our village, travelers. I am the Abbot Eleren, leader of this group. Although I cannot be sure that you will not bring harm upon our home, I must trust you will not and provide sanction, lest you spend a cruel night in the forest." Falconstar bowed slightly, as he was in the presence of an elder such as this. "Thank you for so kindly welcoming us, Abbot Eleren. But, we weren't planning on staying here, my friends and I need directions back to Turtle Rock..."
    The Abbot stared at Falconstar, clearly puzzled by his words. "Turtle Rock? Please, explain, I've never heard of that place."
    "You've never heard of it? But it's only about a mile away!"
    "I'm sorry, son, but I cannot say I know what you are talking about. There is no such thing as 'Turtle Rock'." It was useless to argue with the Abbot, everyone had decided, so instead Falcon asked about where they would even sleep. The reply was, "We have a large and unused cottage for guests and such, when they come to the village. Though, judging by your group's size, some people might have to share a bedspace." A few of the members looked a little nervous at that thought, not knowing who they'd have to share with, but other members were completely fine with it. The Abbot spoke out again, saying, "It is getting dark, so I shall show the cottage. Tomorrow we will discuss more and perhaps, since you seem lost a long ways from home, could make an arrangement for training." Sakura, an excitable little character, asked, "Training? What kind of training? Like battle training?"
    "Yes, 'battle training' as you may call it. My village is one of peaceful folk, but of late there have been threats of attack from the forest northward." He pointed to a small, crumbly copse of trees in the distance, and continued leading the members to their sanction areas. Fruity was a bit scared, asking, "Cevi, how long will we be here?"
    "I can't be sure, but I'll stick with you the whole way, 'kay?"
    They caught up with the band and opened the stone cabin's crickety door.
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    "Hey, wake up. C'mon, please? Do it for me, pleeeease?" Fruity poked some of the members still sleeping. It was hard for her to sleep in, and if people didn't wake up in a certain timeset, she became frustrated; she always followed a specific morning routine. Many bodies shuffled under the gentle poking and prodding of the strict girl's fingers. Finally, everyone got out of bed, and by now Fruity almost looked as if she'd start bouncing around like Pinkie Pie. Her movements didn't show it, but she sounded estatic when talking to Cevi. "Hey, are you ready for training? Are you? Hmmm? Because I just know it's gonna be real fun!" Smiling at her, Cevi replied, "I'm glad to see that you're excited about training. Who knows? Maybe you'll be really good with the bow and arrow."
    "Nawh, I don't think so... fighting claws seems better to use to me than a long range crossbow or bow and arrow." Lily decided to have a say, "Fruity, I might not know you well, but I can't imagine you wielding any kind of weapon. Not that you'd be bad at it, but..."
    "Lily, I get what you mean. I'm not usually one to get excited, about anything. Especially battle training. But, today, it seems like a lot of fun to me. So, what are we waiting for? Onward we go!" She marched out the door.

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    What do you think of it so far?

    Hello there! I'm fairly new as well, but so far this seems like a pretty good site.
    Although I'm not particularly fond of any genre of music, punk rock is fine by me. ^^
    I want to mention one thing, though, I am a pretty big Hetalia fan.

    Am I the only one here who likes to make fun of DEEN art with others? Since I suppose DEEN isn't competent enough to have the simple capability to draw things right. I realize they try, but honestly, whoever draws the hands, faces, positions, and adds the backgrounds needs a little help!


    You know, I've come to the conclusion that I'd make a horrible fangirl. Besides, no country from Hetalia would probably even like me as a friend... I have an overbite T_T

    My most embarassing moment, that I can remember, is that one of my friends was on the playground, with her other friend, and both of them came over to me {I was sitting in the grass drawing a picture.} My friend called out, "Hey, ____! Hump that pole over there!" So, then I got up and promptly humped the pole... it was so embarassing...