Posts by Kittenkit

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    ~assume that kittenkit is not a kit so that she isn't breaking any rules or anything~
    ~Kittenkit~
    *steps into quest place, blinks*
    Hello? Is anybody there? I need my first quest!
    *voice echoes*

    Hey! This is my first post EVER, so I want critics! How is the first chapter? Do you like it? How could I change my writing style to be better? Do you even like this story? Please, rate me 1-5 stars in the poll above. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read this, so if I get an average rating above 3, I'll write the next chapter. I might even write it anyway, if I like the story enough. Thanks, and enjoy!


    Oh, and my profile picture is a picture of the main character, but in the story, imagine her with icier bluier eyes.






    Here it is! :)



    Fire


    What is destructive
    Yet welcoming at times?
    What is a blessing
    With devastation in its path?
    Fire! Fire!
    Either hurts you or helps you,
    can burn your Clan or save a loner,
    can change the fate of the forest.


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    Welcome to the site! My name's Ryu.


    I've sent you a few virtual pets to get you started! You can access your pets by hovering over the "Pets" button at the top of the page, then clicking "My Pets" from the drop-down list.


    Is there anything I can help you with?


    Thank you, what I'd most like to know is how do I know how much 'freshkill' I have?


    Oh, and welcome, Holly! :)


    [I'm playing as a young loner named Fang. Cause I feel like it.]


    Fang's tail twitched irritably as his pelt caught in brambles. "Hello?" he called to the forest. "I've come for a quest!" He was used to living next to a river, and the forest sounded eerily silent. He hoped somebody would give him a quest soon so he could get out of this forest; his paws already were pulling him back in the direction of his home.

    That's a lot better, I can read it now! It's great so far; I'd like to see what happens next. ;D I've been looking at a lot of Warriors fanfics and other stories lately, and by far yours has the best spelling and grammar. Good job! Rating: Meow out of Pancakes.


    Name: Spottedflower
    Age: 12 moons, new warrior
    Gender: Female
    Type of Animal: Snowferra
    Type of Snowferra(if you are roleplaying with a Snowferra): Carasican Island Snowferra
    Rank: Warrior
    Special Power: Plant feet (grows plants at her feet, she doesn't know of her power yet)
    Mate/Crush: none/Bramblefrost (if that's okay with him)
    Other: fiercely loyal, wants nothing but to be a great warrior of her clan, and have a mate and kits

    Name: Sweetberry
    Gender: Female
    Age:27moons
    Rank: Medicine Cat
    Appearance: Firey, long furred pelt, bright green eyes
    Personality: modest, selfless, sweet, caring
    Crush: none
    Mate: none
    Kits: none
    Other/History: As a kit, she was sickly, and her first words were "berry not sweet!" as she had a berry for her sickness, and she was named Sweetkit so she could always be sweet.

    Sweetberry sighed, looking around the tiny camp, not quite cleaned out yet. We only have four cats, three of whom are not allowed to have kits! StarClan, help us, or we won't survive past leaf-fall! She stared at the stars, but they only glittered as usual. She sadly turned toward her den, where she found Speckledpaw staring at the entrance. "Speckledpaw! Are you looking for something?"

    (May I create a new cat to rp with as well, considering we only have four cats? And sorry about the wait on comments, on schooldays I'm mostly on late)


    Sweetberry nodded, and went to the back of the den to sort he herbs. The supply was pitiful, but then again, it might be enough for the four DoveClanners. Still, she sifted through them, and found that the borage had dried up, and they had no catmint. She still hasn't found a patch of catmint in their explored territory.
    "Have you seen any catmint yet?" she asked Speckledpaw. "We have none, and Greenleaf doesn't last forever."

    Quietkit exited the nursery, trying her best not to attract attention by crouching close to the ground and moving slowly. The only reason she was leaving the nursery at all was because the queens had insisted she met the Clan today.

    I'll make a warrior so we have one. If you make a caretaker, then he'll end up being Junglekit's mentor.


    Name: Featherflight
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16 Moons
    Rank: Warrior
    Appearance: imagine this but older Firey long fur, Amber eyes, big paws
    Personality: fiercely loyal, imaginative, friendly, optimistic, slightly distractable
    Crush: Ripplemask
    Mate: None
    Kits: none
    Other/History: Sweetberry's littermate, tells her everything






    Sweetberry entered the clearing, and went to Dovestar's den.
    "Dovestar! I need to discuss our territory. May I come in?"